XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tense Future]

((( VERY NICE WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
The art and graphics, are very good and i was amazed at how much you put into it with the decent filesize, i do think you had way too much "CREDITS" at the start and it took time away from the actual flash, also the animation was very slow, but in the end it was a very pleasent flash, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less credits, more smoother animation...

~~OVERALL~~
A great art flash good music but needs some fix's here and there...

~X~

Fallin-Again responds:

thanks ill keep all that in mind. Im always looking for constructive critisism.

[KillerCave]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, abit short but still funny, i laughed abit with it, i like some of the colors gave a good feeling of it was in a cave, would have been nice to see it go into other scenes and stuff, an d not so much attcking the character but more slow stuff going on...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes not just the one, give the character a way of escaping...

~~OVERALL~~
a fun cave escaping episode, but could use abit more, nice job...

~X~

blood-leach responds:

Hey thx dude well what can say i madxe it in 2 hours so l make another one and spend more time on it

[Strut Boy]

((( FUNNY BUT DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, i really like the main character he has a certan appeal to him with style and pimpm like feel to him, the cartoon was notbad kinda funny and notbad at all, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest abit more detail in the character and more effects in the backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash, good character, promised to give laughs...

~X~

dazza-mate responds:

Thanks, all my movies have half arsed backgrounds anyway.

[Donald Trump Movie Teaser]

((( WOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i love this, i never thought i would see a dress-up of "GI-JOE" i was such a fan back in the day, and im gonna add this to my faves list very nice idea, add more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more options, maybe like add different pages to flip though for much more props and stuff, anyways nice job, keep it up...

~~OVERALL~~
A great idea for a dress-up, Gi-Joe hehe...

~X~

Drumunit responds:

Ehhhhh, GI-JOE??? This is Break in and your FIRED! Ep.2. Where are you at?

[ORANGE 2]

((( FUNNY FLASH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow that was a long download but i must say i rather enjoyed it and it was very entertaining, and funny at moments the character like characters were notbad either very funny and well presented also love the music, nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Downsize downsize and more downsize...

~~OVERALL~~
A great flash funny and entertaining could be worked into some compressing though, nice work...

~X~

Nzxer responds:

Lawl, if someone could teach me how to downsize the file of music and make it sound perfect, it will definatly be like that in the 3rd.

[P.M.U.L ep.1]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad for a first and seems that you do have some skills with flash but still needs abit more to it, more ideas aswell and some compressing aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big.

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash but you need some more detail and effort, nice try...

~X~

Porateku1 responds:

Thank you for your opinion if you have any more pointer, lease let me know them. I would like to know how to make better animations so let let me know how to use a software that you'd recommend. I use SWiSHmax and I see that it takes upm too much space for the 56k modem users..sorry

[Pikachu's Heart-Break]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was entertaining, the "SPRITES" looked good, they had a sense of style to them compared to other ones, nice work there, the "TEXT BUBLES" could be better though, it was an overall fun sprite flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some voices for the text bubbles it would improve on the characters and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun sprite flash with a unique look to the sprites...

~X~

TylerLandis responds:

thanks for the reveiw! the reason i didnt do voices was because pikachu just says "pika pika" over and over again, and dk makes strange gorilla noises. i thought that might get annoying.

[?—]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ok this was abit short but i must say it surved its purpose, the "SCREAM" at the end was abit much though, the "GRAPHICS" was cool and so were the clocks, allw as ok with this, just could be longer...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add some "SUBTITLES" and the scream could be lower in volume, aslo the flash could be longer more of a story played out...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short clock flash but arnt they all...

~X~

l1fty responds:

ok but i'm too lazy to improve