A great film
So first of all I love the art here very detailed and unique I think all this needs is some subtitles for extra measure, I found this movie to be pretty decent now ofcourse there are some things that can bemade better and much more improved those details are explained later, but do try and put some of the ideas in effect as they will only make things better, So far nice work there was no real disinterest at all, Infact I think its unanimous that this was a welldone piece of work and cant wait for more of what you bring to the portal.
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I think all this needs is some subtitles for extra measure
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