So beautifull
wow this was so beautiful you have a real talent for this kind of stuff and I was just "AMAZED" with it, As for some improvment I dont think this needs any changes to it, as it was just a beautiful piece here, You have started something here and it has amazed me from the vibes to the sounds in this tune really great stuff and a great start, A well Composed submission here so you should be proud of the results, And now as I do end here with this review I will say it was a grand pleasure of vibe and sound in this tune so nice job here, and hope to check out more of your work. All in all it was Fascinating.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for some improvment I dont think this needs any changes to it, as it was just a beautiful piece here
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