XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dancebreak!]

LOL Funny

Haha okso i had a good time with this flash you have here, it was rather "SHORT"and i was kindof confused but i must say it was abrilliant piece of flash here, a good overallmovie with some really good "VOICES" and while it was just a few scenes you cut to the funny and humor right away so that was all good and had some nice effort all around, Now i suppose it can use some sort of improvments like some "SUBTITLES" and maybe even a tad longer for more of the humor and good story youhad going on, so for the mostpart of this it was a pretty good and amusing flash entry keep up the fantastic work.

~~OVERALL~~
So as suggested above, some longer scenes, more scenes as it was a tad short, and maybe some subtitles not because it was bad or anything but because it would be a nice feature.

[Space Face (Part 1)]

Cute game

You have a cute game here, its pretty entertaining and kind of "SIMPLE" but imust say that its still pretty impressive i actually did like the simple side of it as it made it more pleasent and such, This is one of those games that starts out fun and is ok through the rest of the game and there was helpfull hints throughout so that was a plus, The one thing this flash did lack was sound, there was just not enough of it, youneed to add some music and using the audio portal is a great advantage, you may even want to add some sound/fx of sorts it will all be a plus to this flash, but anyways this was a pretty good idea of a game cute and simple keep up the good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off this game does need some music and or sound/fx, you can even use the audio portal it offers a wide selection for your use.

[UncleOutrage Marshmallows]

Wow this was nifty

So i guess its been awhile since you been on here but always nice to see some work like this especially with some flash woks as this one, now i hope you do stay a lil longer as this was pretty impressive, This was differant then most flash that runs through here, differant and sometimes picky as some may not like the content but i had fun with this one, And there was alot of effort and work that went into this so that was a plus the effort does show and that was nice, Even seemed like it could be turned into some funny songs, The animation was fantastic the effort was hardwilled, and overall this was just pleasent so this reviewer enjoys this submission and i hope others will too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as some sort of improvments, why not make these things into more like songs and music videos seems like its already there, i wouldnt mind seeing some more humor.

[Birthday 20]

Very welldone

Wow first off congrats on the awards on this one that was pretty cool, and very impressive, you know its pretty good when it wins some awards, so props to you on making something with abit more quality then the next, So this was a pretty good submission, nice and pleasent even with all the stuff described, the animation for one seemed to really work and flowed on through, i even liked it because its a great quality flash with a little loading time and thats always a plus with a slow machine like mine, and im sure others appreciate that, so again nice effort there, the flash and story mainly really took off and had a real touch, so once again nice job all around on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some things to improve on, cant say that this needs any improvments, i do know it was a welldone piece, and well orginized with nice animation.

["One" Trailer]

Short trailer, but still good

So that was something differant, This is kind of old, and it being a trailer is nice and all, i do however think that you could have put a bit more content in this, the "VOICE" was pretty good and the text wording was pretty good, but the thing is there was not enough visuals and content, I do understand this is a trailer but even with that it could use more visuals, But on that note good job on the character and the "VOCALS" the voice worked very well with this, so nice job there, so with making things better, add some more visuals, more stuff going on, and more characters of course, anyways nice work here i liked it and its a start for something really good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so with making things better, add some more visuals, more stuff going on, and more characters of course

[hitchHiker: part One]

Great story in this one.

First of all nice job on making the size of this kind of small at 1 meg thats pretty good and there is no reall long wait, and always great on slower machines and conections, This flash is pretty good it has a realistic feel to it, probably because how well the animation ran and how good you presented the art so that was pretty neat and nice effort on your part, The whole idea about hitchhikers and such was pretty neat i thought, great job on this one with color aswell, i do however wish there was more backround story on the character, and the flash so there was more info, but other then that this was pretty good i thought, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So first off, great flash the story kept me interested, I do wish there was more backround story on the character, and the flash so there was more info, besides that, that was about the only issue that lacked.

[Skyrim Schmyrim]

Amusing jokes here

So i guess this is from Skyrim, im not too familuar with that but this flash does help, the animation was pretty good very smooth, This one had alot of jokes and in a fast progression, so it was pretty amusing with all the jokes that were going through and such, so nice touch there in giving this some good humor and all, So there was alot of funny moments even how it all started with a chicken, the characters were very funny and amusing and the jokes were even better, i think the only issue i saw was that for 8 megs it was abit slow loading up, so nice job on this, all around good jokes i must say, so with all that said this was alright and i enjoyed it from start to finish,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as improvment points The Filesize was somewhat large I use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us still use 56k. even some of the faster cables are still slow for the megabite size on this. but other then that this was actually alright.

[The Noob Adventures Episode 9]

I like it

So let me start off first by saying "CONGRATS" on all the awards this has got, i have seen some of your past work and it is all well worth it, you put fourth the quality in this, amde it fun and enjoyble and thats what works and you went with it so props to you there, The graphics was kind of neat not enhancing but had a simple yet decent look about it, Thre could use some "SUBTITLES" in this, its a nice fetaure to have to offer even if not needed but still nice to have for the audiance, The "VOICES" were really good, and the "STORY" was welldone, you really put some depth into it keeping it interesting and even entertaining with some amusing "HUMOR" so nice job all around, i think the onlything this might need if even that would be some subtitles, anwyays nice work here fun flash movie.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
subtitles as mentioned in review it would be a nice option, i dont think it needs it because of voices but because its just a nice option to have with any submission with voices. something extra if you will.

[Holiday Stress]

Randomly funny and amusing

Ok so you have something really decent here, the story was pretty good, i thought the "VOICES" were even better and seemed to fit very well, The art and animation were really good i thought, so nice job there it was very smooth and seemed to flow very well, so again nice work there and shows your effort on putting something of quality together, And with what you did in the end i thought that was great for the flash and made for a good ending so nice job once again, I look forward to seeing more of your work, now if anything could help this i thought more random humor, maybe even making it somewhat longer aswell, but anyways untill your next works keep up the good effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there was alot of good humor in this even the ending cameout pretty good. now if anything could help this i thought more random humor, maybe even making it somewhat longer

[Hank's Rage: Megaupload]

Decent and entertaining

A decent start to a flash here, I really like what you have here, there seems to be some good qualoity about all this and, i really like your style with this, so this gets my vote atleast to a good start in the right direction. This seems more like ones statement even opinion on matters but i guess thats ok, just one expressing themself in the flash form of ways and thats all ok too, There was a decent lil story here though, and it kept my interest, The whole thing with sopa is confusing but i think you presented a good flash with abit of a story here, so anyways decent flash, some ok entertainment value, and it was presented well enough to understand it all so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now I must say that this was a pretty decent flashi found it interesting in many ways, it didnt really lack much but i have an idea or two here that may or may not help. But anyways i think the onlything this could use was more depth and humor into the story, the rest was pretty good actually. but anyways that was about the onlything lacking.