XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bad Ass Aliens]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this it was cute and funny and you have a good "IDEA" with the aliens and all, the "ART-WORK" could be improved it was iffy, anyways nice job, try and add more effort with some detail here and there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Art needs some detail just the little things help some light touch up on colors and such will help

~~OVERALL~~
Art needs work but its something alright

~X~

[The History of the Tested]

Its a start

~~REVIEW~~
Ok well this is a start in something good here, i like the two swords on your menu screen well its kind of a menu screen, it has the two swords then a super "TINY" play button? that was sorta odd, i would think you want the "PLAY" button to be much larger so that its easier for the viewers to access it easier, also the starting page is very bland besides the swords, you need some backround there besides the white rather bland white backround, This flash once got started, was really notbad the art was bright and notbad, it however was "LACKING" in animation you just showed shots here and there with a tad bit of animation, so thats something you should probably work with abit, also i noticed the entire flash is abit short you may want to add just abit more content, give more to the viewer to expect in a full version, anyways good luck in the future and hope my review gave you abit of insight on stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Small play button was kinda odd make it large so people dont have to go looking for it,you had some bland backrounds at the menu screen, again fill in that area with atleast a color tone or something, , lack of animation, was throughout the flash you showed more still shots then anything else, try working on more animation from characters and scenes

~~OVERALL~~
Looks to be a good series but as stated above there could be some improvments

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[Ray & Iso's Big Time Tale]

Like a real movie

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat it even started out pretty cool kinda like a real movie does with credits and and animation along with them credits, im sure you know but this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the flash was pretty cute, funny and cute characters and the design of the characters along with the nice animating seemed to really workout pretty well, its just the looping kinda kills it for me there but everything else is really awsome and pretty cute in a whole, anyways nice animation just fix a few things and it will be just right.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
All and all this was an ok flash but You could place a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash

~~OVERALL~~
Other then the looping its a pretty cute flash

~X~

[God Gets High]

OK, but could be better

~~REVIEW~~
You have an ok flash here and sorta "FUNNY" but the art was differant and the animating was kinda odd, but i did like it just needs more effort in animation, and maybe more mainstream style of art i still liked it though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some improved drawings and art style

~~OVERALL~~
nice job

~X~

[Virtual Drug Session]

Interesting but needs more stuff

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well its an interesting game, with lots of drug type of stuff, not always the best of choices but i guess it was more for the humor of it all, the "INTERACTIVITY" of it all is pretty good, and it seems like it could use more, as for the graphics it could have much better graphics details you did good it just could use abit more details, and also the "BACKROUNDS" could use more effort on your part as these black bland ones just didnt do much it needs some sorta backdrop like a room or street corner to even reflect the content of the game and such, so those few things could be worked on to improve on this game you have here, also more "OPTIONS" of the drugs and stuff would also be nice, but for the mostpart i had fun with this game, just add more stuff next time. anyways good game, more effort is needed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort is needed on a few things such as more props more options for the drugs and an improved backround, and posibly a better preloader

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game a little bland though

~X~

[Drifters: LetThemEatCake]

Its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok a nice little animation you have, the size was starting to get abit on the large side but it was worth the wait i thought, i think your "MENU" screen could use some spicing up maybe give it some borders and frames and maybe even a better "PLAY" button but for the mostpart there it was ok, Nice detail like the girls shirt "MUFFIN TOPS" hehe that was pretty funny, as for the art, you have some smooth looking characters and art, some "SUBTITLES" would be a nice addition in this little flash of yours, you have presented us with some pretty good humor on this, some funny jokes and even funnier dialog, this was a good flash was not too short and not too long and as i said about improving on the menu screen you can do abit of the same of the "END" menu screen, the "FONT" could be changed aswell, anyways good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The menu screen where the play button is could use some spicing up maybe some borders/frames and maybe an actualy play button besides just the word play, also some subtitles could be added as a nice option to the viewers,

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash here with some funny humor and good characters i enjoyed it

~X~

[Portal Madness!]

Nice start

~~REVIEW~~
Interesting story you have here for us, i like the idea of a portal and stuff, your madness character was ok could be improved, maybe to be more like the madness characters, anyways good animation and good idea with the portal appearing everywhere and such, you have presented lots of action, the animation was pretty good if you ask me, and you took this little flash into lots of differant scenes and room with some nice effects aswell as some neat motion with the slow motion, as for the end i was abit on the confused side, not sure what happened there, it just sorta stops there, you should express that abit better so its not so confusing, but as far as i can tell from your animation it was a pretty decent animation with some good animation, the end was just abit on the confusing side, anyways good luck next time, hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the ending needs abit more understanding on the story part, also you could have more blood in the flash

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining some good madness in here

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[Elian Strikes Back]

Way too short

~~REVIEW~~
Ok well tha was way too short in my opinion, and the random "JPEGS" was kinda silly, but all in all it was entertaining, so maybe instead of the jpegs you could ad some sorta art characters and so on? its an idea that may improve on this even if it takes abit longer to work on it, good luck though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Find ways to add more humor, maybe more funnier jpegs, but something needs to be done, more art style stuff as i suggested above, good luck on that

~~OVERALL~~
its very short may give you a random giggle

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