XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'm Not Your Broom]

Short and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad with this one, the "PLAY" screen had that nifty tank, but the back end of this area was all blank, might have been nice to see something back there atleast something not so bland as the white backround, i normally find some deep greens and reds to be pretty neat, just an idea though, its not anything major but it could help, now as i view the flash its pretty neat filled with some very creative and nifty characters, i do like the black and white style, but the backrounds seem to bland even for black and white theme as you have here, now maybe if you had the back end black and white, and the characters "OUTLINED" in some sorta color, your flash seemed way too short, so maybe you could make it longer or maybe add other little short animation s with it, you know to give it that extra bit for the viewers to really enjoy what you have here, i guess i can understand the shortness for it for the end result but still something to think about, and last but not least ad some "SUBTITLES" it would be a nice little extra for the viewers, well hope i didnt bore you with my review infact hope it helped abit, anyways good luck on your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
above i mentioned a number of suggestions such as , subtitles, color in the backend, longer ending, and a menu screen blandness

~~OVERALL~~
funny and short but still could be even better

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[Fap to NG acts: Frostbrth]

notbad once again

~~REVIEW~~
Well its not a large file but did take abit to load so maybe lower it just a tad, also this might do abit better with some subtitles, and since i seen one or two of these have more visuals maybe a post history review history and so on. but for what its worth its pretty entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more "VISUALS" in there not just of the profile but post and review history you might beable to bring up some funny stuff there, and some subtitles wouldnt hurt either

~~OVERALL~~
profile flash of frostbirth

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 065]

Needs more

~~REVIEW~~
now dont get me wrong i like this series and i know i complain about no or very little animation but with just abit more it could be slightly better also i think you should put the pokeball in differant places not always in his hand, just have it pop up differant places and such, anyways good luck on the next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the pokeball in differant places of the screen and since the pokemon is out have the pokeball opened aswell

~~OVERALL~~
amusing pokemon/hitler episode

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[Captain Beast]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok i must admit it was funny and entertaining, and gave me a laugh or two, the differant langauge kinda through me off and was confusing atfirst but i did watch it a few times to understand it by animation only, but even with all that i think some subtitles would make it better for the english only speaking audiance, second you had some amazing animating and some fantastic art, that really worked well together, but in the end this was just too short and i felt it could have had more to the end more content and characters and just a tad longer even if it was just a small short, the subtitles might have helped me to understand it abit better aswell, but anyways good luck on your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some subtitles, make the ending abit longer and more depth to the humor aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short, hard to understand at first

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DunderAxel responds:

I s'pose you're right, thanks.

[The Trash bin]

Its cute

~~REVIEW~~
Its a cute flash you have here and such, but i noticed it started right off the bat as soon as it loaded, now this kinda thing seems to bug a few people but there is an easy fix for this, and that would be by adding a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" you can do a search for the same name in the flash forum or just ask anyone for help in the flash forum how to add this, but anyways what this does is stops the "LOOP" from looping from the start of the movie now onto your lil flash here, it was a cute little animation with some intersting stuff going on, i noticed this flash was abit confusing like the 3 days ago scene and such, also the flash seemed abit on the short side, so while i found it cute, it still needs abit more, so maybe you can work abit on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code so it doesnt start off , a play button at the start seems much better if my opinion, also this would be nice if you added more to the story, and a longer more understanding story aswell

~~OVERALL~~
a short funny story could use more

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 229]

another cute one

~~REVIEW~~
Lol well another cute one you have here but then again so are all the pokemon versions, i like the dressing up of hitler and the pokeball is always a nice little feature, but as i always say, ad more animation, and more scenes, and maybe even introduce other characters, anyways a few ideas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
like above some animation, new props and new characters

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining as always

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[Adolf Hitler: ATIO80W 03]

lol ok

~~REVIEW~~
Lol i thought i had reviewed this one already, but anyways yeah its a pain with all them rules and such, the same as the retrogade but that was also funny, notbad, i like the slow animation and all, wouldnt mind abit more, this i s kinda funny cause its like hitler is making the rules hehe

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more bright stuff more color maybe some flashing stuff in the corners but not too flashing

~~OVERALL~~
hitler reads rules

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

The 2nd ATIO80W was the review guidelines, whereas this one was the whistle rules. I'm guessing you got the two confused due to their similarity. ;)