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Needs more content

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well i thouoght this was way too "SHORT" the music was really nice and pleasent and it seemed to fit what was going on with the visuals, but again i felt it was just too short and seems like you could have put the effort fourth and really made this into something awsome more then what it is, dont get me wrong its pretty impressive even as short as it may be, by adding more content and more of a story with "BLANK" in mind you started it off great with these odd characters and such, but again just short lived and too short, now as it is black and white thats pretty cool, i think you could have added abit of "COLOR" even if just a touch, so with all that said, things that could make this better are ofcourse more "CONTENT" more of a story, abit longer if you will, and then some color not alot as to take away from the Black and white style but something that has just a touch of color, so all and all i did enjoy this, it was just too short, and needed abit more ump to it, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so adding more content and more of a story is a plus, but also Black and white flashes are notbad, but while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation, anyways good luck

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash, could have been much better, but it is decent for what it is.

~X~

Surn responds:

I guess the main thing was that I was itching to choreograph the song. It goes without saying that if you choreograph a short song your production will be short. Even so it's still a good point that I should try to look on (nobody would rather eat a fun size chocolate bar). As for the content and color: content/plot would have been difficult (but not impossible) add yet the color would indeed make it look better but it would have needed more than "just a touch".

So to recap I need to:
- Make it longer
- Use color
- Use plot (though I might be able to get away without it [see:ANIMUTATION])
- Overall try harder

Thanks for your help, I appreciate it.

[Attn: Joker_adt]

Needs more

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so its been awhile since i seen stuff like this and this was always a great refresher of how newgrounds was back then it seemed alot more fun back then, but anyways the five differant flashes were all the same, wish there was something abit differant but still gave me a laugh or two, so nice job on that, add more next time., anyways good luck on your next entry, thats if you still make stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add something differant to each clip the same ol thing is amusing but tends to get abit old also.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing, needs more to it though.

~X~

[The Farting Menace]

Decent but needs some work

~~REVIEW~~
Lol well ok this was amusing, and anything with starwars i am instantly a fan of but this could be improved on and made much better, like the "LOOPING" adding a stop action code would sufice, as for the action in the film you had lots of it and the graphics were notbad, the jpeg face was entertaining and the jepg explosions were not half bad either, to be honest you did show some good effort on puttong this together and bringing together a story, but the looping should be fixed, aswell as slowing it down abit and adding more to the flash and story itself, I did have a good experiece watching this flash, it just went by too fast, needs slowing down, but all and all its a funny and entertaining flash that i enjoyed, so keep up the good work. hope to see more of your animations in the near future, untill then good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First off add more to the story, slow the flash down and add more content, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons.

~~OVERALL~~
A good story just needs to be slowed down abit.

~X~

[Kapanet Clock Crew]

Random and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this one was cute, the menu screen before the main event heh, always nice to see a little something before the actual show so nice job there with the flying ghost? now while its an ok menu i think you still need some sorta "LOGO" there about the flash that is about to play and such, but anyways onto the film, Wow i must say this is a funny little flash you have here, now first off the "AUDIO" seemed so perfect for this, especially the way you animated the characters, to really reflect off the music so really awsome job, i think i will ad this one to my faves just because of that, but anyways, Haha well i had a really fun time watching and reviewing this, you added lots of color and joy, the music really put this in a new perspective of a joyish toon, and the art was very smooth and refreshing, in the end this kept a smile on my face, and makes me want to watch more of your tunes, so i do plan to watch more especially if they are like this, anyways as to improve on this one? well keep the same style and make more wacky stuff like this, i did think you should have had more funny and random stuff happening infact even adding more "CC CHARACTERS" would have been nice, anyways nice work once again, it was a pleasure to review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more random stuff happen, and add more clock crew characters within your flashes.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and random flash which will take you on its own adventure, hope you all like it as much as i did.

~X~

[Rolling Girl]

Entertaining music video

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was a very pleasent flash, it had a more "MUSIC-VIDEO" feel then anything but that was the neat thing about it, i also like the black and white style of it and all, but also you gave it that touch of color that made it abit more then just black and white, now i cant say i liked the ending as it just seemed to "CUT-OFF" but for the most part it is pretty good, as for the "ANIMATION" its notbad, somepoints it seemed choppy but then kicked it right away so that could be me , and as for the "MUSIC" it was a good choice seemed to fit the animation verywell, just didnt like how it cut off at the end, so the flash was great even the "ART" was notbad at all somewhat simple style but overall still enjoyble, i enjoyed the entire flash as a an amusing and entertaining music video, didnt understand it much but it was enjoyed so nice job there. I f i were to suggest improving on stuff it would probably be adding just abit more color, making more of an ending when the music just cuts off, these are just a few things to work on, but overall i enjoyed your flash animaion.music video.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Also explained above, adding just abit more color, and maybe abit more quality on the sound as i did hear some scratchyness, and would like more of an ending as the music seemed to just cut off.

~~OVERALL~~
So overall a good animation here, like a music video, amuing and some nifty music, i hope to see more like this.

~X~

[LL - Regarding the CC]

Nice LL/CC Flash

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ok so this was a pretty entertaining flash here on the lock Legion and the clock crew, i dont know i have been watching clocks for 10 years now and locks a little after that, but as for this one this was pretty nifty like the opening loaders and good effects that was presented with it, as for the little story, it was notbad, i did think some subtitles could have been used for the clocks talking, you did present some nice animation, like with the falling "LOCKS" and all, and from start to finish it wasa pleasent flash i even thought the ending was funny with the little sayings and all, So a good flash here about the LL, and abit of the CC, so all and all a good entertaining flash, good luck on any other entries.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The onlything i really saw, was possibly some subtitles but even that was somewhat ok, maybe throw in a few more effects like when the locks are falling have some flares or light effects behind them or something.

~~OVERALL~~
a good LL flash of recruiting hehe

~X~

[This is not a Test 3: SFX]

Good story, decent graphics

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok notbad of a flash here, the characters are really good, lots of awsome design great use of color and a number of awsome detail to go along with them, I did notice a few things that could make this even better though, such as, it could use some "SUBTITLES" also a play button at the start wouldnt hurt either as it just starts off right away, the story itself is pretty good and you had some ok "EFFECTS" but thought there could be more enhanced effects aswell, like more sparkles, more gradients like fire stuff, you did pretty awsome with the characters and shades, and overall it was a good story here, so i really had fun with this, you should ad a preloader with a play button at the start, that was the big thing for me, But anyways i enjoyed this flash eventhough it was a tad older good stuff all the way through.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The movie starts right off so you may want to ad a play button, This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here, adding abit more enhanced effects would also be a nice touch.

~~OVERALL~~
Now overall this was a good flash nice story, could be improved with a few touch ups.

~X~