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[ParodyRangersTheMovie 1-2]

This was interesting

It is a pleasure of mine reviewing this piece of work, there are some great things that happen in this one, dont get me wrong there are some improvments that can be made, but You have done a did piece of work here with everything that was happening on this. Before i get more into the review i just wanted to say congrats on the awards thats always some extra that comes along with the extra work here, so nice effort on the flas and acheiving the awards, So congrats on that. This was really something here especially withh all the contributers here, The characters in this are really good and the "VOICES" are pretty good too, they have some good emotion and some just some real good voice-acting so nice effort on the voices So there are some areas that could be improved like the animation was good but was also kind of choppy, you could also use some subtitles on this. and last but not least, the animation on the mouths were too fast animated, slow it down abit so that it actually matches up with the sound comming from the mouth. A fin flash animation here, a good submission entry here, you took your time with this one and made a few good visuals and made it fun for all who are watching and so on, but besides that its a pretty good entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is where we come to some ideas and tips for improving on your fine entry you have here, you have done a pretty good job, but there are a few tips and tricks that could make this slightly better not just for you but for everyone else watching aswell, This could use some subtitles, it would help on a number of issues here the main being that its always nice to have some subtitles on voice work just for that extra effort on any flash, and second would help greatly if the voices are hard to hear. The animation seemed somewhat choppy and kept on skipping so maybe faster frame rate mayne smoother animation on your part, mouths moving too fast, alot faster then the sound comming out, maybe matching it up would look more realistic.

[The Steven Seagal Show #2]

Great action in this one

first of all this was pretty good now im not one for large file sizes butit was well worth it with all the quality and there was alot of "ACTION" in this and that was the best of it, I also want to take this time to give you a big congrats on the awards you won for this flash it's always a plus on that, so congrats, hope to see more awards come your way. I also love that this has steven segal in it, you can never go wrong with Steven hehe, also liked the bill clinton parts aswell,s o this flash had it all, celebs to presidents really fullfilling and very entertaining but most of all some great action scenes, The ending was even better then everything else, you really put your thinking cap on this one, Now while this was a pretty big file like i said well woth all the fun and such, so im not gonna gripe on the size, since it was one hell of a movie flash. and cant wait to see what else you can come up with in this type of stuff, i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so as to improve on this piece i would say some size reduction, but i think it was pretty fantastic as is could even be longer if added more celebs and such.

[The Walking Derp]

Nice parody

A good flash here i thought, its interesting how this starts off, pretty interesting, and i got some good entertainment value from this, This was a nice and funny parody here, Im not too familuar with all the content of the show but i like the "HUMOR" and gave off a few laughs so that was pretty good and there was alot of silly stuff going on here, the "ANIMATION" was pretty good too could be sharper at times but it was alright i thought, The voices were kinda hard to understand, but after a bit you could understand what was being said, so nice job there but maybe more clarity there next time, And so besides all the above this was pretty good, some nice entertainment value, some god and bad points but with a few adjustments it could be better so anyways nice job nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are many ways to improve on this, and i have some advice here and there a few tops and a few adjustments should make this a top notch flash, so try a few of the ideas and and let the flash become even better. The voices were abit off at times, and the animation could be better, other then that this was pretty good.

[Pencilmation: Egypt]

This was pretty interesting

I found this to be pretty interesting, it has a good story and the "VOICES" were pretty good andhad some good quality to it and all, It was pretty entertaining and amusing i thought, I guess there was some other episodes to the series, and i should check those out but this was pretty good and some nice content great voices and good. i would have liked to see more dialog on this whole episode but it was pretty good as is, so with that all said, great stuff very entertaining and great story, i look forward to more, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hard to suggest anything on this one as it was great, maybe some better dialog going on but it was all good if you ask me.

[Moisture Care]

Great ending

I thought the best part on this was probably the "ENDING" and you had some great build-up aswell, very nice indeed, aswell as being one of the most funny and amusing parts, so great job there, The animation was pretty "SMOOTH" and just went from one scene to the next with ease and flow, so another awsome job there it was pretty good, So all and all this was a great little toon you have here, lots of "HUMOR" very entertaining and pretty amusing i had lots of lots of laughs with this so great job and im sure people will love this years to come, so with that all out there keep making these awsome flash-works as i and the whole community here really enjoy them, as for improving on this, its hard to say but i guess if anything make them a tad longer with more random stuff going on aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some longer scenes, add some more humor and add more "RANDOM" humor.

['Arrow to the Knee']

Amusing and funny stuff here

wow pretty awsome that this flash won alot of differant award, thats always a plus, the 4 megs of file size was actually not very small or big it was actually just right, I guess theres alot of these Skyrim types now i am seeing lots of these now and then, this one was pretty good i thought, The ending was kinda funny with the kid dieing and all, Seems like you had some nice art going with this aswell, the animation went well with the art aswell, So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. Now making this better would be hard to do but i suppose maybe add more random humor, other then that this was pretty good, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Amusing flash here, Kinda entertaining it could use a touch more of some random stuff happing and some random humor, nice work though.

[Stick Wars]

A blast from the past

Now with this one i like the idea of "STICK WARS" and even though this is an older flash, it still did pretty good, you really did give it that star wars feel so even with sticks it was like i was watching starwars in a stick version haha, so nice effort there, and it does show the effort in relation to star wars, so after watching the movie abit it gave me a few chuckles, now with the green stick scene i thought you could have animated it abit more with his limbs and such, the animation was kind of short almost seems like you could have added more short clips all in one flash to make for a sort of multiple starwars clips of sorts. And last but not least some "SUBTITLES" wouldnt hurt for when phantom is talking. but i did enjoy this, it was entertaining and i got a few laughs out of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For starters you could "ANIMATE" the sticks "LIMBS" more, even have him move around more like into other scenes and such, you could have added more short clips all in one flash to make for a sort of multiple starwars clips of sorts. Now I mention Subtitles only because its not hard to understand or anything but its nice to have for viewers, cause sometimes something might be missed, just a little something extra that will make a better flash and such. but besides that hope those small tips help on this amusing flash.

[Stickman Can't Fight 2]

Random and amusing

OK so i found this one pretty amusing and there was alot of funny moments, the "MUSIC" was pretty kicking, i noticed alot of basic sounds as sound/fx, also the backrounds could have been better most were just white ones the episode here was not too short and kinda flowed along with some decent action and some random humor wich i reallygot a kick out of, maybe you should use smaller "STICK-CHARACTERS" so that you can show more detail in other areas aswell, But anyways a good and entertaining submission you have here, i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more details here and there maybe some facial details on the sticks as they fight, and some backround detail could also happen.

guitan11 responds:

check out the latest episodes! i think i cover most of what you thought needed improvement ;)