XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 195]

Decent but could use more effort

~~REVIEW~~
So here we go with #195, and again with the cute nintendo music, i like some changes with making {HITLER} a differant color so it does show abit more effort there on your part, but still lacks in animating, the {SONG} here is pleasent also, the jpeg backround is notbad but wouldnt mind seeing more art style stuff, and as suggested before have the pokeball {GLOW} or even spin or something, but again the flash was cute but needs more to it, but for what it is i did find it amusing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the pokeball spin, have a more animated backround or even artstyle backround, suggested some other ideas above.

~~OVERALL~~
Needs more to it, but is still amusing

~X~

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 176]

Love the song

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe i really liked the {NINTENDO} sound/fx in this one and also that other song right after, i must tell you i have had fun reviewing these as its like a trip down memory lane with all the old stuff from you hehe, but as you know i wish there was some more {ANIMATION} in all these, more scenes and such, dont mean to sound like a broken record but it would be much better for all of us, but anyhow, good flash again the song was very pleasent and nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained more animation and more scenes, but more action from hitler aswell

~~OVERALL~~
a good and pleasent song on this one, but again needs more animating

~X~

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 120]

Needs some animation

~~REVIEW~~
ok so on this one i liked the music you had very "NICE" and pleaent, as for the visuals, you just have the one viewing, and not really any animation i thought maybe in this one you could have had a "SAIL-BOAT" or something just something that would give it a more animation style, and such. something to work on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some animation i suggested a sail boat moving back and fourth in the backround, could help.

~~OVERALL~~
Another adventure with hitler, needs some animating though, music was pretty good.

~X~

[Testdrive]

amusing with a twist

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well first off you may want to ad some sorta stop action code so it doesnt just start off, the user may want to view the menu page or even may have not been at the computer and waiting for it to load, a stop-action code, would stop it from starting now you probably want to make a nice play button to go along with that though, just a thought though, i did notice you did have a "REPLAY" button though and that was a good touch, but anyways onto your flash here, Lol ok i will admit it was some funny stuff, you made a funny flash in just aboyt two scenes not bad, but would have been nice to see more scenes, as for the joke lol it was funny, the "VOICES" were ok, but also had abit of scratchy sounds, and muffled at times, so maybe next time you could have better quality voices and or even have some "SUBTITLES" just a thought or two for better improvment, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there could be a number of things to make this better i would start off with some Subtitles, and even some better voices or less scratchy ones, also some stop action code so it doesnt just start off, adding a "PLAY" button at the start would be a nice improvment aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
a funny short with a sick twist, i thought it was pretty well done though, made me laugh.

~X~

[Red Right Hand]

Could use some improving

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok so it took abit to load even with a somewhat small size of film, now nice job on the "MUSIC" and even "SOUND/FX" this seemed very short thoough, i was watching as i was reviewing and it was over in a gunshot hehe, but anyways good music some ok characters you had in the scene, just way too short, if you ask me i think the loading part took longer, and since you do have good characters here and even music, along with some decent backrounds, it could have gone longer with more stuff, more scenes and even more to that story, cause it started off really good. also i think the "GREY" backround with the credits could be a more brighter color, or if its too much to do all the work in making a full on story, try and make other short clips and put them along with this to ad more of a short few clips kinda like a collab of sorts and such, well just a thought or two that could improve on this as it was abit disapointing, but like i said it can be improved to show more of the story and all, Really good choice of music though, and as short as it was i did like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few things mentioned above like, more story, more content, characters scenes and so on, and also change up the grey backround for the credits to something more brighter.

~~OVERALL~~
Too short but good quality and a start to something nifty

~X~

[Resident Evil CC]

It was decent

~~REVIEW~~
A decent flash here had some good humor to it and was entertaining and thats the important part i thought, you should make another though, something more effort wise with much more stuff going on and more humor of course, it would be much more entertaining, just give more thought into what you are presenting with all elemnts like humor, art, action and characters.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the 2nd part, ad new stuff and add more funny content aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and funny with this one

~X~

[<blank> (0m41s)]

Needs more content

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well i thouoght this was way too "SHORT" the music was really nice and pleasent and it seemed to fit what was going on with the visuals, but again i felt it was just too short and seems like you could have put the effort fourth and really made this into something awsome more then what it is, dont get me wrong its pretty impressive even as short as it may be, by adding more content and more of a story with "BLANK" in mind you started it off great with these odd characters and such, but again just short lived and too short, now as it is black and white thats pretty cool, i think you could have added abit of "COLOR" even if just a touch, so with all that said, things that could make this better are ofcourse more "CONTENT" more of a story, abit longer if you will, and then some color not alot as to take away from the Black and white style but something that has just a touch of color, so all and all i did enjoy this, it was just too short, and needed abit more ump to it, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so adding more content and more of a story is a plus, but also Black and white flashes are notbad, but while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation, anyways good luck

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash, could have been much better, but it is decent for what it is.

~X~

Surn responds:

I guess the main thing was that I was itching to choreograph the song. It goes without saying that if you choreograph a short song your production will be short. Even so it's still a good point that I should try to look on (nobody would rather eat a fun size chocolate bar). As for the content and color: content/plot would have been difficult (but not impossible) add yet the color would indeed make it look better but it would have needed more than "just a touch".

So to recap I need to:
- Make it longer
- Use color
- Use plot (though I might be able to get away without it [see:ANIMUTATION])
- Overall try harder

Thanks for your help, I appreciate it.

[Attn: Joker_adt]

Needs more

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so its been awhile since i seen stuff like this and this was always a great refresher of how newgrounds was back then it seemed alot more fun back then, but anyways the five differant flashes were all the same, wish there was something abit differant but still gave me a laugh or two, so nice job on that, add more next time., anyways good luck on your next entry, thats if you still make stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add something differant to each clip the same ol thing is amusing but tends to get abit old also.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing, needs more to it though.

~X~