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[Habbo Hotel Dress Up]

Its a nifty game

Like i said its a nifty game and you picked a good "THEME" with the Habbo. never played that game but have seen it before so that was pretty cool, but one thing i have noticed is that on all the 3 differant characters alot of the clothing and props were all too much of the same, just duplicated colors adn such, thats ok but you want to try and make it more your own style with more random and unique styles, andanother thing is this needs some backrounds and even more "ITEMS" and since we are on the topic a larger creation screen would be great, as it would allow for a much bigger view and more creation, aswell room for much more items, This was a good game, lots of stuff here and some great music the music was pretty nifty, I really enjoyed this flash and all that you have presented here, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below i have left a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first of all good Flash, could use a few fixes and changes for better improvment ofcourse, i have suggested a few ideas to help and hope you have the time to put some of them in as it will only improve on your good idea already. One thing i noticed, alot of the clothing and props were all too much of the same, just duplicated colors adn such, thats ok but you want to try and make it more your own style with more random and unique styles, and as mentioned above, a larger creation screen would be great, as it would allow for a much bigger view and more creation, aswell room for much more items,

Aprime responds:

Cheers for the review. I read it all. It was really helpful.
Thanks for taking your time out to review this game in such depth

[Mad Dress Up]

Decent

Nice dress-up game here especially from an old regular, and i must say this one had some very good "EFFORT" the music was fitting, and its the first dress-up game with a scene selector from the early days so nice efforts there, all the options with guns and dress up props was pretty good, you had a good amount of variaty and nice detail on them aswell, so once again nice job there, Now you went the extra mile to have some "ACTION" stuff going on like a punch and so on, very nice indeed, so as for improving tips and points, I believe you covered everything so its as good as it gets, and nice job on the differant music selection aswell, the whole game was well rounded and had everything you could ask for in a dress up game and even more so nice job and nioce efforts on this fantastic game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you had alot of stuff from variaty of items, to scenes and even good music choices, the area that could have used more stuff would have to be, more Action-stuff, meaning more stuff and unique action buttons, you only had the 4.

toxicbomb responds:

Woo hoo, its XwaynecoltX! I appreciate the time you put into your reviews, man! Thank you!

[Madotsuki's Dream Dock]

Fun and dark

I will start off this review on saying that this was an interesting flash game here, it has itsmomemnts nad can be better but for what it is, i must say that it was alright and pretty amusing, i like some of the stuff you pulledout on this giving it an interesting look, so a nice feel all around with this one good effort and i was pretty impressed with most things on this. Like i said the "VISUALS" were great and had a good look about it all and such, I love the ending here aswell, you really pushed for a "DARK" feel here and that made it for a good flash entry here so i was pretty impressed with this submission and hope to see more work from you soon aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would like to see more of the little details added along with more effects popping up but also go with the dark touch even more then you already have.

Pienkaito responds:

Thanks for the very helpful review. I'll keep that in mind.

[IHOP Waitress Soundboard]

Funny board

Ok so for starters this was notbad, the board itself is ok kinda entertaining, i love hopw you have alot of differant sounds with this one and such, I also like how you made this all into like a menu of sorts and the voice was real seems like it, Now the one thing about alot of these types of sound boards is they are just the sounds but you should add some clip with each sound, that would really make it more interesting for the viewer of the board. The soundboard was pretty good and does show some good effort on your part here, the text as buttons could be better aswell, maybe more of a box or circle would make it click over better and look better, but anyways nice job its a good game i actually did like this one, anyways untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first of all good game, could use a few fixes and changes for better improvment ofcourse, i have suggested a few ideas to help and hope you have the time to put some of them in as it will only improve on your good idea already, Now the one thing about alot of these types of sound boards is they are just the sounds but you should add some clip with each sound, that would really make it more interesting for the viewer of the board. You may want to work on your buttons more too, the textonly style buttons are kind of hard at times and dont click over as good as they cn be.

~~OVERALL~~
And overall this was a good game i had fun reviewing it, there was actuallysome fun sounds with this one, and you showed some nice effort, keep up the good work.

JuneLinMilliam responds:

After I took a look at your newgrounds it is like a honor to get a review from you lol. I started making soundboards in 2008 and what I like to do is try to make them not look the same as you can see by the SSFIV soundboards I did. If you put your mouse over the text and move it near the end you will see that it is made with a box around it but you just can not see it. I am open to better ideas when I make these and will try to use new things when I learn them. Thank you very much for the review!

[Olympic Shooting Practice]

Kinda like duck hunt

So i must say this one did took awhile to load but was still good, The file was abit larger but i still found this flash to be pretty entertaining and keeps me interested, and the music alone was very impressive kept it interesting aswell, The game was pretty simple kind of like duck hunt but thats what i liked about it, the game was fast paced right away so maybe that was my downfall, or maybe it could be a lsower build up from easy to hard but from the mostpart of this, this was pretty good and i found it fun and entertaining game, veryamusing, as for improving maybe slower build up of harder levels, anyways nice job here i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off you could have a slow build up of harder levels,

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game kind of like duck hunt, i look forward to more like this, keep up the fun gamework.

