XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[11 Second Club]

Artsy

~~REVIEW~~
First of all the art on this is pretty good, it has an artsy type, good old style colors also help and make it more unique in that way thats why i like this one so props to you on that, it was well made too, allthough i thought it could have had some more effort in being slightly longer and such but for the most part it was entertaing so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More longer with a few more character changes wouldnt hur, for the mostpart it was alright

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining i enjoyed it very much

Lotl responds:

Well I was restricted with length. The audio clip is 11 seconds, and the animation had to match for the assignment.
But thank you for your review.

[Hazzrine - Trapped]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
This is actually pretty funny, and i like the character work you have in this, also the voices were pretty good, but why so short??? it was just getting good too, but anyways you presented some nice color, nice character work, good sounds, the only point of improving would be make it longer add more scenes and you could also add some subtitles, wouldnt hurt allthough the sound was ok, anyways longer next time, i look forward to seeing more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Making it longer with abit more content and some new stuff to entertain the viewers.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but could have more content

~X~

[Slaughterhouse 5 intro]

Could be longer

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well to start off this was interesting, its an intro ofcourse but it was kinda neat, but still too short thought you could have added much more then that, maybe have the title have more animation or go more into it with some character details and such so that it shows more on what to expect on the stuff that is presented in the full version, just a thought though but from what i see , its pretty good i thought, just abit on the shortside for me, anyways good luck on any more stuff in the future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i mentioned how about longer showing more characters of the full version, and more animated effects like with the title or something

~~OVERALL~~
short intro but gets to the point

~X~

falling responds:

Of course I could have added more bells and whistles, but what can't you recommend that for? As for the length, I was asked to create something around 15 seconds. As you can see I actually went over that time. More characters would have been a good addition though. Thank you.

[The Hell Are My Legs 17]

lol i like

~~REVIEW~~
lol i like this one, its way too short though, you should think of adding more content though, but these are funny, kinda reminds me of the eskimo bob series short and funny, now as for improving you should add more characters make it longer and even speed up the animation abit, but other then that these are pretty funny . keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
like i said before longer some other and new scenes and some new characters wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
another and cute animation

~X~

[The Hell Are My Legs 33]

lol funny

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well that was amusing, i remember seeing alot of these back in the day im glad to see that you are still making them, now as short as this one is, its actually ok with me as it was abit more quality then the others but really like the use of color you got going on this one though, i enjoyed it and cant wait for some more, as for improving on some more, abit longer and have the main character do abit more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well as suggested you could have more going on like more scenes and stuff.

~~OVERALL~~
funny and entertaining

~X~

[William the Br00t 2]

crazy

~~REVIEW~~
haha that was pretty funny and amusing i thought, lots of good color, and i like the backrounds you used, you showed some good {DETAIL} now the flash itself is kinda short but you gave it just the right amount of content it was creepy at the same time but still entertaining, i wouldnt mind it beeing abit longer though, maybe take it into more scenes but for the most part it was pretty entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could see it a tad longer maybe other scenes and a few other characters wouldnt hurt

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining abit short but still ok i thought

~X~

[Pumpkin Dissection]

kinda short

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well i wont lie this was very cute and i got a good laugh out of it, it was kinda short, the pumnkin idea was neat but thios could have been slightly better if abit longer and showing that the kid did get to cut it, also your flash {LOOPS} you may want to add a stop action code at the start of your {TIMELINE} so it doesnt loop, and if your gonna have short flashes why not add a number of short ones and put them in here so that its not so short just an idea though, anyways good luck on your next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well a few things could really be worked on, first off adding a stop action code, adding more to the story, and or adding other short animations to go with.

~~OVERALL~~
Abit on the short side but still cute, i enjoyed it.
~X~

Mukki responds:

(: Thanks! I'm not sure how to put a preloader in so if I ever do learn, i'll make sure add it in this one and other future submissions.