XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[RS Character Designer 3.0]

A decent game here

Ok so this was a decent game here, things seemed too "CLUTTERD" though and could use abit more spreading out and i like all the buttons and stuff but things seems still cluttered like there was just too much stuff to see, you may also want to make the "BUTTONS" look better aswell more smoother and more flashy looking, You a hve a decent flash here, but there there is still some room for improvments even a few little things here and there, but in the end it can only help you and make your flash much better and again in the end more enjoyble for all who see it such as myself. i did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i will start off this part with a few ideas and suggestions that could make it much better and overall bringing more viewers too seeing your content. I think i would like to start off with some improvment on everything being too cluttered you should spread that out abit theres just too much going on as in buttons and such, Make a sleeker looking button something flashy and fancy, maybe something that has some animation as you hover over it aswell. something that looks nice and has appeal, the better your flash looks the more the fans will enjoy it. but anywayshope thathelps, good luck.

~X~

Syrsly responds:

Hey, thanks for the review! This game is so old now, I don't think I need the feedback at this point... but thanks for the effort, anyway.

I'd post more games, but most of my Flash game dev stopped after Mochimedia shut down in 2014 and everything was mostly published through that platform rather than Newgrounds and was sent all over the web automatically. I posted said games under different accounts as I got older and kept trying to find a name that worked. Then, in 2023, I renamed my original NG account from fantasyjam to Syrsly so people can find my oldest work easily.

I'm now a professional web developer and my game dev projects in Unity almost always never get finished LOL

I'm considering publishing some new stuff someday soon on this account, so I guess time will tell if I do that. If nothing else, I'll publish something cool on Itch eventually. Just taking forever to get anything done. If you want to keep up with my work, though, you can totally follow me on Twitch.tv/syrsly or follow on Twitter at twitter.com/syrslywastaken

Have a great rest of your 2023, dude!

[Madness Scene Creator 3]

Decent game

Has all the makes of a great game, some nice "MUSIC" some nice parts to put it all together, An Irresistible taste of fire, A crowd pleaser full of energy and quality. Thats what I would sum it upo so that also tells me you know what you are doing with some good ideas and skills. You have shown how Dazzling it can be if you just add in the time and you have done just that and more, Now to Rejuvinate it to even higer levels, of excitement.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest adding even more parts and props.

~X~

F1Krazy responds:

Glad you enjoyed it! You should check out my later version, Madness Scene Creator 5, which has a lot more parts and backgrounds to play with.

[Shooter Soldier Max]

Fun game

So the game was "FUN" seems like it was a tad bit "GLICHY" it has some nice fresh looking graphics on this one you have some cool details aswell, it froze up on me at one point so you could look into that and maybe ad some medals for this game, anyways nice game here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
it froze up on me at one point so you could look into that and maybe ad some medals

~X~

metinevrenk responds:

Glad you enjoyed our game. Does it freeze everytime? Or did it happen once?

[The Gods Are Angry]

A cool game

So this was a nice game with some "NIFTY-GRAPHICS" I do think you could ad some medals and make it even more exciting, This had Attitude written all over it, it is fantastic all from the start to the finish and you gave it a personality that soared throughout, so very nice job there, I like your Technique and style on this, and you gave it some life, there isnt much more that i can say as i was pretty impressed with this whole piece. keep it real.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do think you could ad some medals and make it even more exciting

~X~

F1Krazy responds:

I don't know whether the Newgrounds medals system works within PICO-8, AFAIK it's only compatible with Flash. There's definitely ways I can spice this up, though, so thanks for the suggestions!

[The Word Is Migthier]

Cool beans

So a lot like "HANG-MAN" and that was alright, maybe adding some fancy effects would be cool, Another fun quizz here, even if I have seen a dozen of these now and again its always "FUN-TO-SEE" a new quiz or even an old one with great info this one was notbad and cant say I was the best at it but overall this was some really nice game here with some "DECENT-QUESTIONS" and answers.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe adding some fancy effects would be cool

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SolarCrystalStudios responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback

This was my very first game to be published to the web and it does contain several flaws and the GUI is poorly made. I do intend to remake this game in Unity with more features one day, as I've learnt a lot more coding and game art now.

[Eggbot vs Zombies]

A fun game here

Well this was a fun game had some loading issues at the start but overall this was a fun game here, A good game here now I did however see some stuff that could do with some extras just a few areas here and there, but mostly I like what you have here, I was pleased with your game, keep up what you are doing cause you do have some nice skills showing here on this. So as this flash is Evaluated, I find that you have the right Attitude and direction.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
had some loading issues at the start but overall this was a fun game here

~X~

EggysGames responds:

Thank you XwaynecoltX, glad you liked it. Thank you for the review :)

[Bomber Tanks]

Cool game

So this one here was a fun game, and its one of those games that you could ad some medals and make it more fun have it so theres different goals or most things destroyed for medal achievments but other then that this was a fun game, and I like the old style game here and the top view was pretty good too.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
its one of those games that you could ad some medals and make it more fun have it so theres different goals or most things destroyed for medal achievments but other then that this was a fun game

~X~

scpgames responds:

I can see about that. Sadly, this game is not my focus. I was hoping for it to be a PvP game, but it never really caught on that way. Maybe some day I'll reboot it with your suggestions. Thanks!

[clockday: B dress-up!]

Nifty game

A nifty game you have here dress ups are a "DIME-A-DOZEN" but with this one you ad your own "LITTLE-TWIST" to the game and make it unique in its own way and thats what I have enjoyed about this particular dress-up game, "LOVE-THE-PROPS" and items you have created here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra props wouldnt hurt and some backround selections would also be nice.

~X~

DoctorGordonLMK responds:

B doesn't need a background biatch

also what "LITTLE-TWIST" are you talking about?

[Mellowdy]

Cool game

So this was a cool game, the "GAMEPLAY" is pretty decent here the movment was nice this game lacks some "MEDALS" so adding some medals to this game would be a plus and make it more exciting, I enjoy this submission for what it is, it has some good potential to be even better and even more, just have to take the effort and push the ideas fourth but anyways you have the concept down now you just have to capitlize on it. so the Highlights of tis entry is that you have done it Tastefully, and there are some areas you can still Rejuvinate.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
this game lacks some "MEDALS" so adding some medals to this game would be a plus and make it more exciting

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MartinJacob responds:

Thank you :) We didn't think about adding medals, but that's definitely a consideration for our future games. Follow us to keep up !

Have a good one ~

[Azurael's Circle: Chapter 3]

Wow great game

The "EFFECTS" are notbad at all on this one, the idea of the game is pretty good and the controls are easy to handle the graphics are intense and the music fits well so really nice game here, Maybe think about adding some achievment medals for this game, And with all that said you have a pretty decent entry here, i had fun with this submission, and I do look forward to more of what you may have in store for us in the future, so keep up the good efforts, ill keep an eye out for your next entry. I got some good Satisfaction out of this flash, You have effectively got the ball rolling on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
think about adding some achievment medals for this game

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TheEnkian responds:

Thanks for playing and I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much :) Only issue with NG achievements is that the game is in HTML5 rather than Flash.