XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CT - Crisis of Time]

Pretty amazing

~~REVIEW~~
The size was abit much, that was the first thing i noticed, but have given it my all even at the size it is, Now as for the "INTRO" its pretty neat it was quick and fast not to take away from the actual film at hand but yet it had some good animation and nice graphics, now on the "MENU" page it was pretty impressive with some nifty looking buttons and even fast animation on the character just sitting on the ledge i thought that part of the animation was too fast though, maybe slow it down just abit, So as i watch the actual flash you have some pretty good art skills with good looking characters nice effects and decent animation, so for 14 mb's it was much better then i thought and well worth it i would say,this was really put together very well seems like all the parts and scenes with so much animation took lots of effort so ill give you much credit there, this was all a very welldone animation i was pleased with it from start to finish, the best of this whole flash was the story and how it played out with the characters, so really good stuff, i was entertained and loved the effects, anyways welldone.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
On the menus screen right before the actual movie the animation of the characters hair and flapping cloths i thought was too fast maybe slow it down just abit, other then that it was pretty awsome, i would also suggest cutting down in filesize but dont want to take away from the film either

~~OVERALL~~
A long download but still very good flash from start to finish

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Tyrant-D responds:

Seen that you've viewed most submissions out of anyone here on NG, this review surely put a big smile on my face. XwanecoltX your my God!

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[Toilet Paper Man]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
First of great job on making this a small size flash and still getting a good amount of conent in there i was impressed with that, aww now this cartoon was abit creative with the differant styles of toilet dispensers and such, the animation mixed with reall images was the creative part, as for the "AUDIO" and as you said was probably not the best, so im thinking go the next best thing? Ad some "SUBTITLES" its always helpful to have some and even if the audio is not great the subtitles are a 2ndary feature that helps for that, now this was funny and gave me a couple of laughs and chuckles, so no problems with humor, and while earlier i did say the animation was nice, i thought you could have had the toilet paper animated not in just the mouth, but have him roll around town and stuff and talking aswell that might make for an even more funnier story, something to think about for future episodes if you decide to go that rout, So it was an entertaining little flash with a cute idea as a character, seemed abit on the short side and could use some subtitles, but all and all when its all done and said its a pretty cute flash idea and i hope you continue it on abit more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the toilet paper man roll around throught the city instead of just the one scene, also some subtitles would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
cute character funny idea, keep up the good work

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zacoranim8or responds:

Thank you so much

[WALL WARS]

Needs a stop action code

~~REVIEW~~
Well here was an interesting and entertaining flash video the "CHARACTERS" were actually pretty cute and creative, i noticed this flash loops , you can fix that easily with a stop action code, by also addings osme play and replay buttons it should run better and not loop as to not allow users to miss something or come in on the middle of it and such, dont get me wrong this is a pretty neat flash here cute and lots to see but most of all the looping should be fixed, and also maybe fill in alot of the bland spots the white parts outside of the door scenes, a basic color would help but the white is just too bland if you ask me. so fix the looping ad something to the bland white spots, make the video somewhat longer and you should have something pretty decent here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
fix the looping with a stop action code, fill in the bland areas, and as mentioned make it longer with even more stuff going on

~~OVERALL~~
abit short and needs some fixing but is entertaining for the mostpart

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 094]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this is interesting i really like the backrounds on this one im thinking you should have put the pokemon more deeper into the cave with mayne some glowing eyes and such, and make the whole cave somewhat darker aswell, might make for something differant in the series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as explained a darker caveren, and the pokemon down at the end

~~OVERALL~~
hitler in the cave

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 132]

oh wow

~~REVIEW~~
oh wow i think this was the first time i have seen hitler on the other side of the image in the whole series infact, well who said change was bad hehe, anyways i like the small change here and cute lil pokemon there aswell. now all you need in this one and others alike is abit of animation some story to it and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some animation to the pokemon and or hitler, also some added story would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining and somewhat differant this time

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[I'm Not Your Broom]

Short and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad with this one, the "PLAY" screen had that nifty tank, but the back end of this area was all blank, might have been nice to see something back there atleast something not so bland as the white backround, i normally find some deep greens and reds to be pretty neat, just an idea though, its not anything major but it could help, now as i view the flash its pretty neat filled with some very creative and nifty characters, i do like the black and white style, but the backrounds seem to bland even for black and white theme as you have here, now maybe if you had the back end black and white, and the characters "OUTLINED" in some sorta color, your flash seemed way too short, so maybe you could make it longer or maybe add other little short animation s with it, you know to give it that extra bit for the viewers to really enjoy what you have here, i guess i can understand the shortness for it for the end result but still something to think about, and last but not least ad some "SUBTITLES" it would be a nice little extra for the viewers, well hope i didnt bore you with my review infact hope it helped abit, anyways good luck on your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
above i mentioned a number of suggestions such as , subtitles, color in the backend, longer ending, and a menu screen blandness

~~OVERALL~~
funny and short but still could be even better

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