Nice and soothing
So this "PIECE" here was pretty soothing you have a nice and pleasent piece and it goes like that from start to "FINISH" so my take is ad some intense build up not so much to mess up the theme but give it a tempo increse, Alright so thaught I would give this one a go the name looked interesting and so I must say that was a good decision as I have enjoyed this and the direction you have it going in there are tons you could do but I like what you have done sofar, You build it up with so much quality and shown us all the talents you bring to the table, its a big plus here and a very nice piece of sound here.
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so my take is ad some intense build up not so much to mess up the theme but give it a tempo increse
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