XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Captain Beast]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok i must admit it was funny and entertaining, and gave me a laugh or two, the differant langauge kinda through me off and was confusing atfirst but i did watch it a few times to understand it by animation only, but even with all that i think some subtitles would make it better for the english only speaking audiance, second you had some amazing animating and some fantastic art, that really worked well together, but in the end this was just too short and i felt it could have had more to the end more content and characters and just a tad longer even if it was just a small short, the subtitles might have helped me to understand it abit better aswell, but anyways good luck on your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some subtitles, make the ending abit longer and more depth to the humor aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short, hard to understand at first

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DunderAxel responds:

I s'pose you're right, thanks.

[The Trash bin]

Its cute

~~REVIEW~~
Its a cute flash you have here and such, but i noticed it started right off the bat as soon as it loaded, now this kinda thing seems to bug a few people but there is an easy fix for this, and that would be by adding a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" you can do a search for the same name in the flash forum or just ask anyone for help in the flash forum how to add this, but anyways what this does is stops the "LOOP" from looping from the start of the movie now onto your lil flash here, it was a cute little animation with some intersting stuff going on, i noticed this flash was abit confusing like the 3 days ago scene and such, also the flash seemed abit on the short side, so while i found it cute, it still needs abit more, so maybe you can work abit on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code so it doesnt start off , a play button at the start seems much better if my opinion, also this would be nice if you added more to the story, and a longer more understanding story aswell

~~OVERALL~~
a short funny story could use more

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 229]

another cute one

~~REVIEW~~
Lol well another cute one you have here but then again so are all the pokemon versions, i like the dressing up of hitler and the pokeball is always a nice little feature, but as i always say, ad more animation, and more scenes, and maybe even introduce other characters, anyways a few ideas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
like above some animation, new props and new characters

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining as always

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[Adolf Hitler: ATIO80W 03]

lol ok

~~REVIEW~~
Lol i thought i had reviewed this one already, but anyways yeah its a pain with all them rules and such, the same as the retrogade but that was also funny, notbad, i like the slow animation and all, wouldnt mind abit more, this i s kinda funny cause its like hitler is making the rules hehe

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more bright stuff more color maybe some flashing stuff in the corners but not too flashing

~~OVERALL~~
hitler reads rules

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

The 2nd ATIO80W was the review guidelines, whereas this one was the whistle rules. I'm guessing you got the two confused due to their similarity. ;)

[Fap to NG acts: Hamy_Jamy]

ha funny

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was amusing, its always nice to see the oldstyle profile and designs, also its always nice again to see the profile of hammy/jammy heh, the audio was notbad, and the ending songe was alright, an entertaining flash here i enjoyed it, you should have made more like this they are ok

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more animation would be nice more interaction like maybe clickble things

~~OVERALL~~
hammy_jammy profile

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[Guns 'n Morons]

This was neat

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty neat, you have some good characters here, very large and standout, you actually have a funny little flash here, i did however think this could have used some subtittles of some sort, it would help, not that sound is anything bad just that subtitles would be nice, also the white backrounds make it too "BLAND" and you may want to add some backrounds it would also improve on the overall graphics of this, Your animation was a short flick, but it had some good humor, i think it could be even better with some more content more scenes and more characters, its very entertaining, anyways nice job, keep up the good work. i hope you do make some changes in to only improving on this as this was a really good idea but can be improved.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
try adding more content, with more scenes, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, also some subtitles wouldnt hurt either

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and amusing short here could be improved in time

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