Very nice work
This song was rather neat and gives me that feeling of something differant from all the rest, so as this starts off I was much enjoying this, so props to you for a decent start at this. Theres lots more to hear and see so i will continue on with your work. This was a really great solo you have here, I wouldnt mind hearing some other instraments and what not, not to take away from the solo but maybe something to support the solo. Now to end this, you have a decent piece there is some open discussion for some improvment just a tad here or there, but other then that this was actually notbad at all, it was interesting in a few ways as i have mentioned, but anyways hope to see more stuff like this from you.
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I wouldnt mind hearing some other instraments and what not, not to take away from the solo but maybe something to support the solo.
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