Interesting flash
I got a kick out of this one, has some good humor, as there is alot of stuff going on and lots to see, allthough there could be more "ACTION-SCENES" and such but there was still alot going on, very random and amusing, There is some real funny and amusing parts so you did fantastic on bringing the humor out on this, so once again awsome job there, also want to mention how well the "ANIMATION" cameout and flowed well with everything else comming along, and as to improve on something like this not sure but maybe start off with adding more action scenes as suggested.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off you could use some more action, more action scenes, besides that i thought it was ok stuff.