XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[xtra Blam Movie - Torched]

Nice

Yeah this would have made for a better "BLAM" clip or movie however you want to call it, but this was nice really good music and very boom and blam out there making it a fun game, would have loved to see more to this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would have liked to see you stretch this out even more with more visuals and such.

~X~

[PoringParadise]

lol

Well the cube part of this was a great introduction, and the music was nice but there was really not much other then that a fun game / movie i take it but still somewhat entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And one thing this needs much more of is more Interactivity, it has some but not enough and would be much more fun with alot more interactivty especially for a game like movie type . so just some things to think about.

~X~

[Knuckles Adventure 1]

Decent

And I think this is the last one i need to review but Have to say it was pretty impressive and while this one is a bit older I still came to enjoy this one, some decent "STORY" here and was entertaining nice graphics indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would like to see the story and animation sped up as it was a tad slow, so speed it up somewhat, and adding some "FLASHY" effects etc would also be a plus.

~X~

[Knuckles Adventure 2]

Cool

Another great film, and I love the "ZELDA" theme you have here, again I wish you could ad some voices to the characters that would be a huge plus on things, but it was actually a pretty decent film.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some voices would be a huge plus for this film.

~X~

[Knuckles Adventure 4]

Nice again

Guess I have not seen all of these but its nice to see these again first off as a small change and or improvement I would remove the button to move forward to next dialog, thats ok but you should make it so that it just flows and animates forward without having to use a button. also adding some "VOICES" for the dialog wouldnt hurt either and would improve on this greatly, nice film though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ok a small change and or improvement I would remove the button to move forward to next dialog, thats ok but you should make it so that it just flows and animates forward without having to use a button. and some voices for your characters would be a huge plus.

~X~

[Knuckles Adventure 6]

Nice Sprite work

and here is another sprite flash movie, they are good stuff not bad at all, and I like the "MUSIC" you really matched it up well, theres a lot of action in this one and you bring some good animation to the table aswell overall a nice little sprite animation you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some voices for the dialog would be a great idea.

~X~

[BOF: Armageddon Pt. 1]

Cute

Well these are always cute with the sprites and the animation always amusing and funny aswell, wish the view-screen was a tad bit larger though, I like how you have put in a sort of story here but could use more of that, overall not a bad animation but could use more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more story and a larger view screen.

~X~

[Hospital of Death Trailer]

Notbad for a first

Well this was notbad for a first but i still think it needs more plot more ideas and needs to be longer aswell, but for sure give it much more plot and story, needs some depth, but again nice work for your first one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here are a few things to reflect on, Amusing toon here these are just so short you should really think about adding these into a flash that has a lot of these short clips and with that it would create more of a quality submission, the one short clip just doesnt seem to cut it. The plot was simple and seems like it could use more depth more stuff going on more things to keep the viewer really interested in your movie, Give more info on characters, places, and when, these are something that could have more depth to them. just a few ideas there that could really make this work.

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[we need a new king]

SBC

You can never go wrong with strawberry clock lol and always nice to see a little action from bananna, these clock movies are still fun wish we had more of that in todays time, seems like its passed but anyways this was a decent flash here, i like it, so keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some sub-titles would be nice.

~X~

[ADL5]

Interesting

Well this was interesting some decent animation in here and the music was pretty fitting with the actual animation, you also have lots of variations in here aswell. a good educational flash aswell so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more use of color would be a plus.

~X~