XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ChaozFantasy-Metaljonus]

Very impressed with this one

~~REVIEW~~
Oh very nice with this one, now here you really push the build up, and the first few seconds of this track it has a unique sound, not sure what that was but would have been nice to have more focus on that aswell, but anyways the quality on this is top notch i can see and understand why this one got front paged so awsome job on that part of stuff, the sad part for me was that this was just a tad short, would have liked a longer version, cause you got some good quality playing with this one, love the guitar on this one, gonna add this one as a fave.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So great quality here, great guitar great jamming music with this one, only issue i found lacking was that it was too short, if anything else i loved the build up and would even suggest doing something more with the opening sounds that were kind of unique.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! This is the actual of the length of the song I was paying tribute too I could have went off and made it my own but I wanted to stay true to all of the fanboys on this site so I did hehe. you rock!

[Nana's Song-Metaljonus]

Pretty decent once again

~~REVIEW~~
ok cool another cool track this almost sounds like some of the megaman ones you have, i must admitt though its nice to see your work front pages and congrats on that, and you should be proud of the score its pretty good for the track you released here, in myhonest oppinion this is not your best and you still won so thats one reason to be proud, so nice job there, i like this track but like the other one i reviewed its need some of that harder tunes you can bring in, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all congrats on the front page, well worth it with this piece, this was pretty smoothall the way through, onlything on this i thought could be somewhat better would possibly be to add some of the harder tones just a tad here and there, anyways nice job once again.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! but this track is for my grandma who passed away when I wrote it. you may not think its my best but I put alot of emotion into it and think it is pretty good. I will probably go back and remix it to make it sound fuller but I got to find the session first haha. Thanks for the review.

[FuckingGroove!-Metaljonus]

I love it

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice on this one, starts off very good fast and hard, and you mention no vocals but would be nice to get that going in on this, i have yet to hear a vocal version on one of your pieces, so ill wait on that, as for this one, i love you adding in some drums, takes time i know, but more of that type of variaty just makes these guitar pieces much better, dont get me wrong i love your guitar solos aswell, just the variaty brings it all together, anyways great track here with the drums and guitar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now that we have the guitar and drums lets have some slow and fast tempos, other then that this was pretty good if you ask me.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! Your reviews are mostly about variety and all that which is funny but its cool. When it comes to metal sometimes variety is out the window and its just straight brutalness! As far as vocals go I don't do vocals maybe with my band but not with my own music since I suck lol. thanks again.

[Megaman-Dr.Wily's Castle Stage]

Guitar rocks

~~REVIEW~~
Another great piece with some nice guitar playing and as for mega man this one was pretty good, kinda sounds more like something to do with sonic, but was still fitting to the mega man style allthough i have not seen a mega man games in ages, but like i said still good and i really love the vibe you keep going with thsi, its keeps going right from the start, very nice indeed, so as in the other reviews awsome job once again on the awsome guitar playing, ill look for more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great guitar playing, wouldnt mind some more variaty though but thats just me, its great as it is now.

Metaljonus responds:

Thakns dude! I am a guitarist dude that's what I do and play and practice everyday so variety is hard for me lol cause I love to play my instrument. So that is what I do! thanks for the reviews! keep em coming!

[Skyrim METAL!]

Very awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i wanted to hear some of your new stuff and i really love the guitar and i guess you are right these newer pieces sound alot better, and you can hear alot more quality in these, i love the guitar but it was also nice to hear some "DRUMS" in there, so awsome job there, but i have to say you still can kick a good guitar with this one, now as improving, i dont know i honestly think this is perfect, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There really was not anything, i could suggest as this was pretty good if you ask me.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! i'm glad you dig it! It takes forever to do these drums but i'm still learning in everything and working on getting better at it. Thanks again for the awesome review be sure to check out my other stuff too! I got all kinds of cool stuff so check it!

-Jon

[Super Mario 64 - Boss]

I thought it was nifty sounding

~~REVIEW~~
Now this this was actually pretty good, and reflected off the game at hand very good and was just pleasent and just was very good sounding, kinda reminds me of all them games i played, the drum sounds you have in here was pretty impressive and really seemed to come alive, you seem to push the drums alot wich is ok but needs some other elements in there, i really liked it all though, and you have a decent build-up so that was pleaseing, can be improved with some deeper drum bass i thought, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some deeper bass as mentioned, but also needs some change up in the tune as more of a build up then you had. anyways good tune i liked it.

PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

Back then, getting the bass powerful without distortion was without a doubt, quite a chore. But it wasn't bad. Thanks for the review

[Old Strings]

Neat and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
Well this had a great feel to it and all, its very nice feeling, with almost some sorta hidden message, it had a strange sound to it aswell, but also had a unique feel, i like the differant sounds this gave off, and was very well presented, now how can this be even better presented, sofar its pretty high quality style, and if i were to suggest anything at all, it would just ad another mix of sounds, it already has a mix of good sounds, but more of that could give it that much more, of the strangness that it already is, its awsome though, cause it does sound differant and thats what i like the most of it, so i say keep up with it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was awsome and differant but i think it could be improved with more mixes of the stranger sounds and such, just a thought though.

margarine responds:

Thanks for commenting. Most of the weird noises were created from bashing the piano in various ways, rapping on the wood, zinging the strings inside it. I recorded this a loooong time ago, had almost forgotten about it!

[Infinity10]

Nifty tune

~~REVIEW~~
This is actually a pretty cute track you have here, but again its very short now i do understand its just a {LOOP} but thought maybe you could make it longer maybe ad abit more {DEPTH} to it, ad more sounds and mixes of tunes and such, so that it has that {DEPTH} someting that has more ump to it, i wouldnt mind hearing some new instraments either like, {FLUTES} {VIOLINS} and other stuff like that, it will give it a unique sound i thought, and these are just some ideas that could help improve on this delightful piece you have here, so good luck on any new stuff you work on,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, ad more depth to it, maybe some new sounds such as violins and flutes

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Warp away]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Fast loop you have here its kinda differant but its really fast, you should probably make it abit longer if you can, maybe slow down all the differant {SUND/FX's} i like the drums and stuff at one point seems like there is running steps or something but its still a neat little process, but again this was just too {SHORT} add more to it, more longer sounds and have more of a build-up somehow, its just too close together everything is all bunched up, {SPREAD} it out some, but anyways it was notbad, i liked it for a little loop that it is, hope to see other versions later, thats if you still make stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the sounds abit its too bunched up, also making it longer with more of a tune would also be a nice touch.

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[_Revolution_]

Nice sounds

~~REVIEW~~
This has a very {RETRO} feel to it kinda like i was listening to something from the 70's or even 80's, the drums were a nice touch in this piece i think you should actually add more of the drums but with a higher bass sound. and adding some more variaty of instraments wouldnt hurt either, i like this track you have here its a nifty piece and i suggest working with it more and as mentioned give it more of that deep feel, more drums and more variaty from other uniquer instraments even some backround effects would be another nice addition, so anyways nice piece, i look forward to more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some more variaty of instraments wouldnt hurt either, also more of the drums with more of a deeper bass in there, And more variaty from other uniquer instraments even some backround effects would be another nice addition

Birdinator99 responds:

Thanks for the input, but this track isn't going anywhere haha