XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[K&K-Cat Problems]

lol

Haha well this was funny cute characters fun ideas and some ok humor but the jokes could be much better maybe a little more effort in that areas and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More work on the jokes, they are ok but neem more ump to them.

~X~

[Power Star]

Entertaining Film

And so right from the start this entry yielded lots of fun and shows off right away and as I do continue on I have hopes for the the rest and glad how this has started. Lots of action in this one the sprite work is pretty good, and I like the tid bits of "HUMOR" you gave this so nice job all around. And so an entertaining experience we have come up with here, there are some things that you could do to make it better but I will leave that for later, but for the mostpart I was entertained with your movie entry here. You are a great Visionary of flash and it shows with this submission, Glad I had the Opportunity to check this one out today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Converting some of the latent potential to actual plus points is where you need to focus your efforts, some of the areas that does need some work is not all that much, For the most part you have covered it all, maybe adding some "DIALOG" between chaacters would be one way.

~X~

[My power]

Notbad

This was actually notbad I like that the stick characters are not so "DULL" and you gave this film some good action with fighting you even gave some good "MUSIC" to go along with it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more "FLASHY EFFECTS" would be a huge plus for this film.

~X~

[Mac and JayJay]

LOL

Well this was kind of odd but it was very entertaining, the characters were good, and the animation was notbad, but the "VOICES" need much work and there was some static in the backround when the voices were in play.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a better mic to remove the static, and more effort in the voice acting.

~X~

[Planetoid - Original]

Artistic

So nothing really dirty on this one all good and clean work, And it shows with each new scene that comes up, And I hope you do continue on that element, As this was a pleasure. This was pretty artistic and the "ANIMATION" was smooth and delightfull, this also really works with all the music and smooth animating and you seem to tell a story with this submission, so nice effort here. And that was that the ending was good as we do come to the ending of this and the submission I was more impressed with how you ended it so good job there and hope to see more of your interesting and entertaining work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a great production of a flash, Here in this review I have been discussing the good and the bad, But to be honest I didnt find any bad but maybe continue on the story as it was interesting maybe in a mini form of mini flashes or something.

~X~

[Niggour HENTAI]

Good artwork

You have some good and smooth artwork here with this one, and you gave this one some funny humor, the "VOICES" could use some more effort more acting on your part but still good overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Voices could be better more realistic.

~X~

[HOT SANTA HENTAI]

um ok

So this one was very random, lots of random jpegs, and some below average artwork, but it was funny and amusing, kind of short though, other then that it was alright for a laugh or two.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I did think you over-used the images like there was tomany of them, and might have been better with some of your own drawings and art, even if it takes some time to do them would show more effort in the end. Also making it longer with more original content would be a plus.

~X~

the-starwolf responds:

hey xwayne nice to get some reviews from you on my old work, the mass using of picture was actually what i wanted to do hmmm