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[Short and Sweet]

A bit short but it was still kind of amusing.

Now here we have a good little toon, nothing on a negitive side but something interesting to keep my interest throughout the flash from start to finish, i found it inlighting, entertaining and even a bit amusing. So as just mentioned this was rather short, buti still found some entertainment value, Now it could be longer because the content you did have, had alot of amusing points, im not sure i saw any real negitive points needing improvment, most of this was pretty good so nice effort there, i do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Im always looking to help on a few improvment ideas here and there, Not all flash needs new ideas but some still need some improvments so hope you will take some of my ideas and use them to the best of your skills, More content would be a start, And make it longer keep it going with the stuff you started this with, you have some good points good with that.

[A Goomba's Life Ep 5 (S2)]

Notbad at all

That was very nicely done. There was alot of great value to this Movie, but there were some weaker points that could be addressed aswell, that will be explained later but as for a start to this, this was pretty impressive to start. So as for a sprite flash this was actually notbad, and its nice to see some sprite flashworks now and then so glad i had a chance to see some of this, Backrounds looked pretty nifty and that goes along with the graphics as the detail did show up somewhat in this, Voices were notbad, actually better then i expected, so there was some good quality there, and really made it more enjoyble throughout the movie, Story was notbad either, I found it to be interesting but again could use more depth and even more understanding to it all as some parts were just too off the wall, Overall I found this to be a pretty good movie had some areas where it can be worked on, more explainedbelow, but for the mostpart it was pretty good i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try. But i would suggest some ideas of improvment i would start with the story seemed kinda crazy at times and didnt know what was going on, You may even want to add some "SUBTITLES" making it better to understand on that aspect of things aswell,

DemonicDragon93 responds:

Thank you for review. The movie does have subtitles but i made it a option for someone to drag there mouse over it. if they wanted it. I'll identify that more closely in the next episode

[Quiet]

This was funny and Amusing

A good flash here, it was amusing and entertaining especially when the guy shoots baddie and he is like boom that was funny and amusing, So this was pretty good of a flash it had some sadness in there and some good emotion, so nice work on bringing that element to the story, it really shot it up good, and as for the "MUSIC" that was stand alone on its own and really impressed me so you had some good choices here all around and really was glad i saw this, and hope to see more from yousoon, anyways keep up the good work. on one last note woould love to see you continue on this style maybe with some sorta seres of segmants, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was pretty entertaining had lots of stuff, i would like to see you continue it on with more of a random feel also.

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash here some good visuals, some nice action, and even some emotion, a good flash and good ending here.

[Skyrim - CotN]

This was amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was kinda interesting, it has its amusing points, now i must say it did have some racisim "JOKES" and while that always gets a good humor value sometimes it doesnt but must say you did present some good "HUMOR" with this one, and ill have to checkout the rest of the series but i must also add that this one was pretty amusing, Also nice to see that others liked it alot as it did win an daily award so congrats there, The ending of this was pretty neat and probably the best part leading from everything else. so there you presented all the areas of humor, story and cliffhangar wich all seemed to come together in a good random yet somewhatof a story for some good humor all around, anyways nice job all around, So in the end this was a pretty good piece if you ask me, i got a few good laughs out of it, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here is where i suggest some improving points, well to be honest it was pretty good as it was, and had all the elements of a great flash, maybe making it a tad longer wouldnt hurt, but for the most of it, it was right on.

~~OVERALL~~
And overall this was funny with a bit of racisim. but still amusing.

cyotecody555 responds:

Thanks for the review bud

[The Flying Scotsman]

Interesting

Kind of short flash here but it was entertaining, i love the simpsons so this was amusing, the thing though was this probably could have used some sort of subtitles to better understand it all, but it was funny, and also the art was real simple maybe if you had abit more effort like with the trees and not use alot of gradinents it could be somewhat better, also it being short was a downer, maybe if you added some more content and longer would be some more effort, in making it better, but for the most of it, it was amusing and entertaining, keep up the good work. below are a few suggestions of improvment hope it helps.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This could use some subtitles, its a nice option to have and with his accent it would be pretty handy, The art was rather simple, you should put some more effort like dont use so much gradients but you more of a sketh like to it add some textures and form the trees and back scenes abit better, This was also kind of short you should take the time to stretch it out with some more stuff going on more scenes and more jokes of course.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny yet short flash that funny character from the simpsons will make us all laugh with this short toon.

[1984]

Ok this was interesting.

As mentioned above this was interesting now i dont know much of this topic but seemed to have alot of odd stuff some propaganda stuff and so on, The "MUSIC" seemed to be o but there were some other areas that could use more effort, So This starts off slow and picks up and the music really pushes this to the limits so that was a plus, This seemed way too short though, you should have extended it longer with more content and more visuals also seemed more like trailer of sorts, but in the end this was notbad, and you did push the effort on this so it was notbad at all and i enjoyed it, allthough it was hard too understand as it was mostly visuals and music so kinda like a music video, nice job on the effort though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This could be better, This seemed way too short though, you should have extended it longer with more content and more visuals,

~~OVERALL~~
Kinda reminded me of a music video, but was still amusing.

[TOME Short: Hackers]

Decent flash

So i did get some humor from this, but almost seems like you pushed on that, thats ok, only problem there is it showed too much, but it was ok and i did get, First of all congrats on the daily feature thats always a nice plus, Size of the flash was notbad either so again props on the condencing and even with all that it was not a bad flash at all, infact i kinda liked it, also like mentioned seemed like the humor portion was pushed, on the voices could be better or more orginised, this film could have used more build up in what was comming up, may it be fear. or even a joke, The animation was pretty good but could be smoothed out so it flows better so with that all said this was a pretty good flash, i enjoyed it and had fun with it, but could be spiced up with those few things that i said above, anyways good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
voices could be better or more orginised, Also could have used more build up in what was comming up, may it be fear. or even a joke, and animation was pretty good but could be smoothed out so it flows better,

~~OVERALL~~
So overall this was an ok flash but has some areas it can be improved.

[DigitalPrison]

Hmm this was pretty intersting.

This was an interesting flash here and i like there is some medals, not much but a few, the "SIZE" of the file was a tad much though but guess it was all worth it, Ok so the story was pretty good adn it has a sorta happy ending but still pretty good, and there was alot of diffeant cut scenes and the story was really good, and the style of animation was very impressive aswell and i really enjoyed this, as for the game part with medals that wasneat you really hid stuff well, and i got some but not all, still i think you should add more medals, but for the most part this was a pretty good movie with a bonus in medals so nice effort nice flash movie here, keep up the awsome work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all some extra medals might be a nice addition to this, and some small file reduction but for the mostpart this was pretty good i thought.

~~OVERALL~~
A good story here with some added medals for extra game play, so nice job all around even the music was pretty good.