XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[First Men On The Moon]

Entertaining

Haha I got a good laugh out of this one, so nice job on that aspect of things you really know how to make good toons maybe adding some subtitles would be a plus on the film overall it was great and men on the moon good idea lol anyways keep up the good work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
subtitles would be nice

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[Serpent City]

Zombies

So this was pretty cool, the zombies theme is always a good one, the sound quality seemed a little low but otherwise it was fine, So I would say that the animation was notbad and this was a decent submission. I really look forward to seeing more stuff like this untill then keep working on great stuff, So a lot like some wine tasting event thats what this reminds me of, you have brought all the right elements in this movie type and with lots of different flavor and taste and thats what stood out on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the sound quality seemed a little low but otherwise it was fine

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DampOwl responds:

I really appreciate the constructive feedback. Thanks for watching, and taking the time to review!

[I Wanna Bury Star Destroyers]

Haha nice

So this was cool I like the starwars theme here wouldnt mind some subtitles to go along with this, you have raised the bar dramatically with everything that has been going on in this Movie entry, There could be some better stuff added as some extra tid bits, So here you have delivered some unmatched creativity and qaulity with this one here some other simular submissions do simular stuff but here you have gone ahead and added alot of new twists and ideas.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
wouldnt mind some subtitles to go along with this

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[Please]

Notbad

Well I will admit these are cute just too short, One thing I have found that vocals are great in any flash but subtitles along with those vocals make it a much better experience, So this is something you should think about adding, and it would be a nice option and make your flash abit more quality based. maybe even adding a few short ones to make it like a movie or at least part of one overall I liked it and these are cute.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Mentioned a few things but overall these are cute.

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[The Office Jim vs Roy]

The office

The office is always a fun show glad to see you have something with it, Add some subtitles, not saying its hard to understand but for some it can be, so adding some subtitles would help and just make some subtitles, so that viewers have the option of viewing it with understanding better but its always a nice feature to have, other then that you have a nice idea and hope you make more.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned above some subtitles would be nice.

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[My Best Friend Naruto]

Very good animation

So with this one I really like the character art voices are decent too some subtitles would be one idea for this animation, So with all that said this was pretty decent allthough it could use more stuff and such also suggested below, it was still pretty good, Another well recieved entry that brings alot to the table, The visuals all seem to come into place with something entertaining at every corner here in this flick of a movie, You have uniquely made a piece that is not just mesmerizing but you bring some good style and flair about.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some subtitles would be one idea for this animation

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[Avocado Man]

Nice work

so this was a nice animation great job on voices of characters especially matts, I think some subtitles would go along way with this one, Stated a few ideas here and there some of them above and some more tips added below, These tips should help to make it somewhat better if not maybe they will give you some ideas, So while you can make anything great you can go even farther with a few twists and turns it was both delighting and luscious a first rate experience, And I for one am glad I had a chance to see and review this fine film of yours.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think some subtitles would go along way with this one

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[Edelgard's Bondage Skit]

Notbad

So notbad its a good steamy scene kind of short would be nice if it had more scenes maybe even some story to go along with it, but for what it was very steamy nice visuals and good artwork so really nice job all the way around on this one keep at it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned.

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Aster-Effect responds:

thank you very much, this work was actually from november ago actually, still experimenting on something ^^;

but yeah i got your point and idea :)

and thank you very much by the way :3

[Shaq-I-Aq in the Baby-Burger Burgudgeon!]

Haha nice

Well you gotta love some shaq the sound was a bit hard to hear at times not sure if it was on my end but maybe its just shaq lol, some subtitles would be nice with this one, you have some funny toons and this was one of the funnier ones so nice job here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as mentioned some subtitles would be nice

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[Mugman's Wish (2014)]

Very nice

So this was nice the animation is good very colorfull too the little character was very entertaining lol, not much else to say other then make more of these, they are pretty funny and could go well as a long running series of sorts anyways keep up the good work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Nothing needs changing

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