XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fight The Fate 2]

Great scenes

This stick flash had some really great action scenes and the music seemed to fit very well, love the different camera shots really made it like a real movie, and again that music fit well, I was really impressed, it was a bit on the short side, I could see you making this longer and more story to this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more plot more story and most of all make it longer.

~X~

[Smiley MasterpieceTheater]

Nice again

And another great random flick with random stuff here and there this is another one i wont suggets any changes on because its perfect as is, the ideas in this animation are most impressive and you have an instant fan here so nice work indeed, I enjoyed every bit of this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this randome greatness.

~X~

[Smiley MP Theater 2]

Nice work here

This was actually pretty good and much better then it started out but you really pushed the limits here and made it fun and funny and great music on it, and was not too short at all, and made it a fun entertaining random movie so props to you for that. very entertaining flash you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Leave this as it is even in all of its randomness.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #15]

And another great episode

So I must say with each new episode these get more entertaining then the others and glad you are putting your sister in more she brings that flavour into this, Again I found some "AUDIO" issues here like the sound goes in and out thats something you really want to clean up. A decent flash here, pretty interesting lots of nice little details here and there, could have some more extras and maybe some fixes here and there but overall this was pretty entertaining and amusing flash, but regardless keep up the great work. and if I have suggested any ideas try them as they will help indeed, on this decent flash works. Nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the sound goes in and out thats something you really want to clean up. mainly when sergio speaks.

~X~

[Mario On Shrooms]

Nice sprites

You have some nice sprites here especially with mario, but the sprites are very clean and sharp and just look fresh looking, animation was great aswell, but anyways nice idea here you presented a good story with the idea and make it flow with some fun entertainments.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Couldnt fine anything here but if I was to make any chnges just add more crazy stuff while hes in that shroom state like colors and rainbows and dreams.

~X~

[***SCHOOL SUCKS?***]

Nice

So this was notbad, the sound quality was a little low so one of two different things you can do is better sound quality or some subtites, also it was a bit short try and extend it with more content including some color, its a good little animation though and I have enjoyed it pretty much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the sound quality was a little low so one of two different things you can do is better sound quality or some subtites, also it was a bit short try and extend it with more content including some color

~X~

[green (no sound)]

Amusing

Well this was amusing for sure, I like the "CHARACTER" and the very limited animation, but there was really not much here, and those are things you should really think about expanding on such as making this longer with much more content ad more stuff here and there and extend this longer it will be better for ebveryone.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this one would be better for everyone if you took a little time and extended it longer more visuals, more content more stuff to see and just longer overal.

~X~

[Pmation: "Gold Fashioned"]

Funny

Well these are funny, they kind of remind me of old style toons with no real dialog but more visual effects and all and thats a good thing, love the little sounds and all on these also very fun yet short animations, you should think about having them run off the paper onto the desk at times it would be kind of interesting, and entertaining ofcourse. And so here we come to the end of the review, dont want to drag the review on forever but in a nutshell I found this flash entertaining and somewhat amusing, could use a few fixes here and there as explained below, keep up with the style you got going its good, and be more creative and more random. you can never go wrong with beingtoo random, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Run off the paper and into desks and tables and stuff that would be a cool idea.

~X~

[The Last Saiyan Preview]

Interesting

So this one had an interesting story kind of ran short though but still found it to be pretty good you have a nice style of animation and the music plays pretty big part in this but this animation just runs too short, but regardless it was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer ad to the story more scenes more plot.

~X~