XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[a Grand Old Day]

cute animation

~~REVIEW~~
cute animation i like the silent film type still wish there was some sorta color there to give it a twist on the black and white style, and it needs more characters in there, the animation was well animated though and has a funny outcome so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add other characters and an ounce of color here or there wouldnt hurt at all, even for a black and white style

~~OVERALL~~
funny and amusing black and white style here

~X~

[OSAI Act2 p20]

Brilliant

~~REVIEW~~
This was a brilliant idea and i really like the orb and all after it dropped it tottally went random which was ok but just wish i could understand the story part of it abit more, work more on a streamline story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story would be nice but not as randome as you have here

~~OVERALL~~
Nice flash abit on the random side

~X~

UntoldEdman01 responds:

thanks, i know i have raploads to work on, yeah it was a segment for the thing, and i put a lotta work on it, gah i was tired, more story next time got it

[Giant-Tetris(Gigantetris)]

Funny film

~~REVIEW~~
Funny idea you have here, good little flash neat characters and the idea of the giant tetris is neat, i thought the text moved abit too slow and it got confusing to see with the transparent bar behind it, it was an ok lil flash though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
why dont you add a little mini game of the giant tetris hehe, also remove the trannsparent bar behind the text and also slow the subtitles down just abit

~~OVERALL~~
A good idea fresh looking characters and a funny outcome

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[Its a mario BETA]

its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
hehe ok this gave me a short laugh, the toon was abit on the short side, not such a bad thing but might have been abit more entertaining if it had just a tad more story to it also allowing for more humor, the coins didnt make sense but it was still an ok little toon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer have mario confront luigie abit more

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining but too short

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