XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico's Penny Prank]

Funny and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was cute has a very cartoony feel, and i must say the {MUSIC} was very catchy and seemed to {FLOW} very well with the funny toon, the {SIZE} of the flash was notbad at all, not too big or too short, allthough the toon was still very short, now dont get me wrong it was amusing and made me laugh abit so i was ok with that, but would have been nice to see it go on abit longer, The artwork was very oldstyle the backrounds anyways and i think that made for a fresh flash with the characters being very fresh and new like, as for the animation it was quaick smooth and fast but still very enjoyble, but i did like and enjoy it in its fullest so nice job on this, and pico day was fun with a few good pico flashes such as this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer maybe add a few other new characters,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny pico day 2011 entry.

~X~

ToonCastleTV responds:

it's true I would love for this flash to have been longer to, but due to time constraints this is the best I could do ! thanks for the great review :D

[Pico in Wonderland]

Entertaining for pico day

~~REVIEW~~
This was very pleasent and very colorfull it had a very {DREAMY} feel to it, the only bad part was that it ended so quickly, i like the music but maybe something more smoother would have flowed better with this?? This was more like a {MUSIC-VIDEO} but for some reason the music didnt fit, the animation flowed very well though and i rather enjoyed it, it was very pleasent and entertaining just abit on the {SHORT-SIDE} so as i said before and for a helpfull tip on improving would give it a more smoother music tune something that flows better other then that it was very good, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A differant choice of music would have been nice, something to flow more better,

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash for pico day very pleasent

~X~

coughing-dog responds:

thanks, unfortunately I didnt get much time to spend on the music so I chose a track Tyson made and tried to 'fit' the animation as best I could to the track. I thought it worked pretty well but yeah it was a rushed effort, exactly the same reason why it wasnt very long.

[Brian's Payback]

Entertaining and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i did get a good laugh out of this all, and it was pretty entertaining and funny, the whole {BUTTON} was ok but that seemed to dragon the flash, now there are a number of things you could do to clean this up and make it run smoother but before that i do want to say that it was pretty entertaining, wish it had some sound like voices, but overall it was entertaining, so as to improve, first off i would remove the buttons explained below, also some better subtitles are needed, the text was too small, You should really think about addings some voices it would better improve the film as a whole, but anyways more explained below, other then that was just said i thought it was pretty funny and entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove the buttons let it flow more like a movie, it doesnt slow it down and if you are worried about the text, why not add some {VOICES} also the text it self was hard to read as it was kind of small, other then that it was alright.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny moment for family guy lol

~X~

[Neolithic: G. M. A.]

Decent matrix theme flash

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok well first off this was not too bad even for being an older flash and all from years ago but as for the start you had a loader page that was more on the simple side of things. the {FONT} could have been better maybe have more depth to it and such. the rest was actually ok, i would even think about removing the {AUDIO} in the opening loader page aswell, Now the characters and all the {TWEENING} was ok but i think to better improve off that you should do less tweening and more detail on the character would be much better,Also remove the buttons on the Bubble screens so that it flows more like a movie, instead of always having to click away, tends to get anoying that way. ok so with all that said i did like the {MATRIX} theme was a good flash but also could be cleaned up as stated before, so overall funny and entertaining with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Start with the {FONT} could have been better maybe have more depth to it, i would even think about removing the {AUDIO} in the opening loader page aswell, i think to better improve off that you should do less tweening and more detail on the character would be much better,Also remove the buttons on the Bubble screens so that it flows more like a movie, instead of always having to click away, tends to get anoying, so try and clean up those areas and you will have something even better to work with.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and entertaining matrix theme.

~X~

[ArtOfWar(starring Blaze)]

Amusing could use some more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was a neat little flash here, seems like if you did put some effort fourth ahead on this, but at the sametime you can put even more as it does have potential, I like that you had a little story here, The characters were ok but maybe you could make them a bit {LARGER} that way you could put more detail on them like the faces and such, instead of gradients use more shades and details, for stuff like the backrounds, also more detail on stuff like doors walls, you did show some nice detail on the trashcan, and then there is the {FONTS} you have an ok one but you should make it standout better with a differant style font maybe a more fancy one, now all these tips will only improve on your work here, and make it more enjoyble for all to see, so you do have an ok idea here just needs more effort to it, anyways good luck on your next flash works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the characters a bit larger scale and with that you can add some more detail like faciial and hands, also some more work on the backrounds would be nice also you are using alot of {GRADIENTS} try doing some shades and differant use of colors, and last but not least, ad some better or fancy fonts

~~OVERALL~~
An older flash but still amusing at the sametime it still needs some more effort.

~X~