XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HOT SANTA HENTAI]

um ok

So this one was very random, lots of random jpegs, and some below average artwork, but it was funny and amusing, kind of short though, other then that it was alright for a laugh or two.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I did think you over-used the images like there was tomany of them, and might have been better with some of your own drawings and art, even if it takes some time to do them would show more effort in the end. Also making it longer with more original content would be a plus.

~X~

the-starwolf responds:

hey xwayne nice to get some reviews from you on my old work, the mass using of picture was actually what i wanted to do hmmm

[Sketched - Therapy]

This was cute

And so in a big event or show when it ends there is not much left, But with this movie you have left an echo of all the effort and that shows off well with this one. This was a rather cute animation, the story played out well and made for some good humor, This could be great with some subtitles, nice artwork and character designs though. Overall this was a good flash submission, there was some Enhanced details that made this worthwhile and you gave it some good momentum, and it kept me interested so you did have the right stuff and such, Now dont get me wrong there is still plenty of room for improvments and more enhancments but for the time being its pretty good I thiught.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
What can I say or even suggest to improve on this, Not sure I have anything to suggest as you coverd all the basics, This could be great with some subtitles, but thats about it,

~X~

[Saturday Morning Watchmen]

Well this was interesting

This was un expected the characters the animation was pretty good old like colors like old comic style and the audio was fantastic, it was all around a decent piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well could be longer maybe even go into some stories and whatnot.

~X~

[pootytang is mutated fag]

Ohmy

Well what can i say these are interesting to say the least, all the jpeg and flashy images is amusing but probably over used, so I would suggest adding more natrual art characters and backrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More artwork and less jpegs would be a big plus.

~X~

[pootytang eats dildos]

These are um..

Well not sure what to think of these they are amusing for sure seems like little effort but again they are funny and amusing, they could be longer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as said just above could be longer more content maybe less jpegs aswell.

~X~

[Pootytang drinks cum]

lol ok

Well these are funny and amusing that sounds quality is still pretty low maybe a better mic or find a better recording, something along those lines.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sounds quality could be worked on.

~X~

[Dos and Donts of Chivalry]

Funny

So I was Excitedly ready get into this one and there are some Enticing elements about this and it seems to get even more Advanced as you go on, so for sure this is something that has caught my attention on a few levels. Really like the fresh and funky art here, you also bring a good iea across the board here, voices came out great too, love all the little does and donts makes for a funny film. And as I finish the whole movie I now like what you have done but again would like to see even more done, some slight more effort, some more extras here and there. and just a tad more visuals and some nice effects could excell this even further.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I certainly like this flash film, There was some decent visuals and some nice work presented here, I do think you can make the "VIEW-SCREEN" larger, maybe also adding some splashy effects in each do and dont would also be a plus.

~X~

[Pootytang Exposed]

lol

Well the audio quality was kinda low and some subtitles wouldnt hurt, and this needs much more content aswell as some more new scenes and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content, more scenes, better quality of audio.

~X~

[Weebl and Bob : Goobuster]

These are always great

Now here we go another interesting flash, This is certainly A good start to a flash just like I like to see, some areas could use a Refine or Tweak here and there but still a great start to the flash, but lets really get this started. Well I must say these are always great the "VOICES" are really funny, these are not that long but still entertaining the artwork is fresh and crisp, nice job overall. So I have enjoyed your work here today and hope to see more of it in the comming future, if you keep making stuff like this and keep improving on stuff I will ofcourse be right there to enjoy it aswell, so nice effort you have here. There was a few instances where you could make things better but we will discuss improvments later, but anyways great stuff sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A fun piece here, would love to see you take these into new scenes and such everything else is pretty good.

~X~