XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[#Escape: The Waiting Room]

A fun game

Now here was something fun and different glad i got a chance to play around with this. This game was fun and actually reminded me of an old nes game I played as a kid, the music was pleasent and the clicking here and there was fun overall this was notbad at all, I liked what this had offered, fun medals aswell. and so that brings an end to this review the game was good it had some entertaining value some interest was high on this one, and basicly kept me focused on everything that was going on and i look forward to seeing more soon. you made this Tastefully and you did it with Confident efforts, so that was really good and i was glad i had a chance to see this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some improved graphics like smoother details on shades and such but other then that it was notbad at all, really came to enjoy this game.

~X~

Aprime responds:

Ooooooo, okay. Nice review. So many positives, just only graphics to improve, but then only 3/5 stars aka 6/10. Oooh well. Thanks for the review :)

[Animated Dress Up Game]

Another cool dress-up game you have here.

Now as i get into this game entry and review alot of things come to mind, some ill suggest some thoughts and ideas later in the review, but i must say that i was pretty impressed with what you did have and some effort does show in this and its the effort you put into it inwich i liked, So it does have potential to be even better in the future with updates and such. Alright so not a bad game here for being a dress up and all, the "SIZE" was notbad eiether all though it was slightly larger then most but i guess that all depends on the game, i think you have done a superb job though, I must say i was pretty impressed with this piece as you have added some interesting stuff that make it all complete, i really like the click and add on prop that was nice, you added alot of stuff, but maybe adding some more creative items and such would be a plus. anyways good game you have here. SO you have a Good game here, It was a pretty good fun and i found it delightful and randomly amusing, You do have an idea oh how to make some decent games, I have also suggested some improvment ideas below. but do try and put some of the ideas in effect as they will only make things better, But overall this was a fun game, and you seem to have it down.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see you make more of this, you ahve most of the style doen and the idea really comes across as a great game, Perhaps some advice inwich you can Utilise Ideas and fearures more better, it didnt really lack much but i have an idea or two here that may or may not help, but for the most of this, it was alright. Alright not a bad game, lots to see and do with this one, the one thing it could do with more of is some more creative items, random props and such, just some things to think about, other then that this was notbad.

enciel responds:

thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) will try my best to improve on my next submissions as well :D

[Alien Creator]

Nice style

Well well here was something good from the portal, and while it does seem to need some improvments and a few suggestive ideas, I will elaborate more on that in the review if it needs any help at all, as it was a pretty good start to a flash entry, so i do look forward to what else you can do with this, but lets move along to this interesting flash works you do have here. I like the style of game here while it is a dress-up you gave it alot of elements that people usually miss, so that was a plus, you gave this game life with good "CREATIVITY" i like all the variaty in planets, allthough in each planet there should be more props and clothing and stuff, more random stuff aswell, So my take on this game you did well, could use more variaty of items but was a decent and fun game. This game was alright, not perfect but does have some decent entertainment to it and i played it a few times so it also brings in some re-play value and thats something you dont get alot of in these types of game, So You a have a decent flash here, but there there is still some room for improvments even a few little things here and there, but in the end it can only help you and make your flash much better and again in the end more enjoyble for all who see it such as myself. so hope others enjoy it aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can improve on this, So use some of these ideas, even as basic as some may be but in the end your flash will be much better for it. So i got alot of good from this flash it was amazing actually, But also So think about some of the ideas suggested in the review. But anyways hope to see some more work from you, and hope to see some updates aswell, as this game was really fun and would love to see it continue on. more items is needed ofcourse, so other then that this was actually notbad.

blowtoons responds:

Thanks a lot XwaynecoltX! great review!

[car riding]

Kinda fun

I wont start this review off with being Negitive, because this was more Spectacular then anything else, It was not outstanding but is capable of being just that, as well as being the best it can be, but its a decent flash and i can see this going even farther, so you do have a decent presentation and great idea here i hope you can improve on this. This was actually a kind of fun game, the music could be more clear and sharper and probably have more choices in the music cycle, but the game was actually kinda fun. this is one of those little games that probably could use some medals to it, but overall a little fun game. I was glad to have seen and even review this piece as it was highly entertaining and you gave it much effort, Even with the right Attitude and thats what you need to make something nifty like this, so props to you on that, i wouldnt mind seeing more into this and even more effort but for the most of this it was pretty good stuff. So hope this helps good luck I really liked the flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This Flash could be Pollished up a bit, and maybe use a few Tweaks here and there, ultimately This will be a better flash game with some improvments , so checkout the advice and tips i have suggested. And again ultimately will allow you to have more viewers to your flash as well. And bring a bit more quality to your flash. So try some of the ideas out. ADD MEDALS this will increase the worth and popularity of this game. you can also add a cycle of different music or adding music choices at the click of the user to the player, also abit more quality should go into the music and sound.

