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[DATE FIGHT v1.2]

Cool game

So this was rather cool, I like the whole "MATCH" thing kind of like one of those match date things, the game itself was abit "CONFUSING" at first but I think you could make some more simple instructions and make it easier from the start, some easier medals from the start too would be nice, Alright so I will start this review off with a word and that is that this was outstanding and even a little divine but thats just because I did enjoy this, ultimately you could work more on this, And I will elaborate a little more on that later in the improvments section, butfor the most part you do have something pretty decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could make some more simple instructions and make it easier from the start, some easier medals from the start too would be nice

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BigBossErndog responds:

Thank you for the feeback! I noticed communication as to what you have to do was something people had a problem with, will definitely take this into consideration in future games :D

[ZS Dead Detective - Murder Case]

Fun game

Fun game especially as this starts off with some dialog that was pretty cool, You should have some voices with the dialog that would be one idea, the idea of the characters in "PIXEL" that was cool the music was notbad either, the "MEDALS" were cool but could see you adding even more medals, the "GRAPHICS" are really good very nice on the eyes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should have some voices with the dialog that would be one idea, Decent medal options here but seemed like there was just too little, especially when it just started getting good, you should add more medals, alot more, something to think about.

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Muja responds:

Thank you a lot for your nice review!

[Blacks Only]

Interesting

So I found this game to be somewhat interesting and I have to say the topic matter was a good one and made for a more exciting game I would love more polish on this game and more things to do and things that can generate more fun mechanic about it just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More added stuff maybe some bonus material or something

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ninjamuffin99 responds:

I will make a sequel one day or follow up or whatever

[Five Nights At Jack's Wonderland]

An interesting game

So this was an interesting game you have here, the "ART/GRAPHICS" could look smoother maybe adding some shading to the characters and improved skin tones, the same can go for props and such, but as the game itself it has some good gameplay and is overall a fun entry I do think you can improve on it and make it even bigger.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Graphics could look smoother maybe adding some shading to the characters and improved skin tones, the same can go for props and such

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daegrant1 responds:

Thank you for the suggestion!
By the way, drawing isn't my thing!

[BeachBall Fun]

Simple

Well that was rather simple but I do have to say it was fun and entertaining I do however think you can ad some extra "POLISH" like some "SHINE" on stuff here and there some more shading on some of the art and such, but honestly this was actually pretty fun and entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do however think you can ad some extra graphics polish like some shine and sparkle on stuff here and there some more shading on some of the art and such

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atlasplus1 responds:

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoy in game. :-) I have problem with game on mobile devices, so I have to optimize graphics(decrease quality) to run game on mobile phones. I agree, graphics can be better.

[Fleeing the Complex]

Very good and in depth of a game

Its always hard to start off a submission like this one, but I guess ill start off with saying this was actually a nifty piece, I like the "INTRO" at the start and you really went all out with this one and adding some "MEDALS" the gameplay was really fun I love the quick effects of what to do next, The "GRAPHICS" are very intense from line work to shades of detail so welldone there, The movie scenes with action scenes very awsome indeed, so nice work on this one, it was something differant and you added some nice elements that made me really enjoy this piece, I would love to see you expand on this even further, some minor details could be adjusted as I will explan shortly, but its a good start of a nifty submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure how you can improve on such a fantastic game with so much to do and explore it was brilliant as is, make more sometime.

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PuffballsUnited responds:

Thanks! Working on a finale now

[Own Goal Soccer]

This was pretty decent

So this was a pretty decent game these sports game have not had much success on here but for the most part this was a fun game and I like the play style but could use. More tactics with in plays and such overall it was a fun and entertaining game you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more tactics in the play style more stuff to do

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nowubeing2 responds:

its a C3Jam game... all work has been done in 30 hours...And thanks to the Jam with predetermined results, I've no desire to improve it. Hope you are inspired from this game and make a complete one, and yeah earn some MONEY!

[Pest Control]

Fun little game here

I didnt have much luck with the medals but still found this game to be entertaining it was simple and entertaining of a game the idea of the game was pretty good and it was a good time waster I do like all the different medals you have though, anyways nice little game here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was fine as is.

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AlexTheGreatish responds:

Thanks for the review! I'm surprised people are still finding this game.