XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Physics of a flash movie]

An ok tutorial

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was an ok tutorial on how animation works i thought it could have been better with better characters then sticks, and also you could do something with the backrounds as they were very bland.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backrounds could use some improving much more detail atleast

~~OVERALL~~
Its ok but needs more effort, nice idea though

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[Senseless]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Nice little animation you have here, seems the loop is small though you should think about adding more sticks maybe even differant color ones, anyways it was funny, hope to see more stuff like this one, good luck

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a longer loop and more sticks even differant colors, or what you can do to really improve would be to make character characters so as to get away from the stick characters.

~~OVERALL~~
It was interesting seems like it could use more stuff though

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[Kirby's Adventure Deflate]

Cute kirby

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was a cute movie, the screen did seem abit small so maybe make it larger in an upgrade or something. but you had a funny and very cute flash then again kirby is always cute and always makes everything a little brighter, anyways nice work on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could make it longer and add some more funny and cute characters like kirby

~~OVERALL~~
A cute and amusing flash here

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[SILLY RABBIT!]

Funny episode here

~~REVIEW~~
A short episode you have here but its funny, a good parody infact, i would like to see it longer, it just seemed abit too short or like i explain below to add a lot of short films in one flash, anyways hope that helps

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content and or add a few more short films combined as one

~~OVERALL~~
kinda short but seemed ok still has room for lots of improvement

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[Wassup - Election 2000]

haha silly

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was silly, but i liked it, i thought you could have used abit better work on backrounds but as a wazzzup flash it was good. abit more effort on humor would be nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more effort on humor even for an older flash as it is

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining flash as these types always are

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[History of fuck!]

lol

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok this was amusing gave me a few laughs, i could see this improving with a differant backround besides the white one. the one you had just gave it a bland feel, so add more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change the backround, so that its not so bland looking

~~OVERALL~~
Could use some improvments

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[Yoda is a SEXY bitch]

Needs more work

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda funny but needs some work, such as adding some subtiles wouldnt hurt, also seemed abit short, and i would remove the "JPEG" heads but thats just my opinion

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles and remove the jpeg heads

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but needs more work

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[Herbal tea art class]

it had some effort

~~REVIEW~~
Other then effort it was kinda silly but then again thats what a flash should be like hehe, the buttons got anoying after awhile, but i still found this flash amusing, so if i can offer any help it would be too, work on the buttons so they dont get in the way or in an anoying matter

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
work on the buttons, like i said they tend to get anoying, so maybe thats something to work on

~~OVERALL~~
A silly flash with some nice effort but could be cleaned up somewhat

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[Roomies "Getting Along"]

notbad of a flash

~~REVIEW~~
Good artwork really nice details on the characters, the voices could be abit improved with more quality to them but overall this was an entertaining flash make more scenes next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well first off try and reduce the file size abit, 2nd work on some more quality for the voices, and then last but not least take the story into more scenes,

~~OVERALL~~
overall a good and entertaining flash

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[These Are My Favorite]

Random

~~REVIEW~~
Yeah i would say this is abit on the random side but it was some pretty awsome randomness, which i really liked, it flowed along from scene to next scene and just an overall fun feel i especially like all the drawings and such on

this verywelldone right from the start

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You may want to think about adding some color in there even if its just abit of it

~~OVERALL~~
A nice black and white random flash

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