XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Anime's REAL Ending]

Cute and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Haha first off the {PRE-LOADER} was very cute, with a yoshi running about, the flash actually loaded pretty quick wich was neat, didnt have to wait long at all so nice job there, But anyways onto the flash i do think you need some {SUBTITLES} it would make it look better, the flash is actually funny though, and the {CHARACTERS} are well drawn and on top of that you gave some good humor wich i really liked and appreciated, Now this flash gets really long you have packed in alot in there wich was great and lots of twists and such but it all came together for a funny little episode, you shoould think about making more, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some subtitles for starters, i wouldnt mind seeing some more color depth in the color, like some shades and such,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and long episode

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[China L ng]

Needs more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this one is just as short as the other one with faces, now, i can understand you are still working at it, but you could put much more effort into these, like some {BACKROUNDS} and if you are going to just have them fight have some differant places they fight jumping off cliffs and have them shoot stuff kinda like yugo or something, now these are just a few ideas, another is the flash itself is too short, maybe if you piy a number of short toons together then maybe, also adding more effort into a story would also be another start, so while this is amusing and short there are alot more things to work on so i hope you do look into improving on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try adding more effort there are a number of things you can do, first of all this one needs some backround or take the sticks into differant backrounds scenes but nneds something more then just the blank backrounds, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, also could use a stop action code for the looping.

~~OVERALL~~
Some sort of stick battle, short and amusing but needs more effort.

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Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you

[For china day]

Needs improving and more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok well this was entertaining ill give you that, guess this was for china day and such, your animation is quick and short and seems to {LOOP} so you may want to add some stop action code so it doesnt loop, not just that but you may want to, think more of a story for it yours seemed more {RANDOM} then anything else, and seems to have nothing to do with china day but hey there has been alot worse that has come thru the portal, now all the {FACES} are cute, but you just need much more content and think of a story maybe they could have some sorta battle? or something along them lines, but something but i did have abit of a chuckle watching this so it was ok lol, anyways better luck next time. try and improve with those tips i suggested and ill post a few more down below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all add more to the story, give it more meaning, it was too short too random, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash

~~OVERALL~~
some smiley icons battling it seems, needs more thought and effort.

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Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you

[Devil Eyes]

Good quality

~~REVIEW~~
Nice work here this really starts off great with the {CITY-VIEW} and the animation was smooth, your {CHARACTER} work was awsome aswell very nice detail from facial expressions, to the action you had going on, one thing might be to have more animation from your characters {LIMBS} will give it more of a realistic style, your flash was really good decent quality, i thought it was kind of on the {SHORT} side though, you have good effort and skills here but you should add too it more, would love to see more {STORY} more action from the characters and like i said give the characters more realistic moves like more limb animations, but other then that its a very good flash and i look forward to seeing more from you, so untill then good luck and welcome to newgrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More limb animation so the characters have more of a realistic movment, making the story longer add more content and overall longer

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash good quality entertaining story, could use more to it though.

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[opie vs jimmy soundboard]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Ok nice board here i was not to much into opi and andie but this was still ok, i love the {DESIGN} of it all, and like how you had it the one color and the lines kinda crossed in and out from one side to the next, you should add to this cause while its a decent board, you could have like a mini screen with a short image or something from the show it would show more effort on yourside, and show more to the viewers besides just sound and buttons, eventhough it is just a soundboard but i like it so nice job there, I would even ad some new and a variaty of colors on the soundboard, like where it says opie have each name a differant color or something, regardless of all that it was some decent work and very entertaining so nice job all around from this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added colors, maybe some {IMAGES} to go with each button reflectiong on what the button calls for.

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining soundboard

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[Garrys Warm Intentions]

Love the medals

~~REVIEW~~
ok now this was a fun game here, it took me awhile to kill all six zombies, the one by the microwave was a tough one, but after some practice i got it, still couldnt figureout the secret medal but anyways, yeah the flash toon itself was {SHORT} but you made up for it with the medals and the zombie mode so all and all it was fun, your style of art is neat very old fashioned style which i like, and the {VOICE} was perfect i thought, now things that may make this better or help you improve on hmmm, maybe make a {CROSS-HAIR} a pointer it would show more like your shooting is more for show then anything else, but still liked the game short animation and mini game are always a plus so nice job indeed, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put a crosshair to show like you are really shooting, kinda like the one you had in the mini game tutorial just before the game

~~OVERALL~~
Short and cute animation, was cute though, and fun min game to go along with it, nice job

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