XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Make Uncrapy Stick Movies]

Decent

And here was a decent tutorial, I like the progression of it all, and you presented it pretty well everything from building a stick figure to making a gun, Onlything I can suggest here would be make the "BUTTONS" much larger a very nice tutorial here and hope it may help others in the future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger buttons needed.

~X~

[-Bring To Life-]

Simple

A simple movie you have here the character is nice and the music is pleasent, the "BACKROUND" is just way too short, and there was not much to this but in the end it had animation and has some form of entertainments, so onlything I can suggest here is ad some backrounds eatly on too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backrounds needed.

~X~

[Lumpy in "Television".]

That was cute

Well I must say this was funny and that was pretty cute flash the character the sounds it was pretty entertaining, My only issue with this one is that it was too "SHORT" maybe you can ad a bit more content maybe a few other scenes but for the mostpart of this all it was a good lil flick.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe you can ad a bit more content maybe a few other scenes

~X~

[ZipperFish Talk Radio]

Entertaining

Well that was entertaining to say the least it was a tad short but still pretty good and funny at the same time, there was not much as far as animation but for the mostpart it was pretty good and entertaining, so nice work here, and I hope one day soon you make more of this stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sort of way to ad more animation in there would be nice.

~X~

[Pmation: "Fire Straits"]

Nice animation

And with these you always seem to have some nice animation, some nice voices in this one too, you make these so simple and entertaining pieces of fun and entertainment and thats always a great thing, so I had the pleasure of enjoying this lil animation of yours. I really liked the effort you put in this one, so awsome job indeed, and once again great job on the effort here, It was a pretty good piece and I found it delightful and randomly amusing so awsome job and keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing here as this was just perfect maybe if anything longer with more content.

~X~

[Matrix Training Day]

Well

Well animation could be smoother on these like when he is walking, this was actually a pretty strange and odd flick but I found it to be entertaining, when the music started it got even more strange but again it was entertaining enough for me so notbad at all here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More understanding of whats going on so more plot to the story.

~X~

[Concentration Camp]

Interesting story

So this was notbad. lol it was funny seeing wade as a nazzi haha lol this was an interesting toon though it didnt make much sense and was kind of slow at first but then kind of just ended also, so not sire what was going on but it was nice seeing all the strawberry clocks lol

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer give it more of a story.

~X~

[Pmation: "Fridge Over Troubled Water"]

Cute

So here was a delighted submission, some nice little happenings and was overall a great watch here, You have this viewer an instant fan. Well as always a cute animation that flows very well this one was not that long but you have some cute animations going on here and made for some funny moments I love the subtle animations and characters your other toons were a tad more longer and such. I really enjoyed this and really hope you can make much more of these kinds of submissions, This was a fun and interesting piece, and I look forward to even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A lil longer and more flashy effects.

~X~

[read the description]

Great music

So first off the music here was some of the best i heard in awhile ofcourse we can thank charlie brown for that but your animation to go with this was entertaining and different seems like you have the animation on a loop, so in that aspect of things I will suggest more content needed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I will suggest more content needed. Including more art animation and less jpeg stuff.

~X~

[the fantastic fun show 02]

Nice

Lol well I will admitt these did make me smile and gave me a few chuckles lol, Some subtitles would really make this even better its hard to understand what they are saying at times, but these are too short but again I will suggest adding a bunch of these together.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cluster all these short ones togethere.

~X~