XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos Stick 1/5]

Very short

so this was very short and since this was short you should think about adding multiple short flashes just like this one and bunching them up together in one flash to save space and makes your movie of lots of short ones more quality like. but it was a good little stick flash needs more content and more scenes though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should think about adding multiple short flashes just like this one and bunching them up together in one flash to save space and makes your movie of lots of short ones more quality like.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #37]

Nice again

Wow you sure do have alot of these since last time I reviewed one, you have a good voice and you bring some humor to this its almost like a live radio show with different segments, I still think you should ad some "SUBTITLES" but anyways very nice episode here. So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff. So keep up the interesting flash works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some subtitles would be a plus here not needed but just a nice option.

~X~

[Retaliations]

Love that song

Really great song you have playing here, nice that you made like a music video out of it too, and also like the black and white here thats nice wouldnt mind some color though just a bit here and there while still keeping the black and white style you have

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the black and white here thats nice wouldnt mind some color though just a bit here and there while still keeping the black and white style you have, also think about adding more to this it was just kind of short.

~X~

[Chaos Stick 2/5]

Funny

these kinds are always so funny and amusing very short animation you have here and I think you could have had some better backrounds, but again it was atleast entertaining, also you have it looping you can fix that aswell, but untill next time keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more content to this make it longer, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, also add some play and replay buttons so that the user can navigate better, the stop action code will stop the loop, and is easy to emplement it can be done thru the script in the flash code bars. anyways hope that helps.

~X~

[Trick Treat or Scream!]

Very nice

I like your logo I also like the characters and the subtitles are a nice touch but the "FONT" on the subtitles should be thicker, and this toon was a tad bit short maybe you can make it longer by adding some more content, But a nice lil movie you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could be longer just seemed too short.

~X~

[Pmation: "Not So Silent Night"]

Cute movie

Now here was a cute movie I really like what you did here with the character and bringing in some "HUMOR" very funny and the animation was notbad at all, This flash was pretty good and winning some awards at that so that deserves a high five and you deserve all that and more congradulations five times fold for the achievment awards. So Not your finest Not the worst either. But I did find this animationto be somewhat intersting with some entertaining values, that gave me some interest in it, I wouldnt mind seeing this go longer and what not but have to say I was pleased with it besides a few improvment suggestions that could be adressed. And ill get to that soon enough, but for now this was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now as for improving you already have a good deal going but maybe adding some extra elements like the paper catching on fire and the character trying to put it out or the artist drawing while the character is there stuff like that.

~X~

[Real Estate Commercial]

An amusing toon

So I did not find it racist one bit infact I found this one to be entertaining even if this was a very short toon, the art was notbad the characters were decent, the voices were not half bad and you presented a funny joke aswell so in all reality this was an amusing piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer maybe take it into other scenes maybe walk thru the black families home im sure more humor can be found in scenes like that.

~X~

[A Cheerful Movie]

Cute

This was a cute little movie I like how its a ball or emoji it sort of ended short but was still an entertaining piece some decent animation to being smooth and such, a decent movie if you ask me, and I hope to see more like this in the near future, anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything here I would suggest would be make it a tad bit longer.

~X~