XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Piconormal Activity]

Great pico day entry

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty neat i thought, the song with MJ was very impressive and a good idea i thought the music was a perfect fit for what was going on, It was nice to see this on pico day there was alot of entertaining animations on this day but this was one of my faves for this day so really nice job on bringing this to us on pico day, The animation was pretty smooth and seemed to just flow along especially with the great song that you chose, I did however think it could have had more content and a much more ending with some sorta climax but anyways them are just a few ideas that would really spruce this up and give it a much better presentation in my opinion i thought. the ending was pretty good i just thought it could have had a better and more explosive ending, well nice job great pico day entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few ideas would be some more content, aslo some better ending

~~OVERALL~~
great pico day 2010 entry

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[Saturday Morning Cartoons]

Needs to be toned down abit

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well this is notbad i thought, it starts off with some white screen?? then pops to the menu page could be my machine but its pretty good on big files, so im thinking an improved preloader or something, i like that you used alot of bright color and differant image icons on the menue that made it look interesting, and nifty if i say so myself. LOL ok as i change the chanel on the t v it seems that i run into alot of bazaar and strange scenes like the one with the homer scene hehe, its not bad but i think you should use some more censors of some type, like you did with the "DONALD DUCK" on the menu screen, but for the most part the changing of the channels was kinda neat you gave it some interactivity that way, so nice job there and also nice job on the, art likeness of the famus characters aswell, so all in all its abit much on visuals but but you gave it some humor so i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would tone down the nudity stuff or put some censor bars

~~OVERALL~~
A funny interactive flash

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[Crazy Lady]

Entertaining enough

~~REVIEW~~
Funny and entertaining the character was funny and i thought the voices were right on aswell, All seemed to work well with voices and silly animation it all seemed to roll right along all with eachother so there is some good quality about this but can still need some work, so nice animation it made me laugh

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
While the animation was nice it could still use some more smoothness to it, so these are some things you could work on, more smoothness, and more humor aswell

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining, could be better though

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[Guns. Vs. Swords]

Smooth and quick

~~REVIEW~~
First off i must say this was cute, and the animation was very smooth in animation, it did lack in color and backrounds, so these are a few things that could be worked on, like adding some backrounds or maybe even just a color backround would sufice, adding abit of color would be neat like when the one girl pulls out the gun and shoots you could have the bullets "RED" or "BLUE" something that shows a differant color, pretty much after that scene though it ends, so it does need some more content, you should add other characters that come into play and with more little battles, other then that it was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more content, some touch of color, and abit more stuff going on, also some backrounds wouldnt hurt

~~OVERALL~~
A cute fbf short flash

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[Emerald Clash final_part]

A cute flash here

~~REVIEW~~
This here episode starts off right off the bat, and with sonic just runniing out which i thought was cute the "SPRITES" look pretty crisp and sharp not all blocky looking, i also like the effects you have presented in here and you have lots of them it really inlightens up the flash, it seemed kinda slow at the start so maybe losing the "LOGO" at the start there after sonic and the other badie, maybe instead of that have the story start right off, You have sprite backrounds and sprites for characters i believe that will just increase the filesize abit much, maybe a better outcome would probably be sprite characters and more of an art backrounds, also will help reduce the file size and making your flash easier to load up, And also the "BUTTONS" you should remove the buttons and just let it it roll along like a movie, the buttons just seem to slow down the pace of the movie.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few tips would be, first remove the buttons and let it flow like a movie, the starting sega logo intro could be shorter and also some art backrounds wouldnt hurt infact it would reduce the file size

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash kinda slow at times but its a start and i thought it was pretty neat

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[SAR Story Trailer]

That was notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Too start off i must admit i do like this flash, you have presented a good rounded out story allthough the flash itself seemed to run abit slow maybe it was the intense effects and detail i did notice alot of detail in the character design, you have an idea here needs more story depth, and while there was lots of detail in the character, i thought the backrounds and backdrops could have used more as they seemed bland, all the characters looked pretty good and you really have something here, but im thinking tone down abit on the detail on the characters and possibly more effort on the story so that it balances out abit more, and maybe the film wont lag as much, anyways good flash here hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as explained less detail on the characters and more depth in the story. also abit more detail in the backround itself

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash with some awsome characters but still needs abit more

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SiloZen responds:

Thank you for the Review, i am as of now working on the start of the series, due to several mishaps that keep happening im having to keep postponing but i am working to focus alot more on everything and balance the detail out. The story will be explained soon :P

[The Wishing Well.]

Fix the loop

~~REVIEW~~
Well i gave a decent score for the content and art style, it looked like it had a unique kinda texture especially on the boys head, the animation seemed to be really on the shortside, which was a bummer because you really have something here worth the while, and with abit more longer and more content and ofcourse no "LOOPING" it will be a much more pleasent experience

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well first off to really improve on this try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, now second you have a fantastic flash here but its too short so i suggest adding more scenes and or adding some new content give the story more depth, while still keeping the simple concept

~~OVERALL~~
nice art style could use some fixing though

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