XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Magnum Pie Ii: Caddyshack]

Needs more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok i must say this one gave me a {LAUGH} or two, it was silly because you did ad jpegs and some art style to it, but not much infact it sorta {LOOPED} and you should probably fix that, which is an easy fix, with a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} but thats just one idea on how to improve on this, if you ask me i think you should get away from the jepegs and make more art style stuff cause i could see you making {TOM} in a cartoony style which would have been abit more entertaining i thought, now with all that said you could also ad much more to it, more content and more of a story it was a few jpegs and just sorta ended, but making it longer will make it more entertaining then just the random humor, just something to think of, but if you di insist on the jpegs make it longer and with a more wide {VARIATY} of jpegs and such, also something to think about, so this was entertaining and did give me a laugh or two, but in the end it still does need more effort on stuff, longer and more humor is needed, anyways good luck on your next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all it was amusing but needs more jpegs or even better more toony style toms, and needs more content and more effort on giving it more of a story and such.

~~OVERALL~~
a short and random tom selec parody, i found it amusing

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[Oradovencha]

Entertaining, needs abit more though

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was a cute like {COMIC} style of a toon, i like the comic style and even that of its black and white style, a few things i did notice however, are, first that the music is ok but you can hear some {STATIC} in the backround, now you may want to fix that and have a sharper more clear sounding music to it, and second i wouldnt mind seeing abit of {COLOR} in the black and white, not alot just maybe some eyes here and there or maybe another idea would be that the outer {FRAME} is in color while still keeping the {COMIC} in black and white, and now the last thing but not the least, but you have the flash {LOOPING} i would suggest adding a stop action code, so it doesnt loop also some play and replay buttons at the start and end would also be nice, these are just a few ideas that could improve onto this cute little comic style flash, but anyways i had fun watching this and even got a good laugh or two from it so keep up the good flash animations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I had mentioned a few things that i thought could improve on this so first off i though abit of color could be added, my only other issue with this one would be that it would "LOOP" over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code. oh and one more thing i found was that you can hear some {STATIC} in the music so the quality was abit low, well hope you get something from the review.

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining comic style, needs abit of cleaning up though.

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 195]

Decent but could use more effort

~~REVIEW~~
So here we go with #195, and again with the cute nintendo music, i like some changes with making {HITLER} a differant color so it does show abit more effort there on your part, but still lacks in animating, the {SONG} here is pleasent also, the jpeg backround is notbad but wouldnt mind seeing more art style stuff, and as suggested before have the pokeball {GLOW} or even spin or something, but again the flash was cute but needs more to it, but for what it is i did find it amusing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the pokeball spin, have a more animated backround or even artstyle backround, suggested some other ideas above.

~~OVERALL~~
Needs more to it, but is still amusing

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 176]

Love the song

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe i really liked the {NINTENDO} sound/fx in this one and also that other song right after, i must tell you i have had fun reviewing these as its like a trip down memory lane with all the old stuff from you hehe, but as you know i wish there was some more {ANIMATION} in all these, more scenes and such, dont mean to sound like a broken record but it would be much better for all of us, but anyhow, good flash again the song was very pleasent and nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained more animation and more scenes, but more action from hitler aswell

~~OVERALL~~
a good and pleasent song on this one, but again needs more animating

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 120]

Needs some animation

~~REVIEW~~
ok so on this one i liked the music you had very "NICE" and pleaent, as for the visuals, you just have the one viewing, and not really any animation i thought maybe in this one you could have had a "SAIL-BOAT" or something just something that would give it a more animation style, and such. something to work on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some animation i suggested a sail boat moving back and fourth in the backround, could help.

~~OVERALL~~
Another adventure with hitler, needs some animating though, music was pretty good.

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[Testdrive]

amusing with a twist

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well first off you may want to ad some sorta stop action code so it doesnt just start off, the user may want to view the menu page or even may have not been at the computer and waiting for it to load, a stop-action code, would stop it from starting now you probably want to make a nice play button to go along with that though, just a thought though, i did notice you did have a "REPLAY" button though and that was a good touch, but anyways onto your flash here, Lol ok i will admit it was some funny stuff, you made a funny flash in just aboyt two scenes not bad, but would have been nice to see more scenes, as for the joke lol it was funny, the "VOICES" were ok, but also had abit of scratchy sounds, and muffled at times, so maybe next time you could have better quality voices and or even have some "SUBTITLES" just a thought or two for better improvment, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there could be a number of things to make this better i would start off with some Subtitles, and even some better voices or less scratchy ones, also some stop action code so it doesnt just start off, adding a "PLAY" button at the start would be a nice improvment aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
a funny short with a sick twist, i thought it was pretty well done though, made me laugh.

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[Red Right Hand]

Could use some improving

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok so it took abit to load even with a somewhat small size of film, now nice job on the "MUSIC" and even "SOUND/FX" this seemed very short thoough, i was watching as i was reviewing and it was over in a gunshot hehe, but anyways good music some ok characters you had in the scene, just way too short, if you ask me i think the loading part took longer, and since you do have good characters here and even music, along with some decent backrounds, it could have gone longer with more stuff, more scenes and even more to that story, cause it started off really good. also i think the "GREY" backround with the credits could be a more brighter color, or if its too much to do all the work in making a full on story, try and make other short clips and put them along with this to ad more of a short few clips kinda like a collab of sorts and such, well just a thought or two that could improve on this as it was abit disapointing, but like i said it can be improved to show more of the story and all, Really good choice of music though, and as short as it was i did like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few things mentioned above like, more story, more content, characters scenes and so on, and also change up the grey backround for the credits to something more brighter.

~~OVERALL~~
Too short but good quality and a start to something nifty

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[Resident Evil CC]

It was decent

~~REVIEW~~
A decent flash here had some good humor to it and was entertaining and thats the important part i thought, you should make another though, something more effort wise with much more stuff going on and more humor of course, it would be much more entertaining, just give more thought into what you are presenting with all elemnts like humor, art, action and characters.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the 2nd part, ad new stuff and add more funny content aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and funny with this one

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