XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Hell Are My Legs 24]

Entertaining series

~~REVIEW~~
Now i must say i have not seen all or most of the series but this was pretty funny, even in its shortness of it all, it gives off a good laugh here and there, i also like your use of coloring alot of the areas and scenes the menu screen was nifty and made me chuckle just abit so nice job on that portion of it all, as for the flash it self, like i said its cute, Your characters are cute, allthough they might look better with abit of hair hehe, you have brought some humor to this but again i think this one was a tad short, i can see alot of humor in it add abit more, some more characters and much more detail on them characters aswell, also i noticed the text "SPEED" was really fast, maybe you could slow that down just abit, anyways i will check out your other movies when i have abit more time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well for one the text speed could be slightly slower, the whole flash could be a tad longer, and maybe add more detail on your nice characters like wacky hair it will make it more funny

~~OVERALL~~
Episode 24 is pretty short but gave a fantastic performance

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[GodClock goes shopping]

it was neat

~~REVIEW~~
First off the pinkish loader and backround was kinda amusing personally i would have more detail in that backround but then again thats just me, but now for the flash, well i like that you had some art aswell as real images, that was the neat part, you gave it some good humor though which made it even better for me, so thanks for a few laughs there, this was a pretty cute flash especially with the old guy wanting that dress, this is a clock movie but yet there was not much activity by that one clock, this is an ok flash but could be improved, and i know the silly style is the clocks but the animation seemed like it could have been smoother, and it seemed abit short but you did get your little joke across so notbad there, anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
smooth up the animation just abit, maybe a differant font for the text, and possibly stretch the joke out abit more

~~OVERALL~~
Funny lil joke and aumsing

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 191]

Needs animation

~~REVIEW~~
this was neat with the backround, the daisies are nice but might look better if they were waving abit as if it was windy or something and doesnt take much to animate that bit, but regardless this was a fun adventure hitler partakes in.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the daisies animated or have a flying bee around or something like that

~~OVERALL~~
dasies, hitler and the sun what else can one ask for lol

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[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D SE4]

heh green

~~REVIEW~~
Heh ill give this one abit more, since it was green, allthough the backround is not moving much like you did with the rules one, but regardless it was still entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the backround animated upwards or make hitler flashing green

~~OVERALL~~
the green episode

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

I don't think there was any need to make the background move.

[Locked Up Ep. 2]

Awsome once again

~~REVIEW~~
Well like last time this was pretty awsome, and i would like to say you had some very good "VOICES" in here some that made it seem like these were really the characters that i had watched all them years ago, the file size loaded up "SLOWLY" which i thoought was odd but it was still ok by me.

Now this was really neat, with all sorts of characters from all sorts of stuff not just older stuff from my time but even some new stuff like starwars, so nice job on that idea there.

Lol and the ending ohmy, you have a great sense of humor there, but im thinking you should have held it just abit longer so the "POSTING" could be read but regardless you have an amzing couple of episodes here with some fantastic art and voices not to mention a funny story that you keep suprising us with, so keep up the awsome animations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well the ending was too short i wanted to see more of that sign so maybe hold it up just for a few seconds longer there at the ending

~~OVERALL~~
And another episode with a full star cast of classics to the greats

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[Book of the almost dead]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
ok to start off i know its an older flash but still it must be reviewed of standards of today, so here it goes, the "MENU" screen its a real nice menu screens and relates to the movie at hand, now like in those times from the movie, "EGYPTION" times, there was "PILLARS" i think that you should have had some pillars on the menu screen like one on each side of the screen, it would have made for a niceer menu then you already have, Your characters are notbad, i like the basic look you gave them, and as for the backrounds there was some small gradients that were ok but thought you could have gave the backround colors more texture then just the basic gradients, add more shaeds and line work aswell, also i noticed the characters were just one art prop, with no animation from limbs and such, give them more life and make there arms and limbs more animated, even a turning of a head or blinking of eyes will help in bringing them to life more, so its an ok flash but can use some improving

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some egyption pillars to the menu screen, backrounds need more shading and line work, more animation from your characters are needed

~~OVERALL~~
a simple and older flash but still needs some work

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MonoFlauta responds:

greath thanks a lot... its really usefull "things to improve on"

[World War IV: America]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off i think you should fix the looping i had went to get a soda and it was already started, its an easy fix with some acrion scripting, and it will be much better for the viewers, also adding replay and play buttons wouldnt hurt aswell, but besides that you have a nice little flash here with some entertaining values like the animated mouths and faces, but maybe they should be somewhat more detailed, they are a good idea, and then there is more effects and such, try and really "DAZZLE" us with effects and such like stars and stuff flying around i feel it would great enhance the viewers experience on this, anyways nice job all around on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some fancy effects and also fix the looping with a stop action code

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining idea

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