XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wrong Date]

Art style was ok

~~REVIEW~~
The art style of this was neat lots of color used, and the character itself was kinda odd, but seemed ok, the story was simple and somewhat funny, and gives a few laughs, as for the character design it was ok like i said but needs more toned down look to it, the humor of this flash was ok could use more joke type of situations though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nice animation here, maybe tone down the size of the characters and add more jokes in this

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but could use abit more work

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[Dance, Snake Man, Dance!]

needs more content

~~REVIEW~~
This little flash did enlighten me, the repetitive-ness didnt though, the backrounds were better then nothing but however all that said i do believe it could have used more effort along the side such as images and differant designs in the backrounds and maybe other dancers aswell along with the main one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more dancers, and add some other backround designs besides just the changing colors

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing dance

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auriplane responds:

Thanks for the review!! I'll try a lot harder on my next music video--I didn't really know what I was doign on this first one. Well, I still don't, but I'll try to learn before the next one :-) Or I'll collaborate with someone.

[Kyubichan Sings! (TNF)]

ok notbad

~~REVIEW~~
ok well first off i thought it was just the text but then came the art, so maybe you should shorten the starting point just abit so you can get to the art part faster, as soon as i got to that portion it was more pleasent all and all it was an ok flash you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
cut out the start just abit

~~OVERALL~~
Abit long but still a good entertaining laugh from this one

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Redtaurus23 responds:

Thanks for reviewing my flash animation. :D. I knew I should have cut down the build up a bit.

[SWAP! ch.1]

awsome animation

~~REVIEW~~
wow im impressed with this, mainly the animation the character work was very impressive aswell, it could use some sorta subtitles though, this was an all around great flash with lots of effort shown on animation and great fight scenes, good character designs aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles if even that

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome flash great effort all around

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grey-cap responds:

we figured it may be better if we just spoke on our native tongue and have subtitles instead as well, we tried to dissimulate our accent but as you can see it was a no go, lol
thank you for your words

[Fap to NG acts: Pimp]

hehe neat

~~REVIEW~~
hehe there was not much to this one it clearly needs abit more interactivity to this links and buttons and such, it was amusing though and takes you down memory lane to see the old acount, anyways glad to have seen this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more stuff like i posted above more stuff to do atleast

~~OVERALL~~
mildly entertaining nice trip down memory lane

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[Perpetual Motion Boy]

Its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
I gave you a seven for effort you really do have a long episode here i think it needs to be broken down abit so its not so long but more into parts, the art was ok seems like you could detail your characters abit more and the backrounds were notbad, the animation was ok i thought

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some effects like when special things happen, cut the episode into parts if you can as it seemed to drag on

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining episode, could have more detail on characters

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