Very nice
This has a real "JAZZ" feel about it I think some fade outs would work great then bring that jazz like flavor up more intense, Alright so you have something good here, the sounds was differant, and I like the unique-ness of it, allthough there seemed to be something missing it was still a good start here. but keep a "GOOD-DIRECTION" and you will go long ways you already have some pretty decent stuff, And once again nice work here it was for sure one of those piece that sticks with you, and will make me want to see what else you can come out with.
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This has a real jazzy feel about it I think some fade outs would work great then bring that jazz like flavor up more intense
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