XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[a bit life ep.1]

((( WHOAAA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow the filesize just about took forever, you should work that out somehow, it was interesting kept me interested, could use some more graphics and detail to it but i was entertained...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the flash size for starters that was just massive, and more detail aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
A big file so hope you all dont have 56k lol...

~X~

blackdeathX1 responds:

thanks, of corse that was awhile ago so i am better now. I'm 14 so i still have bad spelling but next time i well get someone to help me. ^_^

[Flightless Birds FTW]

((( I LIKED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was meat, i like the "ART" and colors also the 2 clips was good but the second one was way too short seemed like you didnt even try with that one, funny stuff though, you should make more like this sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer clips, even more clips then just the two, and more effort within each one...

~~OVERALL~~
A couple of short clips but sorta entertaining...

~X~

Crusty-Wiwuh responds:

There are 3 clips now, I added one. And yeah the elephant thing I actually did for a friend as a joke- I thought I may as well put it in with something else and submit it.

Thanks for the review dood :)

[(1) Pacman vs. Mario]

((( LOL CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ook that was cute like the otherone, the "SOUND" quality is still bad though too much static, and still short, might want to improve on that, it was entertaining though so ill give you that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better sound quality, and longer flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but entertaining...

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Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Yeah, it wasn't that long...

[(2) Pacman vs. Luigi]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Not sure what to say with this one, for one the sound is way loud or too static or something, it was also very short, but kinda amusing, i had fun watching it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better sound quality, make it longer, maybe even some sorta story...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but funny, needs some work...

~X~

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

ok

[Fat Kid Plays POP!]

((( CUTE BUT NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute and entertaining, but needs more, like some sorta backrounds for one, and maybe have the baby in some sorta story animation, his face expressions were cute though kinda silly...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make him apear in a story, and some backrounds would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny faces, but thats all you get with this one...

~X~

stik responds:

know what you are saying, but for me, simlicity is the key. :)

[The Gay Wizard -episode 1]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol what can i say, it was entertaining, kinda funny, the "ART WORK" seems to lack detail and effort, and as for the "VOICES" it was hard to hear, the subtitles helped but it was still hard, maybe turn up the sound or something, funny flash though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Raise the sound abit more, and more scenes aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
lacked in arts but gives a certan humor to it...

~X~

mazeteam responds:

thanks. episode 2 is coming soon. and ep3 is being made as well. I am looking for better sound software at the moment, so future entries may have better audio. graphics are a little on the poor side, but i rushed the production a bit. glad some out there like this!

[LL - The New PK?]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok slightly entertaining, would have been nice to see more scenes, and maybe less jpeg images in the backround, but for the mostpart it was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More different scenes, more depth and detail...

~~OVERALL~~
Locks, funny but not the best on the grounds, does give a short laugh though...

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Teh-Viruz responds:

thanks i guess talk to Xenomorph he made the script

[PTFA Guy Short 6]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh, not sure if i saw the others but i may look into them, you shouldnt quit now but, make more atleast one more, very funny stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have the funny down, now just work on the size abit, and a few more episodes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny stuff cant be missed, nice work indeed...

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Ryan-Smith responds:

Awesome thanks, I'm still making them so don't worry about that.