Good story to start
~~REVIEW~~
A good flash here i love how you kept itwith some "SUSPENSE" and kept it very interesting so with this one the story kept upto par, The character was good and you gave good story around that character so this was pretty good if you ask me, The ending with blowing up everything was odd but it was kind of amusing aswell, Some other fantastic pieces in this besides the story was how nice the artwork looked youput in the time and it shows, But anyways this was a pretty good flash, and i got some good entertainment from it so awsome job hope to see more soon this was pretty good if you ask me
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring more silly and more random thats what really pushed this toon over the edge for me