XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slingshot]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it did make me laugh abit but it lacks details and effects, just little things here and there would make it much better aswll as a neat idea behind it, you idea was ok but i think we seen it done abit...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More ideas, more detail and more effects...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash but needs new ideas...

~X~

george-berry responds:

Yeah, in reterospect I did upload this here just in an attempt to get another submission under my belt. Oh well, c'est la vie!

[Pet Parodies - Cat]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well it was cute, but maybe it should be longer with the cat doing more, i do like the fact tht you mixed toon with clip, kinda made it different, and some pleasent music i thought, notbad of some flashing here keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more animating with the sticks...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute cat animation and some anoying stick toons...

~X~

blue-mess responds:

Thanks for the positive review! Maybe I'll make one with a dog next time :-)

[CSG 2]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok, kinda like a small trailer, the sprites are ok but they are oo random, and some of them are not even properly cut and all, the backrounds well they were very bland, i hope the next one is abit better....

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better cut sprites, better presentation, Im not the greatest fan of sprites, but this was an ok flash, i wouldnt mind seeing some real art in there though, sprites are cool but they do seem like the easy style of just plopping down and so-on, a mixture of sprites and flash art would make in different and not just the sprite way...

~~OVERALL~~
Sprite action but could use some cleaning up from the start to finish, also needs better presentation...

~X~

Smon responds:

~~I like doing this too. :P~~
Sprites are my forte', what can I say, though I'm working on a drawn animation called Dracula's Testicles (nothing you say could ever be even close to what the cartoon is.) so keep an eye out for that!

[Random Pointless Battle 3]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny, and good battle, allthough would have been nice to seen it move into other scenes and even have other characters come into the fight, some better colors and shades of detal could be worked with the characters, but overall it was a fun little battle...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better characters, more scenes and more characters could help to improve on this...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun little battle with a coupld of simple characters...

~X~

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

Better characters: I've been working on improving the character designs, but I've been too busy spending my summer being lazy to actually make a start on any animations.

More scenes: That's a very good idea.

More characters: I'm thinking of maybe a Blue Man Group cameo for episode 5...

Thanks for the review!

[Outlaw RPG Battle]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one, i think you can edit it in your portal submissions area about the whole game/movie thing, but anyways as for the flash, it was funny and i really like your characters and good color, very entertaining good quality on this one, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the file somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters and funny humor...

~X~

Outlaw responds:

Thanks for the review.

Why does everyone get confused on wether this is a game or not??? When/Where did I ever say that this was a game!?

[VGDC comp. entry]

((( HA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha well this was sorta funny, the sprite flash movies do tend to have lots of download time which is a pain since over 50% of net users still use 56k, but anyways funny flash here it made me laugh...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it was simple and funny...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and simple, you will get a funny laugh out of this...

~X~

Sticky responds:

yay! me make unimprovable flash!.....

[Operation Five Chapter 1]

((( WOW IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was impressive even for a clock flash, way large file but nice animation good and smooth lots of stuff going on and very welldone, i was impressed from the satart to the finish, great stuff keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize abit large even if it was really good...

~~OVERALL~~
A large file but some of the best animation from the clocks well these clocks anyways...

~X~

SmigeFlash responds:

Thanks for the review! Unfortunately it's impossible to lower the filesize without ruining sound or JPEG quality (it was hard enough getting it under 5mb).

[Cold as Ice ep. 05]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, but could be better. like more effects, and more action, but it did presemt that stuff just needs more in my opinion, good story plot though i liked it, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the size, it was just way to big, especialy since i and many others have 56k, its a proven study that 50% of net users still use dial-up so just think about that when making a flash next time...

~~OVERALL~~
Good flash, could use some compressing though...

~X~

Rule responds:

Thanks a bunch. Since this is one of my old, I'll look into it, and see what I don't need, to make it smaller.

[The Blobs: Share the PS2]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok that made me laugh, hehe anyways it was very short, you should have added a bunch of short clips or something and more bacround props ike a window a desk chair and so on, i do think you should make more like in a series there are funny characters, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More props in the backround, and a longer episode...

~~OVERALL~~
A cute little blob flash, needs more though...

~X~

Carnagevisor responds:

Cheers , I am currently working on improving them a lot. Adding more props, redesigning the blobs and overall spending more time on them.