XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[s0und has a nice dick]

lol

Well this one was a tad different then what you normally submit but this actually had some depth and quality, it could use some more in the back rounds and maybe even subtitles.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some subtitles and some back round work is a start in the right direction.

~X~

[The Protomen - Unrest]

Mega man

This was one great Discovery of some interesting ideas and an even better concept as it all plays out, I really like what you do and what you have done here, Sound seemed kind of static-ish but you had some nice visuals with all the sprite action and whatnot, this had a very video game -ish feel so nice efforts there. And thats the end of that one, A good presentation good knowledge of the animation and flash skills wich really payed off and I was pretty impressed with everything presented here so nice effort indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash or the ideas you do have, just that there could be some basic improvments for the better, just a few tips to make things better. so here are a few maybe one or two ideas, to make things somewhat better. Add some quality to the sound as it was kind of statiish.

~X~

[German Xmas Market]

Random

This is Perhaps one of the most interesting movie types I have seen in a while, when I first came across it! What I found good about this was how you can learn alot from a simple flash such as this one. This actually reminds of another flash I checked out, Some parts could have more of a Refine about it, but you did an awsome job. And here was something random some funny and you really gave it the random factor, was onfuesed about some things and such, but Thats what stood out to me. Anyways I was enjoying this flash here you put in some effort you put in the time and everything seemed to flow and work well with each other thing going on, and there was some interesting stuff happening.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was pretty good of a flash but could use a few more changes, fixes and adjustments to make it even better, and here are just a few Recommendation that I think would help improve on it greatly I would go as far as adding more random stuff and more scenes with that random factor effect.

~X~

[Meet the Spy]

Great view shots

Here you have a good entry, something people can really get into and enjoy, it has some replay value or in this case more of a re-watch value but it was entertaining like that and makes for a good submission, now thruout this review I may suggest a few ideas, but I must say this was pretty good and I found it to be an entertaining one, keep that up. Great view shots on this one the characters were pretty good, maybe a few shades and details on the characters themselfs but its notbad work here. I have almost come to the end of this submission, and somethings I found pleasent, and some even more pleasent, all and all it was a pretty decent entry, You know how to Produce some good stuff here, It is obvious though that this could still use some touch ups and i may explain that in the improvment sections but if not cheers to a good flash presentations here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ideas and suggestions they are just possitive ideas that could improve on your flash, so just think about a few of them and maybe you could impleent one or two or even more of them. More shades and details on the characters.

~X~

[Sketched - Last Requests]

Good stuff

Wow, This was Enticing I had no idea that a Flash that looked so simple could have so much style. What really makes this work is that it doesn't try to be Super fancy or anything. This was pretty good nice animation even some good humor I did think the voices could have come with some subtitles but not really needed but still pretty impressive, this film was kind of long and that was ok too And so there you have it another entry submitted with some interesting and odd happenings but those are the ones I like, it was not the perfect of submissions but you still added a twist here and there, and i generally enjoyed your presentation, I guess this type of flash may only target a certain market of viewers but guess thats ok too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few improvments could be done here so below and even above in the review I have posted a few ideas that could really make this flash take off, so use some of these ideas, even as basic as some may be but in the end your flash will be much better for it. and who knows you may see some unexpected oucomes aswell with a more efficiant running flash entry. This one could use some subtitles, not needed but would be a good feature of the film.

~X~

[Rotten Antenna]

Very artistic

It's pretty satisfying when you get to see stuff like this, so I thank you for creating something neat and differant, This had a simple touch, I appreciate the simple things and thats why I liked this. There are some areas that you could Refine, but for the mostpart this was cleverly done, And you Utilised all the Material in just the right way. But as I have said in the title this was very artistic the colors and the view shots really come into focus on this one great view shots awsome visuals here. I like what you have presented here, there was some interesting elements to this, there was some quality to it, but I still feel it lacked some points, maybe that will come thu better with some more effort throughout.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So things to improve on its always hard to improve on every little thing but. there could be some small improvments here and there, so I took a little time to maybe help and improve on this, below are one or two suggestions that I hope can make things better for all. So here are some of them ideas if any. Make the canvus size much larger to show all the great detail of this artistic piece.

~X~

[The Dungeons and Dragons]

Nice work

I am generally not a fan of these types movies but it had some un-expected movie fun and some nice visuals. It turned out to be actually fairly enjoyable. I appreciate you looking for originality in your work as this seemed like it. so great movie entry here. And here was another great Discovery from the portal, hope to find more just like it. This was a good idea the thing about the characters is the no "MOUTHS" and I would love to see some "SUBTITLES" but other then that this was a good concept. I love that this one won some awards that was very well deserving and the content really shows off the work and time you must have put into itso nice job all around on this. And well there you have it, it was an alright flash could have some adjustments but thats for later, but for the mostpart this was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining submission, there are a few more suggestions but thats for later aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was certainly a decent production But still could use a few tips and pointers for some better imrpvment points, Some discussing here and there along with some Tweaking is Recommended And Focus on the weaker parts of the flash and make them stronger so here are some helpful tips on improvong. But hope it does help I really like this submission. Add some mouths on the characters it was rather creepy, Adding some subtitles would be a plus on this, while the voices are alright the subtitles would be just something extra to have, and something to think about.

~X~

[If You Were Gay, Roy]

Cute and Amusing

This is one of the most Entertaining flash entries I have come across in awhile. It mostly works so well because you are just inspired so much to keep it going and going. and its an interesting movie style aswell, There's tons of nifty things going on in this one. and thats what makes it nifty. This was pretty Advanced if you ask me. One of the voices in there sounds like "KERMIT-THE-FROG" maybe its just me lol, anyways cute little musical flash you have here with some decent animation. And so with all that said this was a good toon, nice content some good entertainment value to this, and while this review is comming to an end i still did enjoy your work here and look forward to seeing more of it in the future, so my last words here would be, keep Producing these awsome flash-works and keep people enjoying them.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here we are again looking for some improvment points, to be honest this was pretty good, so if I do find any lacking points, it wont be too much as the flash was pretty ok on its own, but with alot of flash there is always something. Would love to see more effort on the "BACK ROUNDS" as there are a tad bland.

~X~