XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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Great tune here

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow this is pretty neat, it starts out very neat with all the {CHIMES} i think its chimes and some drums come into play very nice indeed, and has just this whole great feel of some battle thats about to take place, and i guess thats you {SUPERSEPH54} heh didnt know, but anyways back to the audio, love how you really build this up and really push it with each and every new tunes, it sounds so familular like some movie i seen or something, another nice touch is how the volume and tone gets better as it progresses towards the end, very well indeed, i am very impressed with this, maybe some of your best work yet to date, so keep on with the awsome tracks and great feel with awsome buildup which was the best part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was all great only issue is when it does build up to the highest point there is some slight scratchyness but that could just be me, and really its nothing at alll.

~X~

Raven-Guard responds:

Thanks for the review :D.

The intro actually has a xylophone, not chimes xP. Although I don't blame you for thinking it's chimes, they sound quite similar.

You're not the first to say it sounds like a battle, lol. Thanks.

Just pointing out that I'm not the only one who made this track. I did the drums, some EQing and helped think of a name, but Darklight did the rest.

Really glad you liked the buildups, we definitely think they're our best. Glad you were impressed by it, and I agree with you about the 'scratchyness' thing. That's me slacking of in EQing *blush*.

Thanks for reviewing!
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Supersteph54

[Powerfull6]

Notbad could be better

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this one was kinda like that last one with the {GUITAR} but seems its more of a {RE-MIX} not sure if this one is on my top lists of great stuff the sounds of mixing in and out is to visable, and kinda just ruins the track there, you should have it mix in and out but so it doesnt hear them sounds, kinda odd i thought, dont get me wrong i like the mix, and like the original abit better, but dont think the mix needs that change with the sounds so visable, well hope the other mixes are better though. as to improve remove that sliding sound somehow.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and lower the sound of the mixing in and out seems kinda odd.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Powerfull5]

Nice guitar

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one sounds familular, cant say where i heard it from but does sound, kinda reminds me something like from {KILL-BILL} kinda though, this is actually a good kicking track i could groove too, i think thats a guitar in there and thats my fave instrament so really nice job on that part, the {QUALITY} is not all that great but its good, maybe a better mic? not sure what it is, but like i said this is pretty good and your best piece of that i reviewed, anyways nice work, make more stuff like this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The quality could be better there was some static with the guitar, not sure if it was the mic other equipment or what but something could be cleaned up

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Creep]

Nice sound/fx

~~REVIEW~~
This was more for the sound/fx of everything, i mean its a good little loop for all that, and i hear a gun being {LOADED} or something, this loop with your other loop that has the gunshot might work very well together maybe you could even combine the two for an even more awsome track or loop in this case, i like the little {SCI-FI} tune even gives it an unique style about it, so nice job there once again. anyways keep up the awsome and unique work., good luck on anything new you may make.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a gun shot along with the gun loading, just a thought though

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah, a gunshot might fit in, or maybe it would ruin the "spooky" mood, give it too much action, IDK, thanks for the feedback though!

[Basicbeat11]

Ad a few more beats with this one

~~REVIEW~~
well you are right it is a simple short, its great as a loop, for my im more into the longer tunes , but as for this loop, it could be part of some action scene i could see, i am really glad to see alot of your stuff being used in flash movies and games so props to you for that, but anyways this was a nice little beat, if i could suggest anything it probably would be to add more beats in with the ones you already got, but thats just me liking the longer stuff, but anyways it was a good beat i look forward to hearing more of your stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few more drum beats would be nice.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Suspense]

Nice end effect

~~REVIEW~~
This one hasa darker feel and with the {GUN-SHOT} at the end, makes for a good loop to use in other flashes, so that was a nice touch with the gun shot, i wouldnt mind it being a tad {LONGER} though kinda have it build up to the gunshot and that may even give a much better end result for flashes and this little loop of yours, just an idea though, but a good one i think, i am even thinking maybe the gun shot should be abit louder aswell. something to try out i suppose, anyways good work on this one, nice end result to.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a more louder gunshot would be nice, and also abit longer in the buildup

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Newer]

Nice and fresh

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this is actually a pretty catchy tune, i like how you gave this lots of freshness and just a kicking song here, i had thought i had reviewed all your stuff guess not, but anyways, this was a good track {LOOP} or something i am not sure if i heard the other version but i will so i can see how it changed and stuff, but anyways this was pretty nifty and {CUTE} so props to you on a wonderful track or loop, wish it was a tad longer. And neat i tottally forgot this was used in a movie i took part in hehe nice work, anyways nice job and keep up the neat tracks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and keep it fresh as you do have

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Undone [Final]]

Awsome quality

~~REVIEW~~
First off great job on the high quality of sounding track here, i was not even expecting vocals but you did and it was also presented in very high quality, so awsome work there, The voice is pretty good, and with the nice tune in the backround it makes for a good flow, a suggestion might be to speed up the tempo of the vocals at times, sometimes when its going slow you can hear some skips or something, but thats nothing really, i liked this track and good vocals, with nice backround music, so nice job there, bbut like said before, maybe speed up the temp just abit, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested speeding up the tempo abit. other then that its pretty awsome.

~X~

djnet responds:

Thanks...im a sucker for slow emo songs...lol

[Whatever...]

Good guitar sounds

~~REVIEW~~
Here was a good kicking track, i loved the feel of this with the "DRUMS" and even guitar, and fantastic job on the guitar, it seems at times you can hear some scratchyness, but overall it was a pretty good sounding track, you really gave this some vibe, and i could really see myself being there at some concert so nice job there and props to you on a great piece, now if i can help on suggesting any improvments, i would suggest possibly, have some vocals so it really is complete, also look into any of the scratchyness i heard, anyways nice track here, Hope to hear from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some scratchyness could be looked into, and maybe adding some vocals could make it more complete

~X~

carlitozsx56686 responds:

Thanks for the review, XwaynecoltX. I will try to fix that scratchyness on my future works, and trying vocals, because I'm not a good lyricist lol.
Thanks again!

[Midnight Shadows (WiP)]

It can be great if finished

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well this was somewhat differant, it starts out super soft and then starts to build up, but then it gets cut off, i guess thats what you mean a "WORK-IN-PROGRESS" now i dont find anything wrong with that, its just i was getting into it and you did build up the song, so it was kind of a dissapointment when it cuts off, now i do hope you make a full version of this as it does seem to be something of good quality, so be sure to let me know if you ever do finish it, now for suggestions of improving, hmmm well first off dont cut it off like that haha, anyways keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Finish the track ofcourse that would be a plus, give from what i did get to hear it was perfect now just needs that finishing touch you got.

~X~

Step responds:

Yep, I actually asked in the Audio Forums for people to help me out with this. There's a good buildup, but then I'm not sure if I can reach the powerful and epic part after the buildup on my own, so I'm having a few people help me :D.
Glad you like it!