XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[add in beats2]

Nice build up

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was notbad, love how it starts off with the slow then picks up and really starts to pick up wich is really nice, so nice touch on the {BUILD-UP} gets really fast then you start adding some variaty wich is another nice key i thought, allthough i think you should have added more variaty especially towards the end, but other then that i thought it was a pretty nifty toon, anyways keep up the decent tracks, i will look for more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more variaty especially after the build up and towards the end.

~X~

zanewolf55 responds:

awesome thanks for the tip i'll keep that in mind

[Dividing by Zero]

Decent tune

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this is notbad, with the drums and all, i think you need to pick up the speed abit seems too slow im more talking with the drums and such, the second part that comes in does pick up and has the variaty, maybe the drums seemed slow because of the no other sounds in there, but this is an ok track witch does pick up and build into something really good, great track i thought, as for improving maybe just speed the start up just a tad, something to think about, other then that its a great piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the starting just a tad not too much but a lil more

~X~

Psil0 responds:

Yeah this was my first try, so at this genre, so I didn't want to overdo it. When I make my next house song, the drums will probably be a little more chaotic and dynamic than this.

Glad you liked it and thanks for the review man.

[~*Bronze*~]

Fast beat

~~REVIEW~~
This was fast, dont get me wrong i like that kind of style, maybe a tip on improving on this might be to have a more {SLOW} start up then build it up, but you do have a nice and nifty tune here with a good fast beat track and ending just right i rather liked it, just too fast at the start i thought, so for improvinf have a more build up style. anyways good luck it was a nice tune.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Slow down the start have a more build up throught the song

~X~

Atundra responds:

Yeah I would have done that if this was an actual song, this was kind of just a jamming session for me haha.

Thanks for the review though man :D

[[LR] TheSoulMan Speaks Out]

This was differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now i must say this was pretty differant the {CHIRPPING} sound was interesting and really made it sound differant, but that was the neat part of it, the voice in there was interesting aswell, and made for a differant and odd sound all together, i got a real kick out of this, im thinking for the chirpping sound maybe you could not make it so loud but slowling bring it in, just an idea to improve on but for the mostpart it was an interesting sound and tune even as short as it was.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work the chirping in at a slower and sofeter rate and maybe make the whole track somewhat longer.

~X~

Little-Rena responds:

This was a bit of a joke, lol.

[The 10½ Heroes -Remix 2-]

Differant but still interesting

~~REVIEW~~
notbad again and i thought i heard the other version before on this one, but this one sounds differant and seems to have some differant and odd sounds, not a bad thing just differant, kind of hard to review this particular one because its kind of {WACKY} and thats not a bad thing its just differant but maybe thats what you were going for, as the tune gets going it does settle down from the odd and wackyness of stuff, anyways notbad keep making interesting stuff especially like this tune, not my fave from you but still a decent choice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i would suggest some more wacky and odd sounds throughout the track even making it more crazy.

~X~

Step responds:

Lol thanks. I made almost all the sounds with the Sytrus VST that comes with FL Studio, so maybe that's why they sound wacky :P.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Mass Illusion]

Nice variaty

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad i like this tune it startsout really quick and comes in with all the differant sounds, it really gets going, and i really like all the vairiaty, its not slow or too fast but just right in my opinion, love the drums in there and the asortment of differant sounds and such, i think the piano was my fave but really it all works very well because of all the variaty and such, so nice job there, as to improve i think its just right, anyways good luck on anything new.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I want to say more variaty but i like it as is.

~X~

Step responds:

Yeah this is probably one of my best old submissions. I remember constantly editing the submission after I was done with it :P. Glad you like the piano, I always tried to make the piano in my songs sound as fitting as possible.

Thanks again!

[[LR] Penta Is An Idiot]

Differant and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
and this one is notbad it has a decent build up, but the sound quality seems abit too low sounding so raising the sound on this and slowing it down towrds the build up might also help as it crowds everything in there, but still other then that it has a unique sound to it, soft and fast kinda neat, so the only changes i could see from this would be to raise the volume quality abit, other then that its pretty differant and unique. anyways good luck on anything new you got comming out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
raise the volume quality

~X~

Little-Rena responds:

Alright, thanks.

[[LR] This Sucks Fuck You]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well this was interesting, seems abit slow, but telling from the {TITLE} it seems like its not in your best interest lol, but it has a unique sound, i think it should be sped up might sound better in a faster tone or something, , just a thought though, the gap at the end seems abit too long aswell, but other then that i thought it was ok, so some slight changes for improving would be to speed up the tune just a tad, anyways good track look forward to hearing more of your stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
speed it up it will sound much better

~X~

Little-Rena responds:

lol, I didn't like it :p

[-Yin-]

Soothing

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm this was actually very soothing and relaxing, kind of reminds me of something from final fantasy? but then has that calm and soothing feel so that alone gets points from me, i do however think you could have gave it a more cliffhangar jump maybe towards the end not saying anything crazy but something that pushes the beat and feel, but other then that it was actually pretty good and i enjoyed it so nice work indeed, so as to improve a little cliffhangar at the end, anyways nice tune, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
abit more rough and even a cliffhangar at the end nothing too loud but just a little something

~X~

Back-From-Purgatory responds:

Don't know how I missed this review for so long... anyways...

I'd be lying if I said I don't draw any inspiration from the Final Fantasy soundtracks... I love the music in those games, and I'm constantly trying to imitate the same kind of emotion that those songs generate.

As for a cliffhanger... well, I was thinking about reworking this... We shall see.

[Distant Oblivion Loop]

Short but still fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
now this one was fast and yes its a loop i did however you could have made the loop much faster, but it tends to be harder to review loops then anything else, but i do like the speed of it and all the sounds and instraments seem to flow together just right and the speed matches up with them so in those areas its great just wish there was abit more to it, not like a song just a longer loop to it, but regardless its still a fantastic loop, great job, hope to hear more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth and more to it not so short even if it is just a loop

~X~

Step responds:

Thanks for reviewing! Actually at the time I think I was planning on making this a full song but then never got around to finishing it.

Haha I remember being really proud of this loop because all the different sounds fit together well for once :P.

Thanks again for this review, and thanks for all of the submissions of mine you've been reviewing!