XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Woes Of Circles 4]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
You put good effort into this except it needs to be longer, the plot i like and the art could be better but it was good, keep at it, and put lots more effort you do have a little something that can be much better just needs more effort on your side of things, anyways good luck

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and add more content, some slight detail on the art along with a few effects wouldnt hurt at all

~~OVERALL~~
short and decent flash

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[Dr. Seuss Ebonics]

Lol funny

~~REVIEW~~
Heh well this was amusing, seemed abit on the short side, the visuals were nice but you need to make it longer and ad more content. more stuff going on will make it that much better, i mean i was entertained but it could have been slightly better i thought, anyways good luck in a future entry or an updated version of this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content, and make it longer with more going on some action and so fourth

~~OVERALL~~
very short but it was kinda amusing

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[Super Poo Cooks A Pokemon]

Its ok

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok the main character of well you know, Was kinda silly but it made it for an extra little laugh, this could be a good series but the quality needs to be better aswell as more more added humor, so i would start with some added etail and more shading on your character designs, something that shows off a more unique and appealing character, anyways just a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash of yours, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more detail and more shading on your character designs more character if you will

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but needs some improving

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[Jurrastick Park]

Haha good animation

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was a good animation and i was well pleased with it the "JURRASIC PARK" theme was great aswell, nice job on this, you should ad much more content really make it much more of a great thing like jurrasic park and such, it does need abit more effort on that part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more content to start, more in your face type of thing

~~OVERALL~~
entertaonong and neat idea

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[Lazy Computer Day]

Notbad for class

~~REVIEW~~
So this was more of a class thing now that i can see and understand, Hope it all worked out, The song in this was pretty good, and i liked it, and it seemed to fit well with the content, so as it was just a class thing, i thought you could have put some more effort in spicing it up, but i understand it being just a class thing, but anyways, The "CHARACTER" guy was kinda neat differant, you showed some ok effort there you shoould do more stuff like that, so for the mostpart this was a decent flash, color could be a more focus from the back end and front end, just something to think about for a future project or something, So while this was a good little flash there could be a few fixes here and there, i suggested some more "FOCUS" on color and even to spice it up with abit more stuff going on and more use with the neat character, something to work on for the next one or even some upgrade of this one, so anyways a good flash i thought just needs a few fixes here and there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well this was notbad, could be fixed up and improved with some more use of color, and something that could spice up the flash abit more, also the charcter you had could be used more also.

~~OVERALL~~
A class project but notbad at all.

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[SILLY RABBIT 2!!!]

Short but funny

~~REVIEW~~
A funny and very amusing short you have here, its abit on the "SHORT" side though, but you made it funny especially at the end, I would suggest adding much more you really have a good ending so so something more like that, and more colors and such, anyways nice job, hope to see improvments soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer, maybe add a few short flicks togeher

~~OVERALL~~
its abit short buut its entertaining

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[NeoPikachu AFD Collection]

Good lil pika

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was notbad at all i actually like it, I like the fact that pikachu is fighting and all and fighting the clock crew was a good idea but im thinking you could go one step better and have pikachu fight other characters not just the clock crew but robots and all sorts of stuff that would give it much more variaty, Theres not really much to say on this one but the fact it is a good idea, but also i think as stated that more variaty of villians and stuff just an idea or two there, anyways nice idea keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I posted an idea or two about pika fighting more variaty of vilians and enemies, just a suggestion though.

~~OVERALL~~
a good idea here with the fighting but needs more variaty

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RazorHawk responds:

Yeah, that's probably all true. Variety would definitely help next time.

I've been in a bit of a rut when it comes to making new flashes... not sure whether to start a new series or what, but I'll figure something out eventually.

Thanks again for checking this out.

[Duracell Reality]

An ad

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was an add and thats not really allowed it did have some redeeming qualities though, so notbad but something differant next time. but from what i thought it was pretty neat and had something to go with, so maybe abit more effort next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more content more animation and less advertisment style

~~OVERALL~~
its like an ad

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[Delta Ebonics]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Entertaining, but very random, maybe thats what you were going for, needs abit more, add something to the backrounds as they were blank pretty much, some even basic colors would sufice but does need something there, and maybe add some better pictures maybe something that fills the whole screen. anyways hope to see some improvments sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i said above, better images, and some backround work

~~OVERALL~~
abit bland needs some work done on this.

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