XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NINGA death squad (part 1]

haha entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well its entertaining atleast, seems like you could have a better design about this but its still ok with me, just work more on better options and detailed art work, for the mostpart it was amusing though, but as i said could use some improved art work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some detail in your art and a better design around this game, more colors more shades and most of all more details within your art style will help on this

~~OVERALL~~
Fun but needs improving with some art

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[EVILDAVE TV - Gun Control]

I thought it was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
This was an interesting yet ok flash, some improved drawings wouldnt have hurt but overall i did like this so nice job, allthough this is somewhat of an older film i do understand that it was back then but i could still see this improving just abit here and there would be a start in the detail portion of it all, anyways good luck on any other flash related stuff you have planned

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as i did say just a minute agao, the drawings could be improved on with more effort and some more fine detail, thats just a start but that is defenantly a start in the right direction

~~OVERALL~~
Needs some more effort but its a start

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[remington blumb's fantasy]

silly

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was abit silly but thats the idea right? you could have used more amusing stuff though, just to give it more humor, maybe some "RANDOM" animations would also be something that worked for this kinda silly flash anyways nice job, keep up the silly animations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
entertaining but needs more humor, and possibly will benifit from some random humor and animations aswell

~~OVERALL~~
funny as it can be, needs abit more though

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[GIFT FOR ALL WAZZUP FANS]

haha loved it

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i love these types with the wazzup themes and this was entertaining and gave me a good laugh, maybe add a new twist to these ever growing styles of themes. yeah it needs something new the theme styles are cool, maybe make it so that someone kills the wazzup guy or something?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you adding a whole new twist on these wazzup flashes with maybe the other people killing the wazzup guy because they thought he was anoying or something

~~OVERALL~~
Wazzup lol

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[nightmare :<>]

Strange and odd

~~REVIEW~~
Very strange and i didnt understand it but still props to you on this with the fantastic effects and lighting effects really stoodout, but the ending seemed to just end with no real result, it was all sorta confusing even the text on stuff, but for the mostpart it was fantastic on art and animation

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more an ending to this, it was just abit on the confusing side

~~OVERALL~~
strange but it was pretty fantastic

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[PhOeNiX AwAken]

Random and short

~~REVIEW~~
This was random and somewhat short the sonic dancing was amusing though then there was other random characters, then it sorta just ended, didnt make sense most of the time, so i suggest clean it up, and rework it abit

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to this and add more with more characters and more less random so one can kinda understand it

~~OVERALL~~
abit random but still entertaining

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[Super Cheese Head Eps 1]

abit random

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, made me laugh abit, the randomness of the odd characters and random cheese and stuff at the start was neat, the character work was ok but the film lacked abit like in the backrounds, alsoyou need to add a stop action code in there so it doesnt loop over and over, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some backrounds, my only other issue with this one would be that it would "LOOP" over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code.

~~OVERALL~~
I thought it was neat even if abit on the random side

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[Star Fox greeting card]

Abit plain

~~REVIEW~~
You had the right idea but this particular one seemed more on the plain side, you should have added more content, but also the colors seemed all wrong you need some darker and deeper colors, i know its a card and all but seems like it needs more visuals and even some interaction

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some deeper colors, more content and maybe abit of interactivity

~~OVERALL~~
notbad but could be better

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