XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Garrys Warm Intentions]

Love the medals

~~REVIEW~~
ok now this was a fun game here, it took me awhile to kill all six zombies, the one by the microwave was a tough one, but after some practice i got it, still couldnt figureout the secret medal but anyways, yeah the flash toon itself was {SHORT} but you made up for it with the medals and the zombie mode so all and all it was fun, your style of art is neat very old fashioned style which i like, and the {VOICE} was perfect i thought, now things that may make this better or help you improve on hmmm, maybe make a {CROSS-HAIR} a pointer it would show more like your shooting is more for show then anything else, but still liked the game short animation and mini game are always a plus so nice job indeed, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put a crosshair to show like you are really shooting, kinda like the one you had in the mini game tutorial just before the game

~~OVERALL~~
Short and cute animation, was cute though, and fun min game to go along with it, nice job

~X~

[Lost on halloween]

Awsome festive flash

~~REVIEW~~
Wow first off i love the {PRELOADER} and the menu page the {MUSIC} was awsome, fit very well, and not only did you give the menu page music and a nice logo, but you gave it some nice graphical work so very nice job there, The graphics in the flash itself was not perfect but it has its moment its simple with a sorta cutness to them, the backrounds were nice and you gave it some, the animation is cute kinda just ended shortly, Now overall i really enjoyed this little festive flash animation you are a good animator and bringing the art and animation together cameout well so props to you on a fantastic piece, i look forward to more flash from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i wouldnt mind it abit longer, maybe even start a halloween series but thats just me

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and scary kinda

~X~

CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[The Hell Are My Legs 34]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Well it seems you have 34 of these, thats alot in a series, i think my issue with this one and alot of the other ones is that they are way too {SHORT} and they are like random as hell nothing wrong with the randomness and such, but still after 34 episodes, you would think some more effort would be in these later episodes and such, now as for this little episode, it was cute and random but still the ending needs more understanding it was confusing as hell, dont get me wrong i like these just needs more effort in the story and introducing new elements to it and all, So as improving try and bringout the story more, making it longer and more stuff going on, more characters would be nice aswell, i like the series just want to see more effort in these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content to the flash put more effort into the story add new characters and so on, these will all make it much better.

~~OVERALL~~
Episode 34 short but kinda funny.

~X~

[Oscars]

Amusing characters

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok i had fun with this one, why is the {SCREEN} so small though?? anyways this was pretty funny you hhad some nice characters with some good detail there bodies were {STIFF} so for some more improving there you could make some more animated bodies limbs and arms, Now you did have some good {HUMOR} funny and the story was ok even as short as it was, I would also suggest on improving by adding some {SUBTITLES} the characters talked so fast it was hard to understand at times, atleast with subtitles you can catch some of that, again just an idea that may help on making the flash more enjoyble for all, Now i suggested a few ideas on improving a funny little flash here, but i do think you have something here and you should make more as in a series cause you have the humor down and you have some funny characters, you just need to touch up on them, anyways funny flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more animated bodies limbs and arms, have them move there arms and legs and even head from time to time, make the characters not so {STIFF} Make the screen size much larger,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny short and amusing, nice humor with these characters.

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MigitMadness responds:

Thank you for the detailed review. The video size has been fixed since you watched it. These videos are old, but were just put on Newgrounds and we had a little trouble getting them uploaded. We use a higher quality microphone now, so the videos we have made recently and will be making should be more understandable. The animation is a slow progression for us, but they will be getting better. These videos are actually a series already, all these characters are in most of our other videos.

[Blueys adventure]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually pretty cute, the animation was smooth running not too short and not too long kinda just right if you ask me, but it was cute and entertaining, and allthough the character was very {SIMPLE} just a ball you actually made it work, even with some funny face expressions, the {MUSIC} was simple as well but felt it was fitting for the feel you gave it, not the best flash in the world but for sure a decent piece of work, now how can we improve on this? in my oppinion i think you could make a small series of shorts like this, with other ball episodes of deaths and mishaps, maybe other ball heads are introduced and such, try it out and see what happens, anyways i enjoyed the flash it was decent work and a good effort. And i look forward to reviewing more of your work soon, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more small episodes like this, with new adventures and new ball heads but keep it simple as this one

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short

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CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review. I was actually thinking of remaking this, with a slightly better storyline and far more polished look.