XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snakebite]

Fun and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Fun game, here the {GRAPHICS} could be touched up and some of the characters limbs could have more smoother animation like when they are walking you could have more animation with joints aswell, I love that you put medals into this makes it much more fun to play, and seems like its an easy game not hard at all, thats good for me hehe, but anyways, The game is fun and reminds me alot of the old pico game, the art detail is pretty good i thought, like doors and shades here and there, some other areas not that important but would show more of a detailed world, like the {GRASS} it was just green maybe some wavy grass for more of an effect, just an idea though, anyways great game love the addition of medals aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
improved animation, on how they walk and stuff, some other detail effects here and there wouldnt hurt, like i mentioned above with the grass, that was just an example of areas that could be somewhat detailed abit better.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game by yoink

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YoinK responds:

if it is such an easy game... then how come you didn't beat the first of three boss fights? hmmm?

[Asterozorb]

Differant but kinda fun

~~REVIEW~~
Now this game is actually pretty good, and its differant from the normal games that do come through the portal and stuff, i like the way you have it with a pully and rotating system i have to honestly say i never seen that, so it makes it original that way, the only major issue i had was that the game does not have much of a {REPLAY-VALUE} meaning its fun the first time around but i think you need more to it, the start of the game was somewhat {SLOW} so you have to figure out a way to improve on that, like adding some extra bonus or even opening up some mini game option like after somany points or such, dont get me wrong i really enjoyed the game, and props to you on the {HOW TO PLAY} it seemed to be abit long but still explained everything very well, so nice job there, as that all being said the only thing that can be improved is making it more entertaining for the viewer speed up the astroids would be another option. anyways great game you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some other entertaining value like extra bonus, or even an mini game of some sort after so much points, i do think it needs to be sped up at the start though, kinda slow there

~~OVERALL~~
Fun astroid game there

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CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the solid and fair review :)

[BlastOff Bunnies]

Awsome bunny game

~~REVIEW~~
Really fun game here, the shooting of bunnies is fun as hell, I got the first three medals after a few tries so it was not so bad, the gameplay is very fun and has lots of replay value which is always a plus for this site, but one thing i did notice, that while shooting and hitting bunnies, it seems to {LAG} at times, The Graphics are smooth and fresh, and make it a really cute game, Now running out of bunnies is sad, would love more ways to gain more bunnies i know there was that one bonus in the sky but would still love more options, but anyways really fun game here and would love for you to improve on this, anyways awsome game. Hope it can only get better from here on out and look forward to any new stuff comming our way anyways once again awsome job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A little lag issue when hitting bunnies, needs more bonus for gaining lives and some new shooting in air options would be nice aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game here

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Duderuud responds:

Thanks! I'll keep your feedback in mind!

[Uniwar Level 2]

Lots of action

~~REVIEW~~
Lots of action in this one, i really like how you put some decent action that really made it come tjrough alolt, and lots to see i really liked that, the graphics were ok but seemed fitting for when it was made, but anyways good work here, hope to see more of your work soon but as for this one you did a pretty good job. keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make a land version like when you get out of the ship or something that might be something neat

~~OVERALL~~
lots of action in this one

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[Full Tutorial of Sounds]

Decent tutorial

~~REVIEW~~
Another interesting Tutorial, these are always fun to see, im sure there are ways to make these somewhat better, somehow, but for the mostpart they are pretty basic, i do like the "EFFORT" in putting this together, the visuals were ok, and do what its asked, which is to show the viewers about sound and how to use it and such, it would have been nice to see some fancyness about it maybe some backround music, or even a nifty sound when clicking the "NEXT" button, but like i said it is just a tutorial and such, i would even suggest making a more bigger tutorial not just of sounds but other stuff too, it would probably help more users that was since some users may already know how to do sound, but they might find something they dont, just something to think about when making these, anyways nice job, it was alright

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few suggestions were made about some fancyness about it all so it doesnt seem like every other tutorial, like some sounds, and or music, also making a larger tutorial with more variaty of flash features, would also be a nice touch, and an overall better presentation.

~~OVERALL~~
A sound tutorial

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MCarsten responds:

Thanks! Yeah, I could do somethings more on it, but I need to think something more than sounds to show to people, your suggestions are really helpful! Thanks for your nice review!

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SpyS.

