XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SAR Story Trailer]

That was notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Too start off i must admit i do like this flash, you have presented a good rounded out story allthough the flash itself seemed to run abit slow maybe it was the intense effects and detail i did notice alot of detail in the character design, you have an idea here needs more story depth, and while there was lots of detail in the character, i thought the backrounds and backdrops could have used more as they seemed bland, all the characters looked pretty good and you really have something here, but im thinking tone down abit on the detail on the characters and possibly more effort on the story so that it balances out abit more, and maybe the film wont lag as much, anyways good flash here hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as explained less detail on the characters and more depth in the story. also abit more detail in the backround itself

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash with some awsome characters but still needs abit more

~X~

SiloZen responds:

Thank you for the Review, i am as of now working on the start of the series, due to several mishaps that keep happening im having to keep postponing but i am working to focus alot more on everything and balance the detail out. The story will be explained soon :P

[The Wishing Well.]

Fix the loop

~~REVIEW~~
Well i gave a decent score for the content and art style, it looked like it had a unique kinda texture especially on the boys head, the animation seemed to be really on the shortside, which was a bummer because you really have something here worth the while, and with abit more longer and more content and ofcourse no "LOOPING" it will be a much more pleasent experience

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well first off to really improve on this try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, now second you have a fantastic flash here but its too short so i suggest adding more scenes and or adding some new content give the story more depth, while still keeping the simple concept

~~OVERALL~~
nice art style could use some fixing though

~X~

[Brandon last test]

Needs more effort and detail

~~REVIEW~~
Now a test is fine if you ask me, but i think newgrounds has a section for this sorta stuff, but as for what you are presenting, It was kinda {SIMPLE} in its design mainly and i thought that was pretty good but could have used more detail and effort in the design less simple is what i was probably looking for, The {MUSIC} was a nice touch i thought and seemed to fit what you were trying to put together, the onlything i thought was needing work as said just before was the idea of it just being a test and wouldnt mind there being more of a full version presented rather then just the test portion of things, and the {ART} was again simple so these are some more things you can work on more character is needed more effects and color designs just mix it all up and make it much better then what it is, for now nice test.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ake it more complex you had a simple design witch you could have worked out a few more details and more effort on

the design part of things. The Artwork needs more detail more shades and just more effort all around..

~~OVERALL~~
More of a test then anuthing else but for the mostpart pretty good,

~X~

[Super Mario Gaming World]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty good, and lots happening and lots of action, i like how smooth the animation was on this, sprites looked good even, if you ask me you should add much more sprites doing alot more stuff and just more activity and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
perfect if you ask me

~~OVERALL~~
fun sprite action here

~X~

[Avatar vs. Avatar]

Cute and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually a pretty cute animation and seemed to get a few {LAUGHS} out of me, I did think the whole name thing {AVATAR} was interesting since there was two movies and such but guess those kinds of things happen in movies and since james cameron is a bigger director i guess its ok, as for being {SUED} i doubt anything would come of that but it was funny you mentioned it silly really, the both have differant meannings in there respective movies and toons ofcourse, but like i said it was an interesting idea and kinda silly the animation itself was cute though and i was entertained with it, lightly but still amusing and entertaining to this viewer and reviewer, as for improving on this, add more cuteness to it and the idea of the avatar word could be let go or something, but overall you have a cute flash here, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it was already cute but adding some more entertaining value with some cuteness to it more joke like stuff would be anusing, other then that it was alright stuff.

~~OVERALL~~
A cute and entertaining flash with a silly idea.

~X~

[Shit The Cops!!!!!]

I found this aluring

~~REVIEW~~
I like that you put up subtiles, and you have a decent story, i was hoping for it o be abit "LONGER" though, but besides all that it was ok, so nice job, maybe next time make it somewhat longer, with more stuff, anyways good luck and best of wishes to your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, and maybe upgrade the buttons as those types are abit outdated, give it a fresh and smooth look

~~OVERALL~~
short but its somewhat funny

~X~

[Oni-Hiachi "Devils Angel"]

Decent flash here

~~REVIEW~~
It was a decent flash gets abit "GORY" at times but i was very entertained with it all right from the start so nicejob indeed. it can be better, im thinking with abit more depth in the story-line it could be that much better, but what you do have is a start in the right direction so good luck in future stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Story-line needs more depth and maybe not as much gory-ness just an idea though

~~OVERALL~~
I found this flash to be amusing and entertaining abit on the gory side but im sure most who watch this will enjoy it as much as i did

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[Colin"Snakes and Ladders"]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was welldone and seems to have shown lots of effort on your part i mean you had animation some really nice code and on top of that you had some good looking "ART" in here so it all came together as a fun game a classic one at that and some fun animation mixed in the middle very welldone here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for any tips that i can advise to improve on this im thinking its almost complete maybe give the view screen some "BORDERS/FRAMES" as to make it look more like the real game

~~OVERALL~~
An awsome and Fantastic flash

~X~