XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Un-named GOLD Edition]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
ok i have to admit this is pretty funny i especially like your characters they are not too advanced but they are simple and funny, now you could probably work on them shape em up abit more, maybe smaller heads would be fine, but as for this animation it was entertaining i believe the {NEXT-BUTTON] just in gets in the way, you may want to remove that and let it flow like a movie, it would be better presented aswell and just better for all and besides the button tends to get abit on the anoying side, Now the animation was great just seemed an issue with always having to click on the button, also noticed there was not really anything in the backrounds thats another little part you could work on, even some solid colors would sufice, anyways i gave a few tips in hopes you can improve on this and anything new you have planned, keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For starters you may want to reshape the characters they are ok but abit more detail, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont kike that style you can always go back to the other way.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and cute but needs some work.

~X~

[VentureBros FanFiction]

Very amusing, and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Interesting flash you have here and these interesting {BEE} like characters, are pretty funny the dialog was very interesting, and funny at times, this film shows lots of effort on your part very welldone all around, i did think you could have added some subtitles for that extra touch, but the voices were pretty good, it was not too short and not too long and gave off some good laughs for me, so all and all i enjoyed it very much and cant wait to see some more from you soon, as for improving on stuff, as mention some subtitles, but not really needed, but anyways great stuff, looking forward to anything else you may have for us on the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some subtitles would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny movie interesting characters and amusing dialog.

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smirkstudios responds:

What an extremely thoughtful review! I hope you understand that these are not my characters, and I am glad you found the writing fun! Thanks again, I'll try to get you some subtitles in the Flash to come.

[In Case You Haven't Heard]

Needs lots of improving

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was interesing there was not much there and it seems to {LOOP} you may want to fix that somewhat, you can add a stop action code for the looping to stop, but other then that it needs much more animation scenes characters and so on, it seems more like an E-card then anything else,, dont get me wrong its still pretty funny and entertaining but still needs much more to it even some backrounds and much more color but these are just some small ideas to make it much better, it was entertaining though, Some more suggestions, would e add some {STORY} characters and just more {DEPTH} all around, but for what it is it did give me a good chuckle lol anyways good luck on any new stuff you plan to make and release, i look forward to seeing and reviewing, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This flash seems more like an ecard you could improve though as suggested some characters stories, more color and backround design, but most of all, my only issue with this one would be that it would "LOOP" over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code.

~~OVERALL~~
Kinda like a clock day e-card

~X~

[CSI: Minecraft]

Abit short but still entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
oh nice flash and i love how it starts off right away with the {ACTION} and the art is differant and unique, differant but good, now i got a little down because it was so short shorter then most, now with that said maybe you should make an assortments of these short animations and add them into one flash, kind of like a {COLAB} but not exactly, dont get me wrong it is afunny and great voices and the csi music is also great too makes for a nice little flash here, just wish it was longer maybe even abit more story to it, but besides that, it was cute and very entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make a flash with an assortments of flash or make this one longer abit longer atleast with more story to it

~~OVERALL~~
Short but still entertaining

~X~

[Timmy's Giant Sandwich]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well now this was a very large flash, took a good while to load up so maybe for the sake of other machines and slower ones you may want to lower the file just abit or even put it in 2 parts or something along them lines, Now the flash toon itself is pretty cute and entertaining, it has a light shade of color and the the animation is notbad, the voice over was great too, that brings me to another tip but not really needed but by adding some {SUBTITLES} you might make it abit better not that you cant understand but its always an extra touch to have, besides that this was welldone and like i said a funny and entertaining flash so good work and good luck on any new stuff coming to the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lower filesize, probably the audio is dragging it that much, even the end song, also adding some subtitles would be a nice extra touch.

~~OVERALL~~
Differant kind of flash some nice animation could use some file reduction though.

~X~

[When Romba Attacks]

Pretty entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
A decent flash you have here, kind of funny, its random at least, you really put some effor into this especially with the {BACKROUNDS} lots of detail like with the {BATHROOM} from the tile to the walls so nice job on the detail there, as for the toon it was funny kinda {SHORT} maybe you should add abit more to it, but for the mostpart it was pretty entertaining, the ending credits part was funny too only cause there really was no credits and such haha, but anyways the toon was random and short not a bad thing but could use some more to it maybe more scenes since your scenes were pretty funny, and the toon itself was giving me a few chuckles so i guess it did its job, anyways nice job keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it abit longer, add some more scenes maybe even add them credits lol.

~~OVERALL~~
a short and wacky toon

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Rubbertje responds:

Thank you, XwaynecoltX, master of reviews!

[TRUE Super Mario world]

Very cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad on this one, the loading time took awhile to get there but once started it was alright, this was actually very {CUTE} and i love all the sound/fx that really made it work well not to mention all the good looking characters that are just like the related characters, one tip could be that you add some {SUBTITLES} not that you cant hear anything but it would make it more better, anyways good humor you presented in this good animation it was not short at all maybe thats why the loading took awhile, but still i had fun with it, its a great little toon and i would love to see more of this stuff, one other thing great job on the voices it was perfect and really love how you made it very mario related, anyways great cute flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some subtitles would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
funny and cute mario themed flash loved it

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HexMe responds:

Thank you so much for your comment, we actually were going to add subbies but the time went short, i might do a update to this one with subtitles added though, well see what shows up in the future.