XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[LR] This Sucks Fuck You]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well this was interesting, seems abit slow, but telling from the {TITLE} it seems like its not in your best interest lol, but it has a unique sound, i think it should be sped up might sound better in a faster tone or something, , just a thought though, the gap at the end seems abit too long aswell, but other then that i thought it was ok, so some slight changes for improving would be to speed up the tune just a tad, anyways good track look forward to hearing more of your stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
speed it up it will sound much better

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Little-Radiodemon responds:

lol, I didn't like it :p

[Distant Oblivion Loop]

Short but still fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
now this one was fast and yes its a loop i did however you could have made the loop much faster, but it tends to be harder to review loops then anything else, but i do like the speed of it and all the sounds and instraments seem to flow together just right and the speed matches up with them so in those areas its great just wish there was abit more to it, not like a song just a longer loop to it, but regardless its still a fantastic loop, great job, hope to hear more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth and more to it not so short even if it is just a loop

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Step responds:

Thanks for reviewing! Actually at the time I think I was planning on making this a full song but then never got around to finishing it.

Haha I remember being really proud of this loop because all the different sounds fit together well for once :P.

Thanks again for this review, and thanks for all of the submissions of mine you've been reviewing!

[The Barren Battlefield]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this was something differant, has some flutes? and something else wich is kinda neat, and its more of a slow tune wich is ok also, i think it could be speeded up somewhat might have more quality t it, the sow parts just seem off at times, so my suggestion for improving on this one would be a faster tone for this one, but the flute sounds really good in this one, other then that its pretty good and i liked it so notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I mentioned maybe speeding this up somewhat.

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Step responds:

Haha yeah I think I used a French Horn here playing in certain parts with the piano.

I agree that it sounds very slow - I really sucked at making atmospheric songs at the time :P.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Tarantella in D Minor -Re]

Love this tune

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow as soon as i started playing this i was wow this will be added to my faves list, this actually sounds something simular t ghost motel also wich i thought was pretty cool, but anyways to the tune at hand i love the flute and piano and the chime like feel it really made for a cute and quirky song. i like that and you didnt make it too long but just right, seemed very cute like, now normally i would suggest some changes but i really love this as is its perfect, anyways great work here, i will get to some of your other work soon,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be a little longer but to be honest i like it as is.

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Step responds:

Heh, quirky. Never actually saw the song as quirky but now that you mentioned it those chimes do give it a quirkly feel to it.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Stargenx - Green]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm so this is actually notbad at all, its a more softer feel of things, and seems to stay that way, the piano is nice and pleasent but there doesnt seem to be much more then that, i would love to hear some build up from the start to the finish with the ending having a more powerfull feel, but as for what you do have its pleasent and nice, kinda reminds me of something out of a zelda game or something, but anyways a good pleasent tune i enjoyed it, keep up the good work, hope to hear more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned more on the build up it just stayed the same,

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Stargenx responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Mortal Kombat Theme ~Remi]

Nice track

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm now this does sound alot like mortal combat wich is cool because i loved the games and movie, haha great work with the {PIANO} yopu even mixed in your own style with the more softer feel moments then you really bring it up and power through the song so all and all a good theme of a song nice variation of your own style while still keeping touch with the main theme so awsome job there, a nice piece on one of my faves, now as to improve? hmm maybe more darker feel the keys seemed abit on the light side, other then that it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more darker theme to reflect the games and movies. maybe with deeper keys from the piano or something

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Step responds:

Thanks for the review! I was hoping you could check out my newer songs rather than my old ones but I still appreciate the lengthy reviews! I agree that a darker theme would've been nice but unfortunately at the time I was limited with what sounds I could use. Thanks again!

[Pezmobile - Distant Tomb]

Nice fast tempo

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was an interesting track, it started off slow but soon picked up very fast then you had some strange yet differant sounds mixing in here and there and thats one thing i really liked about this one, the beat gets faster and louder very nice touch there, now some harder beats could be installed especially when it gets to be a fast tempo, maybe some hard drums towards the end? just an idea, so overall i like it and an end improving tip would be ad some hard beats in there with the fast tempo so it has that end {WOW} anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice work here adding an ending powerful dominate drum beat might give it that end climax, but all together its decent.

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Pezmobile responds:

Thanks alot dude.

[Echoes in the Wind]

Decent track

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok so i decided to review some of your stuff, now this one really starts off too quiet, or soft sounding even 20 seconds into it its quiet, you should raise the tempo up abit and alot sooner, its a good song even the {SIZE} was decent, so to improve on this decent track you have, speed up the starting and add some loder or faster tempo going in there, besides all that it was decent and pretty mellow for most of it but still has a good feel, so nice job on this one hope to hear more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained needs a higher sounding feel and or a faster tempo, it needs to be spiced up somewhat

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doppler73 responds:

Hey, this is my first audio submission, so i was learning when i made this.

[Dream of Water and Land]

Soothing and pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hey now, this was another good track of yours, it is very soft though, you might want to raise it up a notch, now this is a soft and pleasent feel of a song so i can understand it should be that way, but a little higher wouldnt hurt, its soothing and seems to flow on like in some story like something is sailing away or some sad moment, more of a sad moment, i can really see this being in a very dramatic flash so props to you for bringing out the emotion on this one, can this be improved on? yeah maybe with some deeper sounds and differant pitches here and there, anyways nice track

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As above some deeper pitches and raise and lower sound quality

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Semaphore responds:

thank you very much XwaynecoltX