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you for the review and advice. Your comment was really worth reading. I am thinking about making a point and click game. I would love to learn how to add medals to a game. It would be worth the challenge. I am glad you kinda enjoyed this game and I enjoyed your useful comment.

[[LL] - Dress Up Wine.]

Something differant

This was someting differant for sure, and you gave it some appeal, and i was pretty entertained with what you do have here, still could use some fixes and clean ups here and there, but for the most part of it its pretty amusing and entertaining as said. Hmmm ok so this was a differant idea of a dress-up game never would have expected to dress up wine, but you had it more like dressing up a "CHARACTER" and not really the wine, maybe to improve on your idea you could keep the idea of dressing up the wine bottle, but go more with that with fancy labels, and logos maybe some corks some shampain glasses, and so on, but anyways not to lose track you do have a good idea here nice concept but the character part should probably be removed, more props and items are needed though. The hardest part of reviewing stuff is that it has to come to an end and since i really enjoyed this piece, i will have to end it soon, but before i do i just wanted to say you have the effort you have the skill and you have the idea, but wouldnt mind seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Theres always something new and differant with new ideas, i think some new ideas could be tossed around, and while i may not have the best i have suggested something that may help so i do hope you use some of my advuice and ideas, or just a few of the tips, The thing about these types of games is that you have to allow for creativity so with the more random and differant types of items the better especially whena dding unique random and even some animated items aswell, this allows for more of that creative style builds. maybe to improve on your idea you could keep the idea of dressing up the wine bottle, but go more with that with fancy labels, and logos maybe some corks some shampain glasses, and so on

Madanimation responds:

Thanks for the write up, but I literally don't care enough to improve on anything these days.
I'd forgotten I even made this thing.

[NG Advent Calendar 2012]

This one was pretty interesting

I have reviewed somany of these kinds of games from the worst to some average ones to the best ones out there, And this entry would be right up there, its not perfect but its notbad either, its pretty fun aswell as some good fun comes with this one. So this one was pretty interesting, and its festive so thats notbad, i didnt come along till late in the dates so i guess i missed some medals :( but it was still a fun little game, it was very artistic with all the art sizes and such, but overall this was a good game and good easy medals aswell. With this entry you put up some smiles on the viewers, and your concept of this game really shines good, and so with that said just keep making these awsome game types it brings us all fun, pleasure, and good entertainment.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have sprayed the most interestung stuff through-out this flash, mostly good, I guess there is a few things you could do to make it better, so here are options and ideas. Maybe after its all said and done you can make it so people can go back and achieve some of those older medals somehow.

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

Please don't review my stuff anymore, Wayne, cos you never say anything of value.

Take for example this review: "There is a few things you could do to make it better" ... but then you say absolutely nothing about how it could be improved.

[The Interview Codex]

Good content

OK so here is a fun game it was entertaining and this was something i could recomend to others since i enjoyed it myself, its a good start to the game and as you get into it, its pretty interesting. Well i must say this one was pretty interesting i like the idea of this, and i must also say that the music itself was pretty interesting and seemed to work well and was very smooth for the flash content, there was alot of content in this i especially like the one named "XwaynecoltX" hehe but really this was a good piece, and the effects and visuals was a nifty touch, i wouldnt mind some color in it, maybe some flashy color and such, now as for the medals they were cool but the 50 and 100 visits seems like it should be something more unique instead of just a repetitive. but overall this was a fun game and i enjoyed it. And so as i end here in this review i hope to see more of your work as this one was a pleasent one, not perfect but had a nice touch to it, so keep up the good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here i may have some advice here but try and use some suggestions below and i hope that they may help in any improvment options, but here is what i came up with in my experience of your entry. So my advice on this would be to add more medals, and also adding more unique ones and not so much the repetitive ones, also mentioned about adding some more color to the layout and such but other then that this was actually alright.

deathink responds:

The "XwaynecoltX" interview is the best :D
And I will definitely add some more unique medals soon.

[Space Pizza Defense]

Notbad

Ok this was notbad, it is kinda interesting you took a different kind of direction with this one and it shows some nifty effort in something different, i like it for sure and plan to checkout more of your stuff. Ok so as i did get more into the game i thought it was fun and even silly and the medls were not all that hard wich made it even more fun, nice game though. This was kind of a simplistic idea and concept but i think thats what made it fun, and there are some games on here that i dont like but this was not one of them, But as mentioned you have shown that you can make something nifty from such a simple idea and thats a big plus in my book.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There is alot of things that make this fun, Now ofcourse there are a few bad and evengood points aswell, I will go ahaead and do my part and suggest a few areas that could make some small improvments on this one. Now as i think about i there are not too muchbad pints but some things you could make better maybe adding a larger view screen, but it was fun regardless.

yukonmakesgames responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it! I was going to make the game's screen larger, but it didn't really work out. The sprites didn't look to great due to how often objects rotate.