XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rumble In The Projects]

Decent story of battle

~~REVIEW~~
for an older flash its notbad and its a good little {BATTLE} the story plays out pretty good, and really neat to see the battle play out into differant scenes, i like the detail with the backrounds in the first scene but you should have done the same with the rest of the scenes as they ended up being more bland with just the gradients, also the {TEXT BUBBLES} could use some work like more {BOLDER} bubbles and text maybe even make the text black so it standsout better, now these are just a few ideas that could improve on the flash its actually an ok flash just needs abit more of that effort, so work on the text bubbles, and the backrounds in the later scenes other then that it was an ok story and flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the later scenes in the backrounds with the {GRADIENTS} were abit bland, make it more like the city backround you had in the first scene, and the text in the text bubbles could be more bold to standout more

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting story of battle, could use some work.

~X~

[A RETARDED THUMB]

Random

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok first off you may want to add a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} as soon as you press play from the preloader button it just keeps going and its just a short animation, and didnt much sense, the animating of it is kind of good, but other then that it just keeps looping so you may want add the stop action code, you should also add a play and replay buttons for extra measure, so with these types of flashes since they are so short you should think about adding more to them more of a {STORY} and if not that then add other shorts kind of like in a {COLAB} and such and make it a more vriaty based of tunes, but other then that it was ok random and funny, so for improving add a stop action code, and some play buttons and add abit more to it like more of a story, anyways better luck next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons. some more depth and story would be a plus aswell, it can only make it much better and more enjoyble for all, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, anyways good luck.

~~OVERALL~~
A random yet funny short toon

~X~

[The Scoop 2 -DeeDee guest]

This was cute

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute especially with the {SLOTH} have not seen him in such a long time, but i do understand this is a very old film but i must say its pretty good even for today, i was kind of letdown with it being so {SHORT} so if you still made stuff i would suggest making it longer you could even have other guests and all, more effects like you did with the throw up and stuff, that was pretty funny, i do however suggest some {SUBTITLES} and more dialog between the two just to give it that extra touch, for the viewers, as for your art you did a great job especially with the sloth, a good flash made me laugh, good graphics, only downsize as mentioned was it was too short, but its pretty good if you ask me, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with abit more {GUESTS} add some subtitles even.

~~OVERALL~~
A good little flash, could use abit more though.

~X~

[Un-named GOLD Edition]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
ok i have to admit this is pretty funny i especially like your characters they are not too advanced but they are simple and funny, now you could probably work on them shape em up abit more, maybe smaller heads would be fine, but as for this animation it was entertaining i believe the {NEXT-BUTTON] just in gets in the way, you may want to remove that and let it flow like a movie, it would be better presented aswell and just better for all and besides the button tends to get abit on the anoying side, Now the animation was great just seemed an issue with always having to click on the button, also noticed there was not really anything in the backrounds thats another little part you could work on, even some solid colors would sufice, anyways i gave a few tips in hopes you can improve on this and anything new you have planned, keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For starters you may want to reshape the characters they are ok but abit more detail, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont kike that style you can always go back to the other way.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and cute but needs some work.

~X~

[VentureBros FanFiction]

Very amusing, and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Interesting flash you have here and these interesting {BEE} like characters, are pretty funny the dialog was very interesting, and funny at times, this film shows lots of effort on your part very welldone all around, i did think you could have added some subtitles for that extra touch, but the voices were pretty good, it was not too short and not too long and gave off some good laughs for me, so all and all i enjoyed it very much and cant wait to see some more from you soon, as for improving on stuff, as mention some subtitles, but not really needed, but anyways great stuff, looking forward to anything else you may have for us on the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some subtitles would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny movie interesting characters and amusing dialog.

~X~

smirkstudios responds:

What an extremely thoughtful review! I hope you understand that these are not my characters, and I am glad you found the writing fun! Thanks again, I'll try to get you some subtitles in the Flash to come.

[In Case You Haven't Heard]

Needs lots of improving

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was interesing there was not much there and it seems to {LOOP} you may want to fix that somewhat, you can add a stop action code for the looping to stop, but other then that it needs much more animation scenes characters and so on, it seems more like an E-card then anything else,, dont get me wrong its still pretty funny and entertaining but still needs much more to it even some backrounds and much more color but these are just some small ideas to make it much better, it was entertaining though, Some more suggestions, would e add some {STORY} characters and just more {DEPTH} all around, but for what it is it did give me a good chuckle lol anyways good luck on any new stuff you plan to make and release, i look forward to seeing and reviewing, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This flash seems more like an ecard you could improve though as suggested some characters stories, more color and backround design, but most of all, my only issue with this one would be that it would "LOOP" over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code.

~~OVERALL~~
Kinda like a clock day e-card

~X~

[CSI: Minecraft]

Abit short but still entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
oh nice flash and i love how it starts off right away with the {ACTION} and the art is differant and unique, differant but good, now i got a little down because it was so short shorter then most, now with that said maybe you should make an assortments of these short animations and add them into one flash, kind of like a {COLAB} but not exactly, dont get me wrong it is afunny and great voices and the csi music is also great too makes for a nice little flash here, just wish it was longer maybe even abit more story to it, but besides that, it was cute and very entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make a flash with an assortments of flash or make this one longer abit longer atleast with more story to it

~~OVERALL~~
Short but still entertaining

~X~