Pretty creative
The animation on this was very good. probably the best point of it very smooth and sharp and moved from scene to scene very nicely, The characters look interesting kinda neat the way you have it, i like the "PROGRESSION" of the film and everything with the wood it was pretty creative, There was lots of emotion in this, and it was pretty entertaining, not sure if i have seen some of your other works i may have but from this flash i will be glad to checkout your other stuff, but on this flash it was entertaining, and amusing and i had a good time watching and reviewing it, keep up the excelent work, hope to see more soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as improvment ideas, i actually thought this was pretty good as is, maybe abit long, but still ok because of how good it was.