XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Love I'm Searching 4]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off i will comment on the 19 mb flash its not often i do review flash thats that huge but i suppose it cant hurt, only issue with that for me anyways is it does tend to take a much longer time to load up especially on much slower machines and such, now while you do have alot to get all in there, i would hope you thought that people might enjoy your flash if they could get past the load time much faster, And i do only say this because it did take awhile to load, and my machine is not all that slow either, maybe it could be done in maybe two parts? or maybe some of the high detail and effect parts could be toned down? them are just a few ideas, Now on more positive matters i liked your menu page very smooth looking animation with the yellow strips and such, i liked it, And now as for the flash itself.

Ok so as it finnally starts, it was well worth the wait i must say, really smooth animation some of the best "QUALITY" of visuals and wow again for some awsome camera agles. really made for an awsome flash, everything ran smooth i did however think it ran too fast though, you have some brilliant characters and everything all seemed to work around eachother, also some nice effects like backround lights and shadows, this truly was like a realistic movie with very unique and wild characters i was so pleased to see this even with the size that it was so very welldone, maybe not so large if size next time though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lowering the file size would be first on my list, i went into detail above, but the main point is longer files take longer for people to get to your presentation, so make it easier for people to view it with less of a file size that would sufice,

~~OVERALL~~
One hell of a movie as it was more like a movie then any flash i seen so awsome job i really enjoyed this

~X~

Skaijo responds:

I really appreciate the indepth review. I'm going to continue working on compressing the images that I move into the animation, which will increase their pixelation just a bit but greatly reduce the overall filesize of the animation. I guess I just took for granted that everyone was on a high connection to the internet, but trying to watch my animations from my work computer and comments like this has really opened my eyes that I should be a bit more fair when it comes to size. I'll certainly put the effort forward. <3

[On One Day]

Needs abit more

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off i want to mention about the menu screen, it seems as if the "PLAY" buttons was way too small, it was not hard to find or anything but just seems i did have to look close, great job on the backround menu thingie though, that was a rather nice touch, I love the "SOFT" art and drawings now i see why the animation started off abit slow, but that was the perfect approach i thought, love the overtop "VIEW" on this, allthough it was slow it just seemed to work so really nice job, i do wish the whole animation was "LONGER" as it was pretty good and with some really nice and smooth artwork, just wish there was more to it, so if i can suggest anything i would go with adding more content expanding on the story could only mean a plus from this reviewer, so anyways great flash nice art and fantastic, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more content stretch the story abit more if you can.

~~OVERALL~~
A slow yet fantastic flash story

~X~

[Violence Without Meaning]

Entertaining, could use abit of fixing up

~~REVIEW~~
this was a neat little movie, the buttons i thought could be removed, you should have it just flow like a regular movie, or if you absolutly need to have the buttons make them "LARGER" so that they are easier to click. also at the start of the movie when the guy first walks up it looks more like he is sliding then anything else, you should have his "LEGS" more animated and more spread apart as he is walking in that animation, and not to nag but also the "TEXT-BUBBLES" could also be a tad larger, these are just a few tips that may help to better present the movie and in turn get much better outcome from it, so try it out and just go with it, ok and last but not least you should not have all the green characters deaths the same exact way give it some realisim to it like giving them differant kinda deaths, and have the "BLOOD" run a differant way if possible so it doesnt look like the same character over and over. other then that it was a pretty impressive flash with some nice artwork and decent characters the button thing did get anoying but anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the whole Click next button seemed to get repetitive so i suggest you remove the buttons and just allow it to play as a movie instead it will have a much better result, the click next button just tends to anoy people when all they want to do is watch a movie. a few other suggestions would be to have differant deaths differant blood styles, some larger text bubbles, and so on

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting flash i rather enjoyed it, keep up the awsome work

~X~

[The Hate Machine: ep11]

I enjoyed it

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first I think this could be improved with a number of things ill start right off the bat and suggest a few things here, like the "TEXT" you could do something better with that its a tad "PLAIN" maybe make it larger and maybe even abit colorfull or even outlined with some inner color thats differant, also i think a propper "PRE-Loader" could also be in the works, now these are just a few things that could improve on this, and it will show because the effort is there to try and present something much better, and since this was episode 11 i would hope it has improved to a hight quality level, Now the "CHARACTERS" were really good with lots of detail i did however think the backrounds could have been better other then just the "GRADIENTS" maybe some sorta backdrop would sufice there, another improvments would be to implement some subtitles just an extra little feature that presents this much better, i do hope thse little tips help you to improve on this one or other future ones, but i did have a fun time watching these and hope to see the others real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things like some subtitles, some improved backround besides the gradients and some more fancy text besides just the bland white ones

~~OVERALL~~
A funny older flash but still gives off a few laughs

~X~

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 014]

Day 14

~~REVIEW~~
So here we have another adventure in pokeland and hitler visits once again, now i do like the little animation with him evolving not so sure he evolved so much though, but still it was an entertaining scene and adds to the adventure that hitler is partaking on, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more evolving from the pokemon, maybe even some animation effort from hitler like the pokeball or something

~~OVERALL~~
Overall its funny but still needs more

~X~

[CT - Crisis of Time]

Pretty amazing

~~REVIEW~~
The size was abit much, that was the first thing i noticed, but have given it my all even at the size it is, Now as for the "INTRO" its pretty neat it was quick and fast not to take away from the actual film at hand but yet it had some good animation and nice graphics, now on the "MENU" page it was pretty impressive with some nifty looking buttons and even fast animation on the character just sitting on the ledge i thought that part of the animation was too fast though, maybe slow it down just abit, So as i watch the actual flash you have some pretty good art skills with good looking characters nice effects and decent animation, so for 14 mb's it was much better then i thought and well worth it i would say,this was really put together very well seems like all the parts and scenes with so much animation took lots of effort so ill give you much credit there, this was all a very welldone animation i was pleased with it from start to finish, the best of this whole flash was the story and how it played out with the characters, so really good stuff, i was entertained and loved the effects, anyways welldone.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
On the menus screen right before the actual movie the animation of the characters hair and flapping cloths i thought was too fast maybe slow it down just abit, other then that it was pretty awsome, i would also suggest cutting down in filesize but dont want to take away from the film either

~~OVERALL~~
A long download but still very good flash from start to finish

~X~

Tyrant-D responds:

Seen that you've viewed most submissions out of anyone here on NG, this review surely put a big smile on my face. XwanecoltX your my God!

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[Toilet Paper Man]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
First of great job on making this a small size flash and still getting a good amount of conent in there i was impressed with that, aww now this cartoon was abit creative with the differant styles of toilet dispensers and such, the animation mixed with reall images was the creative part, as for the "AUDIO" and as you said was probably not the best, so im thinking go the next best thing? Ad some "SUBTITLES" its always helpful to have some and even if the audio is not great the subtitles are a 2ndary feature that helps for that, now this was funny and gave me a couple of laughs and chuckles, so no problems with humor, and while earlier i did say the animation was nice, i thought you could have had the toilet paper animated not in just the mouth, but have him roll around town and stuff and talking aswell that might make for an even more funnier story, something to think about for future episodes if you decide to go that rout, So it was an entertaining little flash with a cute idea as a character, seemed abit on the short side and could use some subtitles, but all and all when its all done and said its a pretty cute flash idea and i hope you continue it on abit more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the toilet paper man roll around throught the city instead of just the one scene, also some subtitles would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
cute character funny idea, keep up the good work

~X~

zacoranim8or responds:

Thank you so much