[Avoidance 4: Classic]

Fresh, simple and, fun

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off i would like to say that the menu screen was prettty awsome with lots of color shapes and design it caught my attention so props to the artist, even the animation in the backround was neat, an idea might to have those "ORBS" spinning or bouncing off the walls or something just an idea though, and as for the "MUSIC" that was pretty awsome aswell, really catchy and amusing seems very fitting for the flash, the one thing that bothered me throughout this was that the filesize was just a tad big, not an issue for my machine but im sure large files like this do give other users a more slower loading time, just something to think about when making these kinda large files, now this is a pretty simple and fun game so instructions arnt really needed, i would suggest, adding some just because its a nice feature to have i did find myself when first playing this making the "SQUARE" run into the orb lol at first the red then the green lol, but like i said not needed but might be nice to have, But i do have to say that the "CODING" on this seemed pretty good, no gliches at all and ran pretty smooth so i did like this, and had lots of fun on top of that, so nice game here, fresh and fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Possibly add an "INSTRUCTION" section, not really needed but it would be a nice liitle feature,

~~OVERALL~~
A fun and fresh game, very simple but still fun

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TheSongSalad responds:

Thanks for the review man, it's really appreciated.

[Newgrounds Medals]

Its decent

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so thought i would see what this was all about, my first points are that its a pretty big "FILE" size that might be something to work on, now im thinking you packed alot of stuff in thats why for the large file size, but anyways, ok so, as i look through all the options, they are notbad, i thought you could have used abit more, but seems like you have put fourth alot of work with this so yes there is some good effort used, and the design of it seems awsome, maybe its abit too "CRAMPED" though, spreading stuff out more might help on this though, i like alot of the features like the scrolling of all the nedals, and info on how to imput medals and so on, so this was some good bit of info on medals which was probably needed and very usefull, so props to you on a good flash here, i enjoyed it, now to improve on this, not sure, but like i said before everything looks abit cramped, and could be spreadout abit more, just an idea thouogh, i would like to see other versions maybe something thats not so graphics enhanced, its a good flash though, so keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things like, not so cramped style, and maybe even some other version thats not so graphics enhanced, just a few thoughts thoough

~~OVERALL~~
good info, almost like a tutorial

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EventHorizon responds:

you're right about "file size" also because I completely forgot to compress this flash, I am glad you liked it and thank you for your advice and your vote!

[Pyroscape 2]

another fun game here

~~REVIEW~~
Aww ok so i saw this one earlie and finally have a chance to review it, but anyways the Flash starts off pretty good, and im still enjoying the mixture of real people and the mix in there of art and animation, once again it gives it something unique as its not always seen, also nice job on adding the "SKIP" button that was pretty neat, one thing i think this could use, and i may or may not have mentioned this in past movies/games of yours, but it could possibly use some "SUBTITLES" not that it was bad sounding or anything just seems like a nice feature to have, gives the game abit more too it, Now there is an old trick to these types of games in "FLASH" it basicly allows the user playing the game to cheat, ill mention it later as to not spoil it for other viewers, but its a certain key, there is a way to lock this option up so users dont have that option to cheat in the game, but anyways i like the buttons alot better then in other games, But i must say this was a nifty little game you all have here, its fun and has somewhat of an entertaining value, it would be nice to ad some other fun features maybe some sorta "MINI-GAME" option or something for like bonus. anyways great game keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentions, a mini game would be nice, and also try and lock the "TAB" key in the action-scripting so people cant just cheat through it fast, other then that it was a fun game

~~OVERALL~~
So overall a fun game in the series, could use some fixes, and extra stuff for a more entertaining value of the game

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Fro responds:

Dude the whole game was like 5 mini games lol

[Kees' Adventure: TLC]

Fresh and simple game

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off, you do have a cute little game here, i like how this game starts off with some good fonts a in the title, and just some overall good graphics, simple yet refreshing with the graphics, The game is actually a pretty cute and layed back game, funny stuff to see, and once again nice job on the fresh and simple graphics, the game at times felt glichy, like i didnt like not seeing the "CURSUR" at times, i much rather being able to click on buttons such as the start button and other times it happened, the game play was also simple which i liked you didnt have us doing lots of crazy things like some games do but just had a few good things, and just let it play off like that, now i would suggest to make it so i can click on buttons with cursur but that might just be my own personal opinion and choice, but you did have a cute game here and hope to see more soon.anyways great game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the cursur be shown throughout the entire flash when doing stuff, could have just been the onetime i played but seemed to paus up sometimes not the cursur moving off the viewscreen but just pausing to me i think its the same issue of the no cursur at times just a thought.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun cute and fresh game, i had fun with this

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kcnh responds:

Thank you for your review, I'll be sure to look into click menus for the next game.

[diogoshx flash tutorial]

A decent tutorial

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm a decent tutorial here, its rather simple, kinda too simple but it does show the basics and you presented the tutorial in a simpple way in which may help newer people learning flash, i was not fond of the buttons though, maybe give some sleeker design of buttons or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some sleeker buttons maybe some borders/frames to give it a more fresh look to it as i thought it was sorta on the simple side

~~OVERALL~~
nice tutorial here

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diogoshx responds:

oO

thank you very much!

glad you like

remeber that was my 1º tutorial...

i am Learning to improve with the reviews! :D