XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[English ad]

Kinda interesting

This is interesting and i guess its for a class project of some sort, The whole idea, of it being educational was ok but kinda loses interest, i suppose if you styled it up with some nice visuals,and even backround effects around the work you god, kinda gotta keep the viewer interested, some tips on making it better would be some options to move along in your flash, and even some improved music and or more of the music, So anyways for what you did present it was pretty interesting just needed abit more interesting to it, maybe the tips above and below can help to make it better, untill then good luck i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some tips on making it better would be some options to move along in your flash, and even some improved music and or more of the music, some special effects and better visuals to keep the viewer interested.

[Work Buddies]

Differant

Ok so this was a lil differant, it was entertaining enough but was abit on the low end side of things on quality, the "VOICES" were ok but could have used some better direction and making the voices sound differant would have helped aswell, there was just alot of repettive-ness with the jokes and all, The "ANIMATION" could be directed alot better aswell, as it was kinda poorly handled, Some of the jokes were pretty good and i got a few lauhs but for the most part they could have been better and more creative with the humor. so there is some more effort that can be done, wich i have stated already, anyways good luck on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are a number of things that could be worked on >> Voices were ok but could have used some better direction and making the voices sound differant would have helped, and then there was the animation kinda sloppy and could have been abit more smoother. some of the jokes were stale could have been more creative there.

[GYSA]

Cool zombies

Zombies are always great, and i loved watching this, lots of zombies lots of action and lots of killing, and you were even able to throw in some "HUMOR" so for those aspect of things, it was pretty fun packed, and love all the action, but mainly the zombies, I thought you could have managed to make it somewhat longer, but for the mostpart it was pretty good as it is, now as for improving you could spice up the "GRAPHICS" abit more, more goulosh and gore wouldnt hurt either, but other then that this was pretty good, keep up the good work, i wouldnt mind seeing more like this, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
now as for improving you could spice up the "GRAPHICS" abit more, more goulosh and gore wouldnt hurt either

[Cooper the Creeper]

Good story to start

~~REVIEW~~
A good flash here i love how you kept itwith some "SUSPENSE" and kept it very interesting so with this one the story kept upto par, The character was good and you gave good story around that character so this was pretty good if you ask me, The ending with blowing up everything was odd but it was kind of amusing aswell, Some other fantastic pieces in this besides the story was how nice the artwork looked youput in the time and it shows, But anyways this was a pretty good flash, and i got some good entertainment from it so awsome job hope to see more soon this was pretty good if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring more silly and more random thats what really pushed this toon over the edge for me

[Fenada 001]

Entertaining and amusing

Ok so i found this flash to be pretty interesting and slightly entertaining, its one of those flash pieces thats grabs your attention and keeps you there, i like the style and direction you took with this, anyways great start to a decent flash. So there was not much of a story but with how you presented it i guess there was no need, but it was pretty entertaining, it was kind of on the short side, so maybe make it longer with abit more content next time, but overall this was a pretty good tune, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash i really enjoyed it, heep up the hard work, as i know these flash types and styles can take time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So things to improve on its always hard to improve on every little thing but. there could be some small improvments here and there, so i took a little time to maybe help and improve on this, below are one or two suggestions that i hope can make things better for all. So for this flash works i thought there could be more "CONTENT" maybe make it longer since it was kind of short, other then that it was a pretty solid tune.

[Garbodor is Ugly]

This was notbad

Well this was notbad it was ok i thought the "ANIMATION" was very welldone smooth and just flows so nicley, so that was a plus there, Animation was good but maybe abit more smoother in parts here and there, Now i must admit it was neat seeing a pokemon as its been years and years, Seemed abit on the simple side though, but that was ok i thought, Maybe because it was just a little here and there and could have used abit more to it then you had, Not much to this but the animation and design of this all was pretty good i thought, now if anything i guess some smoother flowing animation but the rest was pretty good if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Animation was notbad but maybe more smoother in spots here and there, but really besides all that it was alright.

[Meme City]

Interesting flash

I got a kick out of this one, has some good humor, as there is alot of stuff going on and lots to see, allthough there could be more "ACTION-SCENES" and such but there was still alot going on, very random and amusing, There is some real funny and amusing parts so you did fantastic on bringing the humor out on this, so once again awsome job there, also want to mention how well the "ANIMATION" cameout and flowed well with everything else comming along, and as to improve on something like this not sure but maybe start off with adding more action scenes as suggested.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off you could use some more action, more action scenes, besides that i thought it was ok stuff.

[Ebonics Lesson]

Notbad kind of funny

Haha so i got a few good laughs out of this, this was pretty entertaining, the "VOICES" were great as was chris rock, the jpegs were amusing but thought you could have put abit more effort there with more real character work and not the "JPEGS" but it was still ok, You should also fix the "LOOPING" it tends to get anoying, and is an easy fix with a stop action code, But i did get some laughs out of this whole piece, very entertaining and amusing, very funny indeed, and along with the stop action code dont forget to add a replay button and this would greatly make this flash better but overall i found it funny and entertaining, nice job regardless,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The jpegs were amusing but thought you could have put abit more effort there with more real character work and not the jpegs, You could place a STOP-ACTION-CODE it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash. Also if you do a search on the newgrounds flash games, for Stop action code you will turn up a bunch of tutorials on it and how to do it aswell as other great flash tutorials and how to do's good luck.