XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pmation: "Gold Fashioned"]

Funny

Well these are funny, they kind of remind me of old style toons with no real dialog but more visual effects and all and thats a good thing, love the little sounds and all on these also very fun yet short animations, you should think about having them run off the paper onto the desk at times it would be kind of interesting, and entertaining ofcourse. And so here we come to the end of the review, dont want to drag the review on forever but in a nutshell I found this flash entertaining and somewhat amusing, could use a few fixes here and there as explained below, keep up with the style you got going its good, and be more creative and more random. you can never go wrong with beingtoo random, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Run off the paper and into desks and tables and stuff that would be a cool idea.

~X~

[The Last Saiyan Preview]

Interesting

So this one had an interesting story kind of ran short though but still found it to be pretty good you have a nice style of animation and the music plays pretty big part in this but this animation just runs too short, but regardless it was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer ad to the story more scenes more plot.

~X~

[i have idea part 1]

Entertaining

That voice never gets old, its almost like the clocks took it over, but anyways this is notbad and its a good start to a story here, this flick "LOOPS" so you may want to ad a stop-action code to stop the looping but besides that it was pretty entertaining. anyways keep up the decent animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code to stop the looping.

~X~

[Untampered the movie]

Interesting

So there was not much difference in this one vs the other one but seems all the same infact, didnt really notice much changes at all but again some facial expressions would be much better on the stick characters kind of like real characters just give it a try.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Favial expressions.

~X~

[Untampered: ReWorked]

Nice

Well this was pretty good, you have a nice story to go along with this and thats what I liked about it, the heavy metal music was a big plus too if you ask me it made the action a bit better, Im ok with "STICK" characters but I think you should really think about adding some facial experssions like mouth and nose etc

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should really think about adding some facial experssions like mouth and nose etc

~X~

[Pmation: "All Ears"]

Cute again

Another great animation with some nice color as always, what I would love to see is some type of dialog in some of these and give them more character to them, but they are amusing and pretty funny stuff, so anyways nice work here keep at it and let it shine. I was most amazed with all the little stuff this flash had to offer, it was alot of little things that really made me enjoy this flash, so a good effort put fourth and was pretty good i thought keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More voice dialog would be great

~X~

[Make Uncrapy Stick Movies]

Decent

And here was a decent tutorial, I like the progression of it all, and you presented it pretty well everything from building a stick figure to making a gun, Onlything I can suggest here would be make the "BUTTONS" much larger a very nice tutorial here and hope it may help others in the future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger buttons needed.

~X~

[-Bring To Life-]

Simple

A simple movie you have here the character is nice and the music is pleasent, the "BACKROUND" is just way too short, and there was not much to this but in the end it had animation and has some form of entertainments, so onlything I can suggest here is ad some backrounds eatly on too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backrounds needed.

~X~

[Lumpy in "Television".]

That was cute

Well I must say this was funny and that was pretty cute flash the character the sounds it was pretty entertaining, My only issue with this one is that it was too "SHORT" maybe you can ad a bit more content maybe a few other scenes but for the mostpart of this all it was a good lil flick.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe you can ad a bit more content maybe a few other scenes

~X~

[ZipperFish Talk Radio]

Entertaining

Well that was entertaining to say the least it was a tad short but still pretty good and funny at the same time, there was not much as far as animation but for the mostpart it was pretty good and entertaining, so nice work here, and I hope one day soon you make more of this stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sort of way to ad more animation in there would be nice.

~X~