Psionic3D responds:

Thanks for checking it out and taking the time to respond!

[Switch - Reaction Game]

Fun and addictive

~~REVIEW~~
wow i played the game and son it was wow this is fun but had to keep up speed, i did get too 75 first time so that was neat, this was a cool little game because it was differant and something new made from something basic so that was cool, you should possibly make the dots more colorful or change up color here and there, maybe even have the backround change color, that would also be something distracting, anyways the game is really fun and kind of addictive, i really enjoyed it, nice job indeed. on a last note, why not even make a larger "VIEW-SCREEN" but other then that this was a pretty fun and amazing game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
fun game very fast paced, you should possibly make the dots more colorful or change up color here and there, some other color effects like in backround aswell as making the view screen larger.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun addictive and fast paced game.

Cogwirrel responds:

Glad you enjoyed it!

If you're looking for more colour, you might like to try "<Themes>", specifically the random theme which makes things much more colourful!

[Uncharted: The Flash]

Funny

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm so this was pretty interesting, as it starts out with some pretty good music and you really had me with the idea, so i guess on those aspects of things you got me on the jokes and all, then it goes into the end with the spinning face and all, and with that i did get a laugh from it, so that part was pretty amusing, and again you got me and im s\assumming others aswell, so in the end it was funny and amusing, aswell as some decent music, so how can this be improved, as a suggestion maybe when the spinning face comes up you can have some wacky music maybe the trciky the clown theme song or something just an idea though, so it was an ok flash not much to the game part of it but i did get a chuckle from it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a more amusing song at the end, for more of the humor part of it, but besides that it was good for the joke presented.

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining idea and the joke gets across, so i had fun with it as will others, good luck on anythingelse you have planned for us.

Lare responds:

So it was a perfetc flash, but you don't like the trololo song? And that's why I get 6? lern2review

[In Utero]

Fun and entertaining game.

~~REVIEW~~
the game is pretty intense very hard to play at times and for some of the medals, where you gotta play through without shooting that was abit much, so maybe add some easier possible medals if you can, also its like water so the current of it pulls you in sometimes, you shouldnt make it as hard as it is in the first level, and the boss was a whole nother story, there should be protection areas while fighting the boss, somehow, but with all the troubles it was a pretty good put together game and i had fun with it even if i could only get 1 level, so with all that, i enjoyed it, had some decent graphics and ok gameplay, good game you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make some easy medal options, tone the first level down just a tad, and make the guy have abit more survivability

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game abit hard but still entertaining

FetusFulp responds:

what fun are medals if they aren't an obnoxious challenge to get? haha.

the first level, as you put it, is actually the only level. i'm a derp with game programming and couldn't really finangle it all together so this is what it is. there's a kind of unintended protection area with the boss, at least with the snail things. there's a YouTube video showing it, but it's on the bottom of the screen fairly close to the boss himself. anyway it's been nearly three years so it's whatever by now i'm sure.

i've always enjoyed reading your reviews and it's nice to see one from you. thanks for the critique.

[Touch The Core2]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
ok so another fun game with this one it was another big file but still worth the weight as it was a pretty fun game, the levels start out easy but get interesting after that, I remember playing the first one abit, and still love that you keep the menu pages designed with detail, so good focus on the detail of the layout and the games within, now the game is fun but gets harder now thats expected, but other then that i thought it was pretty interesting, As some sorta improvment maybe make the screensize somewhat larger maybe that way you can add more detail in the game part of it that way, so with that said and commented on good job all around there was a few issues here and there but it was minimal, other then all that i really liked what you came up with, hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe a larger view screen if even that.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game even better then the last, i enjoyed it.

fortunacus responds:

thanks for the review, the sequel will be in larger screen, also use phisic engine, and develop in html5,coming soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Stamper's Quest For Fags]

Simplisticly fun

~~REVIEW~~
ok first off nice to see you still making great stuff, this game was pretty neat, always was a fan of your work even before newgrounds when you had that animated gif site, but anyways the game was fun, it was moreonthe simple side of things but i do like how you balanced that out with the differant difficulty levels, that was something that made it fun, the simplistic of the game was ok graphics was notbad and it was pretty fun if you ask me, the anoying sound he made when running into a cactus was err you know, so how can this game be improved, well i suppose one idea might be to have differant backrounds as differant levels maybe he runs across the world or something to find cigs and such, so anyways that was about all i saw, other then that you have a simple yet fun game here,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i suggested an idea of newer and differant backrounds but just an idea.

~~OVERALL~~
fun game simple, but still entertaining with the medals and such

Kevin responds:

I had a gif site? Since when? :P

You're the best reviewer, BTW.