XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Feces: A short film]

This was really short, needs effort

~~REVIEW~~
You have a really short animation here, it also loops so thats an easy fix, i explain with more detail but basicly, it will stop the looping its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" you can do a search for it in the flash forums for help if you dont understand much about it, also you flash was way short you may want to think about adding more to it or making a number of short flashes so its not just one single one, thats an idea that you could try, The animation, was also too fast you want to slow it down just abit, also you should change up the "CONTENT" abit it might be abit much for some, so these are just a few things to think about, So think of new ideas, put much more effort and really put stuff into it like effects maybe a story of some sort and see what you come up with, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, These are just a few things that could help to improve on this.

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash, had some off content but it could use some improving, i explained a few ideas hope that helps abit.

~X~

[Icehockey: Sudden Death]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was awsome, even if it was abit short, but i use to play this alot and its a classic to see, so glad you made a short out of it hehe, its acyually pretty amusing and i got lots of joy and good entertainment out of this as im sure many others will aswell, you did ok here and i thought more humor and more entertaining value could have been in this but you did an outstanding job. nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and maybe with abit more story to it, some extra added humor something that all will come to enjoy

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining and short, could be a tad longer if you ask me

~X~

[Fix! my Computer]

Somewhat funny

~~REVIEW~~
This was somewhat funny but needs more improved humor, like more jokes, more stuff that is more on the "RANDOM" side of things, just more stuff that will grasp the user and give them a laugh or two give it abit more effort with humor, aswell as abit more content on backrounds and more animation, other then that it was just ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some random humor would be nice, mmore effort in that area

~~OVERALL~~
Needs more humore but is pretty good for what it is.

~X~

[Being John Rockerbitch]

Bazaar and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
um ok so this was interesting and random i would have to say, now the fact that this "LOOPS" is a sign not that much effort was there but you did seem to put effort in other parts so i will let it slide there, but anyways the opening scene was um bazaar? lol it did give off a laugh or two, the battery scene was odd, then it just ended, but like i said it was funny and the little randomness, so as to make this better then what it is, you could add more randomness making it longer and even introducing other and new characters is one idea, But anyways a good flash you have here, very entertaining and did give me a laugh but could use a few fixes to improve on things and make it a much better flash then it already is, so give it a try, see better results. Hope to see some new stuff from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad new characters, more randomness, and new scenes aswell, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons.

~~OVERALL~~
Random but pretty funny, opening scene is abit much but you know lol.

~X~

[Convenience Store Life]

Amusing too short though

~~REVIEW~~
Now here was one flash that was really short, maybe too short if you ask me, but anyways more about that later, the animation is actually entertaining just too short, you have some good characters, and somewhat animation like with the guy passing with the gun, also the movie just started no play button or anything, so you may want to add a preloader, also a stop-action code so it doesnt "LOOP" but so that it will start on the click of a play button, Now i must say i had fun with this as it was amusing and i like the three differant steps you showen and that was kinda funny, the characters were neat but why no mouths? another suggestion might be to have more realistic gun shots of something, and more smoke, but anyways good little short here could use some improving but overall i was entertained with the outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest adding a "PLAY" button and a "REPLAY" button, I would Also suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see

~~OVERALL~~
funny and amusing abit too short i thought.

~X~

[Sex in Church]

Amusing, can be improved though.

~~REVIEW~~
LOL now i have to admit this was a pretty funny "COMIC-STYLE" Toon you had even liked how it was in the comic style, but before i get to that and the rest of it, i think the "BUTTONS" you have here should be better presented, they are better then most with the hover over color change but you still need to give it somewhat of a design with putting atleast a "PLAY" written on it somehow it would be nice, but anyways, as for the content of the flash it was funny and at times got to be abit much and thats something you actually may have to be concerned about for other people who may not like, but for me i found it somewhat funny, now as for the "ART" i think you could have done a better job say with the sticks you might get better results with more character designs and such, also some more use of color in the backround, there was a number of things, cant go into all of them but what i have suggested here and below are things that will really improve on this so give it some thought, so i found this to be amusing and somewhat funny, i did suggest a few fixes for its improvment but anyways good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things as suggested are backround color and scenes, not just the white bland ones, have the characters more animated like a movie and not so much as a comic style, also wouldnt hurt to have play written on the buttons, Make Characters not the stick kind, while this does take more time and effort but it will make your flash better and with more details for the characters like color, hair clothing some facial detail, it will improve on this and your characters, something to think about for this or your next film, for improvment. So try and work on a few of the suggestions.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall it was an amusing flash but still has lots of room for improving, good luck.

~X~

[BM Baked Beans]

entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was entertaining, the "ART" was actually pretty good, i thought this could use some subtitles though, and while it was entertaining some more added humor would be nice, it was amusing but other then that it was alright, just work on those few things and practice practice, it will all show up very well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things mentioned starting with some subtitles, and some more humor.

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing and entertaining but still needs more.

~X~