XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic Halo]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad of a flash here it was fantastic, and has an ok "STORY" thats something you should work on more as thats what got me interested anyways nice job there, more work is needed on other parts of this flash, but you do have something with the story, so keep at it, and once again nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i said the story is good, but the rest needs some work, more animation and fancy effects can really spruce this up, so hope these small tips may help out

~~OVERALL~~
its notbad mostly the story is good rest needs work

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[Otto's Goat Farm]

Lol funny

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe ok that was amusing and funny, kinda figured what was gonna happen when the guy came up and stuff i was very amused with the "CENSORED" scene hehe, anyways nice job here you should think about making a series of toons with this same style of art and humor. if you did that you would see how well this style would work, so give it a try sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
its kinda easy to see whats next so maybe make it so its more surprising to the viewer so some new ideas may help, but also this could turn into a series of some sort, good luck with that

~~OVERALL~~
it was funny and had some areas where it can improve see above for details

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[Star Wars - Black Menace]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this could be abit funnier, and the quality of the art and graphics could use abit more effort of detail and such, and it wouldnt hurt to have some flashy effects in the backround aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs abit more of effort

~~OVERALL~~
Could be funier but its decent

~X~

[Slipknot Wazzup]

Funny but old

~~REVIEW~~
Well it still had abit of funny humor even for as old as it is, it was abit entertaining but also kinda old so i can understand that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more humor to it

~~OVERALL~~
Funny

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[Lincolnfrog]

Funny

~~REVIEW~~
This one was funny and did make me laugh more then a few times so i was pleased with it, i wouldnt mind seeing more humor anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more humor

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining, hope to see more in the future

~X~

[FLIES!!]

Needs work

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was very short and didnt have much so you may want to re-work this one, more content is needed, anyways better luck next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more content and effort

~~OVERALL~~
needs more work but its cool

~X~

[Winter River]

Needs more to it

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad allthough this could use some music of some sort, and love the file size keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good effort needs audio.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent stuff

~X~

[Seizure Moutain]

Lots of flashing

~~REVIEW~~
Well this didnt have much, infact it was basicly just flashing , loved the size but it could be much more then this maybe some plot or some video like thing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some new ideas

~~OVERALL~~
Better luck next time

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