XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guns 'n Morons]

This was neat

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty neat, you have some good characters here, very large and standout, you actually have a funny little flash here, i did however think this could have used some subtittles of some sort, it would help, not that sound is anything bad just that subtitles would be nice, also the white backrounds make it too "BLAND" and you may want to add some backrounds it would also improve on the overall graphics of this, Your animation was a short flick, but it had some good humor, i think it could be even better with some more content more scenes and more characters, its very entertaining, anyways nice job, keep up the good work. i hope you do make some changes in to only improving on this as this was a really good idea but can be improved.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
try adding more content, with more scenes, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, also some subtitles wouldnt hurt either

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and amusing short here could be improved in time

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[Double Homicide]

gmm notbad could be better though

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well the film starts off right away with some stick getting killed, more like smashed up hehe, so im thinking you should ad a stop action code with some added play and replay buttons, also i noticed you had little to no backrounds at all, for me backrounds are very important some people tend to not worry about them yet they do spice of the scene alot, even if it was just a solid color backround it would sufice, just something to think about while making your next flash, now another thing i noticed and something you could work on would be the flash itself was very short and more like a clip, maybe you should add a lot of short clips into one flash that way its not over in a second, anyways its a cute clip of a flash but needs more and needs a few fixes, so nice job but put abit more effort next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
fix the looping, with a simple stop action code, theres lots of tutorials on here newgrounds just do a search for them, with the phrase "STOP-ACTION-CODE" in the field, also you may need to add some backrounds even if a solid color, and last but not least it was too short so make it longer or add other shorts along with it, so it has some depth to it.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall its a cute clip of a flash but needs more along with a few fixes

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[Skater Dude]

Its notbad abit short though

~~REVIEW~~
First off its a great file size but the "LOADER" seemed to be very slow and not sure if it was my pc or not, but regardless, i like the "3D" spinning skate-board, i think that part could do with some better spinning and possibly some effects like maybe as it spins have some "FIRE-WORKS" spitting out from behind it, and also the "PLAY" button could look better with abit more depth to it, maybe have some fancy text or thicker lettering, the "CAR" was notbad but was too plain looking so maybe more effort on the design of it such as more lines around the edges of the car, and also you should make this go into more scenes like dont let the guy get killed so easily but maybe the car chaces him a few scenes here and there, so in other words add more depth to the story you have here, i did however like the backrounds and the smooth flow of animation

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improved fonts/text, and some effects at the start of the spinning board, more scenes and a deeper story is needed

~~OVERALL~~
A short story kinda bland and needs more effort

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 121]

oh animation

~~REVIEW~~
oh this was a nice refreshing suprise to see some "ANIMATION" if even just at the start it was pretty neat also you showed hitler with more stuff and more of the change like with pokemon so nice job on that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i would like to see that cristal thingie on hitlers chest glow or even shoot out some beams or something along them lines

~~OVERALL~~
this one has abit more animation then other stuff so it was decent

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