XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Its a Tank!]

Haha great ideas here

You have started with something good here, And I must say you have a pretty good flick here, Some things start out with Advanced and Excitedly ideas, You have brought your A-Game with this flash and it shows. Looking forward to the rest of this entry. I like the idea of a real video and some flash-tastic visuals to combine for something really impressive and it did not drag on and gave some good humor aswell, tom is an actor lol, anyways nice work here. OK first off decent flash you have here, there was some nifty points in it, Maybe later more Clarification on some confused parts I had, But i still must say you oudid yourself with this And you sure do know how to Produce some interesting flash works here, So let me take this Opportunity to thank you for a delightfull flash experience.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be slightly longer and wouldnt mind some more "EFFECTS" maybe with flash that can come alive some how.

~X~

[Animation tests]

Nice concept

Enticing is what this was and you have a nact for this sort of stuff and allthough there are some things that could be improved but I will get to that later in this review, but Quite Frankly this was a great start to what I hope will be a fantastic idea turned into flash adventure. You have a nice concept here, I really love the black and white on this, but most of all really like the spots of color and such, I do wish you had more of a story here but you really made a nice idea here, and I can see it propelling into something even more. Also the "RANDOM" you presented here was really awsome though. And once again I must say that was a pretty good entry something differant but I liked it for what it is, Wish there was more like this, but for what it is, its pretty interesting and entertaining ofcourse.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a certainly good flash if you ask me, but it could be better with a few suggestions and ideas, Theres a number of things and ways you could go about it Great concept with this one, but needs more of a story base you have the animations down and the detail just put it together in a great kind of story.

~X~

ganuganu responds:

Thank you for the detailed review. First i thought to rate my capabilities by posting the tests here and then planned to make a Zombie animation.

[.flaswf]

Haha great stuff

Now as I start up on this Wonderfully start to a flash, Apparently I have missed this when it first came out but glad I have a chance to check it out now, and I must say I am Absolutely enjoying your idea here It has Suited me just right and was a good Treat to check out. Allthough this was short but it was pretty funny and a good idea, characters were great, and humor was spot on, nice work indeed. Anyways good entertainment here you really know how to push the effort to the next level, and you really bring it out on the screen so nice job on this one and good effort here, And its sad that im comming close to the end of this review because I really liked what you had to offer here, My Prospective on this it was something differant and nifty.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like what you have presented here, Its a good production and presents some decent quality of a film work here, I like how this flows along But there could be some more Tweaks To be honest i would just want this longer and more to it, maybe even making a short series out of this.

~X~

[Ultimate Central: Part 1]

Lots going on here

And here we have a cleverly imagined entry, and im sure there will be lots of Criticisms but aside from all that I have to say That I Absolutely Like the idea of this and as I review this its just the start of things. but now lets really get into this. The voices need lots of work on this one and I would say the "MIC" could be of a better choice as there was some static there, other then that story and animation was not bad. And now the end is near in my review, while i had a fun time reviewing this I still had some confusion here but thats ok I Will watch it a few more times, but for the mostpart this was notbad interesting on some parts and could be somewhat better in others, So in my Closing Remarks Overall you have produced a good submission here, Keep up the interesting flash-works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I will start off this part with a few ideas and suggestions that could make it much better and overall bringing more viewers too seeing your content. just takes that little extra effort to bring across all fronts. Voices need more quality to them and you need a better quality mic.

~X~

[Zelda: UO Epis:7]

Nice work

Its hard to get this started off with the right words, so ill just go ahead and say that I have had some fun with this entry, you pushed the efforts, and showed us some interesting things, now ofcourse there were a few issues were things could be better, but overall I thought you did a good job on this one and showed some effort thruout the entry. This was prettygood, the artwork and characters are pretty impressive the animation was notbad, I think the only issue I had was the "VOICES" they are notbad but could be better. So after seeing this a few times I thought it was alright some stuff I was not too fond of but other stuff I really liked what you showed here, and theres even more potential to it aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was certainly A decent film here, I do Recommend Some Tweaking, on the improvment side of things, theres not much to say on the matter since most of it was pretty straight forward but. The voices could be better more actiong on the parts or something to give more improvemenst in that aspect of things.

~X~

[Alfred Gets Fixed]

Funny

Well you have something interesting here, it was interesting and you added some nifty visuals, I really like the direction you took here and it all made for a decent little flash movie. You have all the Material, and you have presented it well, No I mean Wonderfully well done, This was a good find in the portal. Funny film here it was entertaining the animation was spot on and the music was just right aswell, you can "FIX" the "LOOPING" butother then that this was not half bad. Well here we are at the end here or almost to the end of the review, and What I got from this experience of the flash was that it was an interesting one and you know what you are doing and you have put those forward with ease, some other things could be discussed and so on for improvments. So in my Closing Remarks you have something good here keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a good flash lots of great stuff, but still could use some extra efforts and details, so below are a few ideas that may help, hope to see them used, it would only help in making your flash much better. This flash needs a stop action code, it will stop the looping that it does, adding a replay at the end of the movie will help aswell, just a good idea that should bring abit more quality to the flash. that was the onlything I found.

~X~

emily-youcis responds:

Lol dude I made this 10 years ago when I was 16.
Check out my new shit, I think I improved. : ]

[Valentine's Day 2009]

Touching

This is like an Advanced piece of work, so your hard work does show in the visuals, and thats what really impressed me the most, You have Executed everything very well, and this flowed like majic, so nice job there, I am Excitedly reviewing this and hope to review more of your work sometime soon. While this was a touching story and the artwork was pretty good, I did think you could have added more improved animation, there was not too much of it, nice work though. OK so seems like there was some time and effort put into this thats all fine and dandy but still I came across some thing that could be better, but overall it was a good flash entry and I can see it being upgrded for more enjoy for everyone watching.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really found your flash interesting but still has room for improvments, so with these ideas I hope you can make it somewhat better, hope the ideas do help as you do have a decent flash entry here. Just keep up the quality some nice effort in cleaning things up is always a plus aswell, so just think about those ideas and roll with it. This could use more animation not just little bits here and there but more animation all around.

~X~