XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Barney Commercial #4 - Sing-Along Life Lessons]

Funny and cute

~~REVIEW~~
LOL now this was cute, this animation reminds me of stuff that came thru newgrounds back in the day, i love the title, and the content was funny so good humor there, , i think you should have more differant {SCENES} in there but still gave me a good laugh, and something i say to alot of others maybe you could introduce other characters into the mix, you do have something here, so i would suggest go with it and make more ad new characters, with new scenes, and also now that i think of it, some subtitles wouldnt hurt, you probably dont need them in this one but seems like it would be that extra feature to push it forward, anyways nice job here. so improving with those few ideas would be a start i suppose but keep on going with the good idea you have, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i suggested a few differant ideas of making it somewhat more improved like more differant {SCENES} and maybe even some new {CHARACTERS} This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun with barney

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[Afro_Stud's Birthday!]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this is amusing, and the animation was funny very amusing infact, I know this is somewhat old, and stuff but i must say it still gives me a good laugh today so nice job there, now i could see this still being improved on such as it was very short, and just in the one scene or two. There should be abit more interaction with other characters so the story goes on abit longer just an idea, maybe even ad some darker color tones besides just the bright ones, now thats just an idea that could improve on, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more content maybe other characters but for sure more scened are needed,

~~OVERALL~~
Short short but still amusing and funny

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harryjarry responds:

I'm still proud of this animation! My first flash on NG. I'm glad you were able to enjoy it! I would've loved to make it longer, but I was trying to get it done on Afro's birthday, so I didn't have much time. I've never been very great with color-I should look into working on that!

If I start getting back into flash (which I'd love to), I might do another flash like this for fun. I will see what I can do!

Thanks for the review! <3

[A Signal]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
well first off, the intro was pretty intense, love the visuals and sound/fx so prop to you there, now as i saw the other one it was good i like this one, the song at the start of the flash was very good one, but then you tottally change it, that kinda confuesed me, i thought that you should let it play like a {MOVIE} especially with the song at the begenning, but when you change it up it really throws you off and kinda doesnt make sense at times, might seem better if it was played as a movie, and maybe not so much cut scene were it changes so fast, i really love the art and animation was very neat and differant, nice 3d effects with them art scenes, So it was a good flash but was confusing with the changing of scenes and music changes, but anyways good flash, hope to see more work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let it flow like a music video, and less cut scenes, let it flow into each one there aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Good series so far.

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CaKeS1 responds:

Thank you, glad you came by to watch the second. I'm not sure but I was thinking of remaking this installment, because like you said it kinda confuses people and changes way to much. I would've loved to keep this a mystery series rather then a random killing sequence of animations that don't fit together. Thanks for the tips and support, I might remake this one, or if I feel comfortable after thinking about it a lot, I might just make a third.

[Snowballs]

Awsome and funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was great, very funny right from the start and made me laugh a few times, so i really enjoyed this, you really played off the joke very well, and the animation which was welldone was just right, even the voices was great, a welldone animation great joke awsome humor, i really enjoyed what you have presented here, so props to you on an awsome animation, and i will for sure checkout more of your work, As to improve on this, i wouldnt mind see the joke go abit further with more blood and stuff anyways great stuff i enjoyed this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more stuff so its abit longer and so the guy shows throwing more stuff at him

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining

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psychicpebbles responds:

thanks for that awesome review :D

[No Signal]

Odd but i liked it

~~REVIEW~~
First off great job on putting up some awsome and differant {VIEW-SHOTS} and second you put together some awsome {MUSIC} that seemed to flow well with the slow but fitting {ANIMATION} this was really neat from start to finish with the flow of it but mostly the {STORY} it was actually nice with the silent but some {VOICES} might have gave it an even more strange feel, which was a good thing, now i have to disagree with the {CREDITS} music it seemed to not fit with the whole setting, but still a great little flash here, infact i almost added it to my faves list, if it were not for that ending credit music, but other then that it was a very pleasent flash and story, as to improve on this well the music at the end i would remove, but more ideas and tips on how to improve on this more below, anyways good luck on any new work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The ending credit music should be something more soft as the films music was, seems more fitting that way, another idea might be adding some soft voices to add to the odd and strange effect of your idea.

~~OVERALL~~
An odd yet good flash i liked it very much.

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CaKeS1 responds:

Thank you for such an elaborate review. It helps me a lot. Though this is pretty old xD I'm thinking about remaking A Signal (the sequel to this) as I kinda just got off track and ruined it. But still, thanks for the input!

[A Super Mario Bros Quicky]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ok i must say this was probably one of the more funnier shorts then the 4 you have out, now you could have done alot more with this one though, like with the ending you could have the red guys, have done something to get more in a more funny and amusing way, maybe they chase him down for a bit and stomp on him, might make for a more funny and entertaining flash but what you have here was pretty funny, but as i have said in the other shorts, you should add more shorts to one flash, since they are very short, and some nice cute animation with the menu screen wouldnt hurt either, anyways good luck on any new stuff you may make, anyways nice job once again. So as improvments longer, more animation and a more funnier ending.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated just above, needs to have a more amusing and funnier ending, some animation in the menu screen like you have some of the later episodes

~~OVERALL~~
Another amusing episode

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Mario8th responds:

Thanks. Hey, maybe you could give me an idea for my next animation on your next review or on youtube = D

no, but really, thanks

[Super Mario Bros Quicky2]

Another amusing short

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok so i broke down and finnally saw this one, now i must say the earlier ones get shorter, so atleast the later ones do get better and that shows some improvments, this one was way short though, and i still say you should add more shorts to one flash to make it more stuff for the viewer to see, And on this one would have been nice to see abit more animation at the play screen also, now these are just ideas and my opinions in which it could improve somewhat, but even for a short you should add molre to each one or make them along with other shorts as i said before, Now dont get me wrong i really like these shorts, with the differant mario charcaters, and i love that you have variaty and not just mario, anyways hope to see more from you seen.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation in the menu screen, abit longer of content on this one, more other characters to be shown would be nice aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
Another funny mario short

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Mario8th responds:

This was actually before i knew how to make the animations at the beginning. But know I do and animating is much easier.