XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OSAI Act2 p20]

Brilliant

~~REVIEW~~
This was a brilliant idea and i really like the orb and all after it dropped it tottally went random which was ok but just wish i could understand the story part of it abit more, work more on a streamline story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story would be nice but not as randome as you have here

~~OVERALL~~
Nice flash abit on the random side

~X~

UntoldEdman01 responds:

thanks, i know i have raploads to work on, yeah it was a segment for the thing, and i put a lotta work on it, gah i was tired, more story next time got it

[Giant-Tetris(Gigantetris)]

Funny film

~~REVIEW~~
Funny idea you have here, good little flash neat characters and the idea of the giant tetris is neat, i thought the text moved abit too slow and it got confusing to see with the transparent bar behind it, it was an ok lil flash though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
why dont you add a little mini game of the giant tetris hehe, also remove the trannsparent bar behind the text and also slow the subtitles down just abit

~~OVERALL~~
A good idea fresh looking characters and a funny outcome

~X~

[Its a mario BETA]

its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
hehe ok this gave me a short laugh, the toon was abit on the short side, not such a bad thing but might have been abit more entertaining if it had just a tad more story to it also allowing for more humor, the coins didnt make sense but it was still an ok little toon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer have mario confront luigie abit more

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining but too short

~X~

[The HUMP Collab]

Very entertaining shorts

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok i had a few good laughs with all these, this actually showed some ok quality and some very funny humor especially number three hehe great little animations, anyways good luck in your next stuffs

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the little shorts abit longer, with just a tad longer content in each one

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining shorts here

~X~