XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 047]

Another entertaining adventure

~~REVIEW~~
Now with these pokemon ones they are a little better with the pokemon viduals, but again like the others but still like that there is more color in this one over the other ones, regardless i like them, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some animation more then what you got going on and other scenes to go with.

~~OVERALL~~
Another entertaining hitler adventure, needs more though.

~X~

[Happy Sack Loop]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was more cute then anything else, kinda on the short end though, but you could improve on this like you could make it bounce in alot more areas more scene selections and overall differant places to give the flash itself a more longer and fuller feel, but i must say yyou made some nice animation with the art and especially the animation which i like so props to you just wish there was more there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more scenes let the character jump all around into new scenes and stuff

~~OVERALL~~
needs more scenes and more places to jump

~X~

skychase responds:

Cheers for the review mate, i'm gonna make it longer now. I'm gonna do some extra training on the 12 principles of animation, so i hope the next one is gonna be better and more entertaining.

[100k dollar laptop]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
first off this was prett neat with the opening loader page i like how you really gave it some design and detail and abit of art detail and it all came together for one nice piece keep up the good work in that area, now as for the flash itself, it seems too short, the artwork and humor was ok but still way too short, i could possibly see this in a colab of sorts but does need abit more attention there, everythingelse is pretty good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer or add other shorts along with it for a more entertaining value

~~OVERALL~~
Nice use of clocks and some ok humor but could be longer

[11 Second Club]

Artsy

~~REVIEW~~
First of all the art on this is pretty good, it has an artsy type, good old style colors also help and make it more unique in that way thats why i like this one so props to you on that, it was well made too, allthough i thought it could have had some more effort in being slightly longer and such but for the most part it was entertaing so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More longer with a few more character changes wouldnt hur, for the mostpart it was alright

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining i enjoyed it very much

Lotl responds:

Well I was restricted with length. The audio clip is 11 seconds, and the animation had to match for the assignment.
But thank you for your review.

[Hazzrine - Trapped]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
This is actually pretty funny, and i like the character work you have in this, also the voices were pretty good, but why so short??? it was just getting good too, but anyways you presented some nice color, nice character work, good sounds, the only point of improving would be make it longer add more scenes and you could also add some subtitles, wouldnt hurt allthough the sound was ok, anyways longer next time, i look forward to seeing more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Making it longer with abit more content and some new stuff to entertain the viewers.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but could have more content

~X~

[Slaughterhouse 5 intro]

Could be longer

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well to start off this was interesting, its an intro ofcourse but it was kinda neat, but still too short thought you could have added much more then that, maybe have the title have more animation or go more into it with some character details and such so that it shows more on what to expect on the stuff that is presented in the full version, just a thought though but from what i see , its pretty good i thought, just abit on the shortside for me, anyways good luck on any more stuff in the future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i mentioned how about longer showing more characters of the full version, and more animated effects like with the title or something

~~OVERALL~~
short intro but gets to the point

~X~

falling responds:

Of course I could have added more bells and whistles, but what can't you recommend that for? As for the length, I was asked to create something around 15 seconds. As you can see I actually went over that time. More characters would have been a good addition though. Thank you.