Great story
The story in this one really takes off and I liked it so nice job indeed no changes are needed as this was a solid animation of fun, this adventure is fun the story is great, you have some good talent it especially shows well with this particular entry, I really like what you did with the story and the effects on this particular submission was really good you really push the energy.
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no changes are needed as this was a solid animation of fun
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