XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos Stick 2/5]

Funny

these kinds are always so funny and amusing very short animation you have here and I think you could have had some better backrounds, but again it was atleast entertaining, also you have it looping you can fix that aswell, but untill next time keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more content to this make it longer, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, also add some play and replay buttons so that the user can navigate better, the stop action code will stop the loop, and is easy to emplement it can be done thru the script in the flash code bars. anyways hope that helps.

~X~

[Trick Treat or Scream!]

Very nice

I like your logo I also like the characters and the subtitles are a nice touch but the "FONT" on the subtitles should be thicker, and this toon was a tad bit short maybe you can make it longer by adding some more content, But a nice lil movie you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could be longer just seemed too short.

~X~

[Pmation: "Not So Silent Night"]

Cute movie

Now here was a cute movie I really like what you did here with the character and bringing in some "HUMOR" very funny and the animation was notbad at all, This flash was pretty good and winning some awards at that so that deserves a high five and you deserve all that and more congradulations five times fold for the achievment awards. So Not your finest Not the worst either. But I did find this animationto be somewhat intersting with some entertaining values, that gave me some interest in it, I wouldnt mind seeing this go longer and what not but have to say I was pleased with it besides a few improvment suggestions that could be adressed. And ill get to that soon enough, but for now this was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now as for improving you already have a good deal going but maybe adding some extra elements like the paper catching on fire and the character trying to put it out or the artist drawing while the character is there stuff like that.

~X~

[Real Estate Commercial]

An amusing toon

So I did not find it racist one bit infact I found this one to be entertaining even if this was a very short toon, the art was notbad the characters were decent, the voices were not half bad and you presented a funny joke aswell so in all reality this was an amusing piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer maybe take it into other scenes maybe walk thru the black families home im sure more humor can be found in scenes like that.

~X~

[A Cheerful Movie]

Cute

This was a cute little movie I like how its a ball or emoji it sort of ended short but was still an entertaining piece some decent animation to being smooth and such, a decent movie if you ask me, and I hope to see more like this in the near future, anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything here I would suggest would be make it a tad bit longer.

~X~

[all for one dvd eddition]

Love this

A very cool video here love the emminem music it really played well into the "INTRO" of things, the rest of the movie was great some decent dialog, and good views and action scenes you really put some effort in this and the emmeinem was a great touch on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would have the music play on a loop with smaller volume thru-out the film.

~X~

[Old: Couple O' Shorts]

Wacky

Lol well this one was kind of a wacky flash film but thats what made newgrounds work, the "MUSIC" was pretty boomimg if you ask me and fit well this one was a tad short but you have a good style here and some decent content, it was amusing stuff, keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer with more content.

~X~

[F-I-R-E]

Lol amusing

Well this was cute and amusing it was kind of short, and the screen could be abit larger, and maybe even some subtitles but it was entertaining and always amusing with clocks a fun little old flash you have here, So not too bad here with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things here with this one one being that this could use a larger view screen not that this was bad or anything but a larger view screen allows for a much better viewing by the viewer of the flash and in turn allows you to show off the nifty details of your work. ad more content into this aswell to make it much longer stretch it out more so there a more full filling experience. just a few things that could help spruce up some things here.

~X~

[MurderLands - HistoruOne; BEETS]

Entertaining

I like this with the animation and the music and meshed them well together with a nice style here the animation was very nice wish there was more backrounds but the music really made up for that overall a nice piece indeed. So while I liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, I went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, Nice efforts here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some more detail in the backrounds.

~X~

MRat responds:

Thank you for the thoughtful and thorough review. I will be incorporating more backgrounds as the series progresses. The line art will likely become cleaner as well. I do intend to maintain the rough animatic aesthetic, though, with few inbetweens and colour-coded line art.

- Ryan