XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Locked Up Ep. 2]

Awsome once again

~~REVIEW~~
Well like last time this was pretty awsome, and i would like to say you had some very good "VOICES" in here some that made it seem like these were really the characters that i had watched all them years ago, the file size loaded up "SLOWLY" which i thoought was odd but it was still ok by me.

Now this was really neat, with all sorts of characters from all sorts of stuff not just older stuff from my time but even some new stuff like starwars, so nice job on that idea there.

Lol and the ending ohmy, you have a great sense of humor there, but im thinking you should have held it just abit longer so the "POSTING" could be read but regardless you have an amzing couple of episodes here with some fantastic art and voices not to mention a funny story that you keep suprising us with, so keep up the awsome animations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well the ending was too short i wanted to see more of that sign so maybe hold it up just for a few seconds longer there at the ending

~~OVERALL~~
And another episode with a full star cast of classics to the greats

~X~

[Book of the almost dead]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
ok to start off i know its an older flash but still it must be reviewed of standards of today, so here it goes, the "MENU" screen its a real nice menu screens and relates to the movie at hand, now like in those times from the movie, "EGYPTION" times, there was "PILLARS" i think that you should have had some pillars on the menu screen like one on each side of the screen, it would have made for a niceer menu then you already have, Your characters are notbad, i like the basic look you gave them, and as for the backrounds there was some small gradients that were ok but thought you could have gave the backround colors more texture then just the basic gradients, add more shaeds and line work aswell, also i noticed the characters were just one art prop, with no animation from limbs and such, give them more life and make there arms and limbs more animated, even a turning of a head or blinking of eyes will help in bringing them to life more, so its an ok flash but can use some improving

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some egyption pillars to the menu screen, backrounds need more shading and line work, more animation from your characters are needed

~~OVERALL~~
a simple and older flash but still needs some work

~X~

MonoFlauta responds:

greath thanks a lot... its really usefull "things to improve on"

[World War IV: America]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off i think you should fix the looping i had went to get a soda and it was already started, its an easy fix with some acrion scripting, and it will be much better for the viewers, also adding replay and play buttons wouldnt hurt aswell, but besides that you have a nice little flash here with some entertaining values like the animated mouths and faces, but maybe they should be somewhat more detailed, they are a good idea, and then there is more effects and such, try and really "DAZZLE" us with effects and such like stars and stuff flying around i feel it would great enhance the viewers experience on this, anyways nice job all around on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some fancy effects and also fix the looping with a stop action code

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining idea

~X~

[SlashClassic4: Monsters!]

These are entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
These are entertaining you had a few funny things and images that all seemed to work ok, you did give it some entertaining humor which i liked, would have liked to see more humor maybe some animating abit more on that side of things but for the most part i liked it, nice job all around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some animation most of all, and use more of the backround filling it up abit more would be good

~~OVERALL~~
amusing but needs more

~X~

SlashFirestorm responds:

This is a flash I'd love to remake if I still had the .fla. My later Secret Episodes had a lot more "animation", whereas this is just a static image. The script is solid, so I should maybe remake it from scratch someday with LOTS OF GOOGLE-SEARCHED IMAGES AND SEXUAL TWEENING

[Slash Returns: Haistlwu]

Well this is interesting

~~REVIEW~~
gave abit more score to this as it did have some effort on animation and the art was ok, the subject matter was abit rough but it did make me laugh abit so for that you have done well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
less provocitive material and more humor

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing idea but still good for a laugh or two

~X~

SlashFirestorm responds:

MORE PROVOCATIVE HUMOR

I MUST FUCK SEA LIONS

[ADON 2]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Hhe well i will say that this did give me a few laughs the "ART" i thought was pretty decent, seems to lack in more of it though which i wanted to see of, but the art you did have up there was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well more animation not just the one scene,

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining for what it is

~X~

[Fantastic Easter Special]

Haha cute

~~REVIEW~~
heh this was cute, and kinda late on easter but guess you were still working on it, the actuall tune on this was pretty entertaining allthough i thought it could have used some "SUBTITLES" it was not that bad but could be a nice feature and stuff, the "ART" was good, as for the "ANIMATION" i thought could use more effort like when the bunny was bobbing his head up and down, could have flowed abit better, and as for the ending credits that was another good part i thought, not many people put much effort into the "CREDIT" but i like that you did, so props to you for an entertaining flash

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The animation could look abit smoother, and Subtitles wouldnt hurt? This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here

~~OVERALL~~
a cute belated easter flash

~X~

TheSpicanator responds:

hahaha sure thing man!

Thanks for your input. I enjoy reading peoples reviews where they explain what.
thanks again and happy easter =3