XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hook Line and Sinker]

colorfull and cute

~~REVIEW~~
Another good animation you have here, lots of great colors, and some smooth aniamtion from all the fish, the "MUSIC" was perfect i thought for all this, it just worked very well on this whole flash, once again this flash was "LOOPING" so once again ill say add a stop action code, ill explain that down below, you have a very smooth and inlightening flash here, there was alot of great use of colors and smooth animating i was pleased with this even with the looping and all, just work on the looping and all will be just fine, a slight file reduction wouldnt hurt either, anyways untill next time keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Another cute animation with nice use of color

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billyblob responds:

Hello XwaynecoltX,
First off, thank you for the nice comments. And also thank you for pointing out the looping problem. I uploaded a new version which stops and added a button to play. It should be approved soon. Thanks again!

[Battle of Washington D.C.]

Cute little flash you have here

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm ok first off i thought this was a cute little flash you had here i was not too happy about how short it was, buit it did turnout too be something funny and did gave me the humor i wanted, it was short and too the point, the "SOUTHPARK" like characters gave this abit more entertaining value, as did the jpeg backrounds, but all in all i did think it was too short at the end, and could have been much more with a longer ending introduction of new and more characters aswell as taking the flash into other scenes, so for what it is i did enjoy it, nice job on this short little flick

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it needs to be longer, introduce more and new characters and add some differant backround scenes

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining short

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[God of War 2 Theme]

It was ok

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, very well infact i thought it could have used abit of compression though, but for the mostpart it was alright, it didnt jump out at me but istill enjoyed what you had but like i said it needs some comression, so work on that and all should be good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well compression is a start in my opinion ofcourse

~~OVERALL~~
Abit large in file but overall it was an alreight flash.

~X~

[Sonic Halo]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad of a flash here it was fantastic, and has an ok "STORY" thats something you should work on more as thats what got me interested anyways nice job there, more work is needed on other parts of this flash, but you do have something with the story, so keep at it, and once again nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i said the story is good, but the rest needs some work, more animation and fancy effects can really spruce this up, so hope these small tips may help out

~~OVERALL~~
its notbad mostly the story is good rest needs work

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[Otto's Goat Farm]

Lol funny

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe ok that was amusing and funny, kinda figured what was gonna happen when the guy came up and stuff i was very amused with the "CENSORED" scene hehe, anyways nice job here you should think about making a series of toons with this same style of art and humor. if you did that you would see how well this style would work, so give it a try sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
its kinda easy to see whats next so maybe make it so its more surprising to the viewer so some new ideas may help, but also this could turn into a series of some sort, good luck with that

~~OVERALL~~
it was funny and had some areas where it can improve see above for details

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[Star Wars - Black Menace]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this could be abit funnier, and the quality of the art and graphics could use abit more effort of detail and such, and it wouldnt hurt to have some flashy effects in the backround aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs abit more of effort

~~OVERALL~~
Could be funier but its decent

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[Slipknot Wazzup]

Funny but old

~~REVIEW~~
Well it still had abit of funny humor even for as old as it is, it was abit entertaining but also kinda old so i can understand that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more humor to it

~~OVERALL~~
Funny

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[Lincolnfrog]

Funny

~~REVIEW~~
This one was funny and did make me laugh more then a few times so i was pleased with it, i wouldnt mind seeing more humor anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more humor

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining, hope to see more in the future

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