XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Timmy's Giant Sandwich]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well now this was a very large flash, took a good while to load up so maybe for the sake of other machines and slower ones you may want to lower the file just abit or even put it in 2 parts or something along them lines, Now the flash toon itself is pretty cute and entertaining, it has a light shade of color and the the animation is notbad, the voice over was great too, that brings me to another tip but not really needed but by adding some {SUBTITLES} you might make it abit better not that you cant understand but its always an extra touch to have, besides that this was welldone and like i said a funny and entertaining flash so good work and good luck on any new stuff coming to the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lower filesize, probably the audio is dragging it that much, even the end song, also adding some subtitles would be a nice extra touch.

~~OVERALL~~
Differant kind of flash some nice animation could use some file reduction though.

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[When Romba Attacks]

Pretty entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
A decent flash you have here, kind of funny, its random at least, you really put some effor into this especially with the {BACKROUNDS} lots of detail like with the {BATHROOM} from the tile to the walls so nice job on the detail there, as for the toon it was funny kinda {SHORT} maybe you should add abit more to it, but for the mostpart it was pretty entertaining, the ending credits part was funny too only cause there really was no credits and such haha, but anyways the toon was random and short not a bad thing but could use some more to it maybe more scenes since your scenes were pretty funny, and the toon itself was giving me a few chuckles so i guess it did its job, anyways nice job keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it abit longer, add some more scenes maybe even add them credits lol.

~~OVERALL~~
a short and wacky toon

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Rubbertje responds:

Thank you, XwaynecoltX, master of reviews!

[TRUE Super Mario world]

Very cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad on this one, the loading time took awhile to get there but once started it was alright, this was actually very {CUTE} and i love all the sound/fx that really made it work well not to mention all the good looking characters that are just like the related characters, one tip could be that you add some {SUBTITLES} not that you cant hear anything but it would make it more better, anyways good humor you presented in this good animation it was not short at all maybe thats why the loading took awhile, but still i had fun with it, its a great little toon and i would love to see more of this stuff, one other thing great job on the voices it was perfect and really love how you made it very mario related, anyways great cute flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some subtitles would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
funny and cute mario themed flash loved it

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HexMe responds:

Thank you so much for your comment, we actually were going to add subbies but the time went short, i might do a update to this one with subtitles added though, well see what shows up in the future.

[SlashClassic8: FAPFAPFAP3]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
so this one really took awhile to load, not a big issue but you may want to lower the filesize somewaht so its not so long loading and such, but for the mostpart it was alright, ok so this one was alot like the other one, with all the asian girl images, dont get me wrong they are random and funny but maybe abit repititive, also you could possibly improve on this with some more {VARIATY} of differand and much more poases, the music was cute and seemed to fit well, but now i can understand why the file was large, so reduce the music abit and maybe it will be abit smaller, but other then that it was randomly funny, just wish it had abit more to it, anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more variaty of images, and maybe some reducing of file size, im thinking more in the music was too larger

~~OVERALL~~
Random and entertaining flash

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[OMG: Preasent]

Very entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
notbad of a little flash you have here i thought your {MENU} screen could have looked better the one with the present and the play button a few things you could work on here would be adding some {COLOR} atleast to the present and the play buton you should give it more of a button like box or something, LOL the toon is short and very funny, the {AUDIO} is very scratchy, you may want to ad some {SUBTITLES} so you can better understand the dialog, but other then that it was still very funny, and since the toon was very short, maybe you should add a number of short tunes in one flash so that you have more {VARIATY} in there, just another idea that could improve on this cute flash, by the way great short toon, maybe abit more color next time.. anyways great stuff good luck on any other new stuff you got going on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
on the menue screen ad a touch of color like the present and make the {PLAY} more of a button just an idea though, more color all around would be nice, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, also adding some subtitles would help as the audio was scratchy.

~~OVERALL~~
Short and cute flash, could have abit more and some few changes as stated above.

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VenturaTV responds:

Why did you go so out of your way to tell me that it needs color and better sound i made this damn flash in under a day thanks for loving it but im sure you could of done somthing else than type this review the present is a play buttion by the way not being rude but tell this to someone who gives a fuck

[Final Mansion]

Very impressive

~~REVIEW~~
nice start to this especially the {PRE-LOADER} menu page very slick and nice looking, the loading time tended to take awhile, but it was worth the wait, also nice touch with all the extras of screens and all the little extras those things really make it much better so props to you for that stuff, and now for the actual flash, wow this was very impressive especially with the fast paced action and great music that fits very well, the graphics was very smooth and sharp the battles and all the differant little weapons and such was great, it seemed to all come together verywelldone on this, i will have to checkout more of your work , this was very impressive and i was very pleased. keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think this was awsome it would be nice to have some user interactivity in it.

~~OVERALL~~
fun flash very good visual effects.

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[SlashClassicSE: FSM]

Randomly funny again

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is interesting it again is random but yet that gave me some funny laughs with it all, it does need some {SUBTITLES} the image was funny and the voice was even funnier allthough it seemed to go on along time wich is the reason why you could have some subtitles in there for extra measure, maybe even slowing down the voice as it was running too fast, dont get me wrong this was very funny and did give me a chuckle or two, so improving would only be a plus start with some subtitles, and slowing down of the voice speed, maybe even adding some new scenes, anyways good stuff as always.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
slow down the voice speed, add some subtitles and have the flash story show new and differant scenes backrounds.

~~OVERALL~~
another funny and random episode with slash

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[Many Hopes of Good]

Randomly funny

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok this was more funny then anything else, and gave me a good chuckle, the random images was more funny then anything else, and it was great kinda reminds me of oldtimes, the joke this year was not that great but this was still a nice touch, i think you should have added much more {IMAGES} for more of the random humor of things, other then that it was some good stuff so nice job indeed, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more images and more random stuff aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random here

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Smidly responds:

Ahhh xie xie! Many thanks!