XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[If You Were Gay, Roy]

Cute and Amusing

This is one of the most Entertaining flash entries I have come across in awhile. It mostly works so well because you are just inspired so much to keep it going and going. and its an interesting movie style aswell, There's tons of nifty things going on in this one. and thats what makes it nifty. This was pretty Advanced if you ask me. One of the voices in there sounds like "KERMIT-THE-FROG" maybe its just me lol, anyways cute little musical flash you have here with some decent animation. And so with all that said this was a good toon, nice content some good entertainment value to this, and while this review is comming to an end i still did enjoy your work here and look forward to seeing more of it in the future, so my last words here would be, keep Producing these awsome flash-works and keep people enjoying them.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here we are again looking for some improvment points, to be honest this was pretty good, so if I do find any lacking points, it wont be too much as the flash was pretty ok on its own, but with alot of flash there is always something. Would love to see more effort on the "BACK ROUNDS" as there are a tad bland.

~X~

[Axeman]

Good story here

So for a movie submission, This had its good and bad parts. For the most part, the good out-weighed the bad, so it was an movie entry I would recommend to others in an instant, It was a simple submission / movie but still enjoyed what you have here. So for me this was a great find and Discovery in the portal, It was Wonderfully done. The "STORY" part of things here was pretty impressive, the "VISUALS" are not bad somewhat simple but that made well for the story so i was pretty impressed with this one, also like the different "VIEW-SHOTS" And now we come to the end here well almost and what I took away from the experience here was that it was pretty interesting and Refreshing some stuff could be made better and have more entertaining value, I hope i can Clarify that later or maybe i have here, but thats all explained later, but for the most of this I liked it, so good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are many ways to improve on this, and I have some advice here and there a few tops and a few adjustments should make this a top notch flash, so try a few of the ideas and and let the flash become even better. So try some of the ideas and advice, maybe you will see something and go with it, and in the end it will make a better outcome of a flash movie entry. I can see these "SHORTER" but in a series of sorts, this was good but did go long.

~X~

[Masters of Doom!]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, the visuals were ok and slightly dated but still good, and you gave this some humor and that made up for the graphics, overall it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The only thing here I can see improvements would be posibly the "VOICES" they are not perfect but could be slightly better.

~X~

[Sunshine The Parakeet]

Great artwork

I had fun with this and while not revolutionary, I love the idea of itself. I have been writing this review and come to enjoy this, It didn't seem to go with a general theme, just kind of random. It was interesting that way. This was various things that i could think of, you have done a Wonderfully Enticing job so nice work indeed. This sort of reminded me of the old toon "REN and STIMPY" had the same kind of humor and even art style so nice effort there, also like the music in the intro of the film. And on an ending note to the review I thought it was an overall decent film, no real hick-ups about it but if I do have any issues about it I will post them below in the improvments area.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I got a lot of good from this flash it was amazing actually, But also there is lots of room for improvments, just a few things here and there, but the extra effort would really improve on this and make it better and a great flash overall. More "SHADES" in the bird more deeper colors aswell.

~X~

[The Sprite Collab]

Creative

Now its stuff like this that I really take a like too, it has all the elements and has just some unique sense about them, so you have done a good job here and while I do say that there could be more done, but I wont touch up on that yet, Well as im deep into the review I must say this was pretty "CREATIVE" and while "SPRITES" are not my thing you have done pretty well here. And overall this was notbad of a flash as mentioned it could use a few things here and there but thats with all flash works that just comeout, It was an entertaining flash and I really enjoyed it hope to see more soon. You can really Produce a good product here, and give much enjoyment to all the ones who watch so anyways good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really enjoyed this flash here, there was alot of stuff and that really kept me interested aswell as entertained, Now while this was pretty good you could still use a few tips. Instead of an ongoing film maybe have "CHOICES" of the different animation by different artists and what not, just an idea to think about.

~X~

[Cpt.Falcon Hyes]

Notbad work here

Its not all the time that one comes across a flash submission like this one, its somewhat differant but has an exciting feel and touch here, As soon as this started it was something unique and differant ofcourse but thats more on the plus side of things. there is alot of Potential within this and I would love to see that excell to higher hights. This was kind of "ARTISTIC" with the artsy like colors and all, the animation was decent the one thing that could be better here would be maybe adding subtitles and making this film longer. I feel this could have been a little better you want to Grasp the audiance with some dazzling visuals, and some sparkly touces, Now you did present a good flash submission here, it was pretty entertaining but again could use some work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments are always a plus in this area, so try and work on some of the ideas and suggestions I have suggested, some of them would really help, while others might just be more think tank ideas. the one thing that could be better here would be maybe adding subtitles and making this film longer

~X~

[Roller Coaster Junkie]

Interesting

Before I get started on this review I would like to take this time and say that this was a decent flash entry and you have done alot to bring the fun and entertaining value to the table, so props to you for that, as for the rest it was all a good flash and I really enjoyed what you have presented here, glad to see you putting the effort fourth here. This was amusing and with a cute song to go with it, love the fresh use of colors and what not it was a good cute flash so notbad at all And so we come to the end of the review, a decent flash works here, some nice and entertaining stuff to see, and while it was not perfect of even the best I have seen on this site, I must still say that I was pleasently pleased with the outcome and glad it had some humor to it, so on that astrospect of things it was a decent flash movie submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some ideas for improvment are always a plus, just have to put the time and effort and remember the details is what can make it a great hit, so i hope with some of these tips that I have mentioned in the review and down below will help, and if not I had a good time checking this out. and hope to see some better improvments in the future. Well I would like o see the character do more random and funny stunts, maybe throw in some splashes of random color in there aswell.

~X~

[Ackbar : The Movie]

Deflector shield lol

Well here we are on the last one in the series and it was just as funny as all the rest, While I have griped over a few things and how short these are, they are still funny stuff, I hope one day we see more of these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you know me longer, more scenes, more story, subtitles etc.

~X~