XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Blobs: Share the PS2]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok that made me laugh, hehe anyways it was very short, you should have added a bunch of short clips or something and more bacround props ike a window a desk chair and so on, i do think you should make more like in a series there are funny characters, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More props in the backround, and a longer episode...

~~OVERALL~~
A cute little blob flash, needs more though...

~X~

Carnagevisor responds:

Cheers , I am currently working on improving them a lot. Adding more props, redesigning the blobs and overall spending more time on them.

[Surfing CocaCola]

((( I LIKE IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, almost artistic with the colors and all, i also noticed it was very smooth in animation, and a good song choice if i say so myself, that was nice, could be longer though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer animation, and more props and stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
An artistic like cocacola video neat animation...

~X~

Lopaxe responds:

i couldn't make it longer, whole song is around 1 minute....

[Spoofs R Us]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good start for your first, needs some upgrading though, first off i would like to pointout that it needs some maor compressing, you should never send a file that large if its your first, and it needs more detail and more effort on all aspects from backrounds to the main characters...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well more effort more detail, more effects, The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users
do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k...

~~OVERALL~~
A good start but needs major detailing...

~X~

fyaishar responds:

Alright, I'll take the advice. Thanks!

[TenOhSix2005]

((( UM OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was like a card to yourself lol, why didnt anyone else make it for you??? i mean isnt it supose to be that others give you a card but not oneself making one for oneself hehe, anyways it was neat artwork, but not much more then that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some animation...

~~OVERALL~~
A birthday card for someone, kinda funny...

~X~

numbers responds:

"Well it was like a card to yourself lol, why didnt anyone else make it for you???"

'CAUSE I'M A LOSER FAGGOT WITH NO FRIENDS WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

[ArkAngel - Episode 1.1]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was really good and i do hope there is more cause i want to see it through, but the file was just way to big, maybe cut it down somewhat, still nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the file, is the best thing you can do for this...

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation just abit on the large downloading size...

~X~

Son-Finale responds:

I agree the file size is too large. I have been tempted as of late to remake this and see how I've improved. I know a million things i could do better with it. Anyway thank you for the review!

[The Silent One, Part I]

((( NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
I thought this was acyually good but you went way to long on the talking at the start, but i did find it to have some nice graphics and detail, nice job indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less talking or just a little less...

~~OVERALL~~
Decent graphics and good story plot, keep up the good work...

~X~

Jemp responds:

Hey, thanks. I haven't checked these reviews in a while, nice to know people still watch it at least occasionally. :P

I actually started work on a prequel a little while ago, never finished it though. I may work on it around the end of the year and release it then, if there's interest in another in this series.

In fact, here's a sneak-peak at one of the characters: http://img174.imageshack.us/i mg174/7717/siberiacyborgninja pq3.jpg

The prequel is nearly all action too, I learnt my lesson from the negative feedback to the big codec call in this one.

Thanks for the review!

[Beowulf the cartoon]

((( GREAT VOICES )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had some awsome voice-acting, and great detail like characters and suchh, allthough the file was abit large it was well worth it with the nice detail and such, awsome job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would only say to compress it somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
Great animation and even better voices...

~X~

iceimp responds:

Wow sadly the animation is this is nothing like what i can do now, But i seem to keep making cartoons and thinking they are not good enuf.I stoped tweening and now am into fbf but sadly i may not have any new toons for a while.

[The Muslim Aristocrats]

((( STRANGE BUT FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well it was funny, sorta random, could have been better say like some backrounds, subtitles, more quality in voicing, and a more of a plot but i did find the randomness abit funny, all and all it was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
All though the voices were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble, you also could add some backrounds as the white ones were just to plain, also you may want to think about compressing the file it was abit much...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random, abit large file for the content...

~X~

MR-HOMO responds:

Great, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeah it was a pretty big file size, but I tried compressing it and because so many of the images are just jpg's, they got twisted beyond recognition whenever I tried compressing. So I figured I'd just stick with the current size it's at.

Subtitles are a good idea, I should add them. It's good practice to add them to everything. It was just laziness there.

It was quite random. What can I say? I'm mad.

Thanks for the awesome review, very constructive. If you liked this, check out some of my other stuff.


Thanks

[The Witch Clock: Prelude]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was hard to hear what was said, and second the "TEXT" was very small had to close to look and see what it actually said, the clocks could also use more detail in there design, interesting but needs work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail on the characters, make the sound abit louder, and larger text even some backing behind the text to give it a better look to it...

~~OVERALL~~
Its ok, but need work, and more effort...

~X~

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Rawr.
Thanks for the review, I guess.

[MAN 1: The Void]

((( MUSIC DIDNT FIT )))

~~REVIEW~~
The music didnt seem to fit the animation, and i alos noticed that the "TEXT" was cutting off into the screen when it gets long wording or something, and it was sorta short, but funny i thought...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the "TEXT" so it doesnt cut off on the ends, aswell as puting a solid color backing to the text so its easier to read...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat muddin / clock flash but needs some re-working...

~X~

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Yah, I did that overflowing text thing on purpose. YOu're the first one to say something about it.