XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[NSG004: Pico Jr. Jr. 0.6]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i was very entertained with it, i loved the music it was really pleasent, and the game itself was very fast paced, but very cute and funny, also very nice work on the sketch like artwork at somepoints, as for the controls it was abit tricky but got it down...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a run through the control system maybe i missed it, but for the most part it was a neat and well balanced game...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game abit tricky at first but fun and cute, aswell as nice artwork...

~X~

Bezman responds:

Cheers man!

The full game is meant to have a sort of interactive intro. After going to the toilets, Pico would come out, then the commentator (not included due to lack of time) would say you need to get back to class and a message would pop up letting you know the controls for movement. You'd start off with no gun and first you'd learn to use the bodies, then pick up the gun from the open locker and learn to shoot. Lasting maybe a minute.

That got scrapped, along with many other things. I'll maybe ask you to look at it before we submit to make any criticisms.

Danny (the programmer) did actually put in a control screen at the start though. You should see it when you click play, so maybe you clicked twice quickly by mistake or something.

Right. Review of your review.

constructive criticism/suggestions: One well explained point. More would be nice. 7/10

exposition of experience:
"a run through the control system maybe i missed it"
"as for the controls it was abit tricky but got it down..."
I get the gist of how you coped.
It'd maybe be nice to know what level you got to but enh.
7/10

praise/encouragement: You pick out a few points you liked. 8/10

clarity of expression: No problems. Though "notbad" is two words. But I only mention that for the pedantic bonus points.
10/10

elaboration & being specific: Not really any more specific than it needs to be. You do focus on the various aspects - control system, music art... maybe be nice to know a particular sketch you liked, or maybe what in particular made it cute and funny... but that's not really needed.
7/10

coverage (how much): Pretty much everything.
8/10

overall: I'd basically just like more suggestions/criticisms. I'm all about the brutally harsh criticisms, letting me know what to work on, or what to bear in mind for future.
But it was a brilliant review. You really let me know how you felt, praised and criticised. Just as a good review should.
7/10

[GIJoe Action Figure Maker]

((( WOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i love this, i never thought i would see a dress-up of "GI-JOE" i was such a fan back in the day, and im gonna add this to my faves list very nice idea, add more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more options, maybe like add different pages to flip though for much more props and stuff, anyways nice job, keep it up...

~~OVERALL~~
A great idea for a dress-up, Gi-Joe hehe...

~X~

applepwnz responds:

Thanks for the great review! I'll take your advice into consideration when I make the updated version.

[Spaceballs Soundboard]

((( DECENT COULD HAVE MMRE THOUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well here we have another soundboard, its actually funny because i love that movie, and while the quality is ok, but needs more originality to it somehow, anyways nice board...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good sound board but, make the soundboard somewhat your own, maybe adding something different then all those other soundboards and stuff, say like add a little "CLIP" from the topic matter of your board with each button, it would be different from the other boards and give yours abit more style to it.

~~OVERALL~~
A neat soundboard but needs more style to it something to call your own well sorta...

~X~

turkeybanjo responds:

thanks for the suggestions

[Trippy Triangle]

((( FUN IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was a neat idea, i was amazed at the end, abit confuesd at first because i wasent sure what i was looking at but in the end it was neat, nice idea, you should make more of these, they are very neat...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make more "PUZZLE" ideas in the flash, might make it more enjoyble and entertaining...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun idea, but could be better with more designs and all, nice flash, keep it up...

~X~

alienredwolf responds:

Wow, what a review!

If there was some sort of "review of the week" going on at Newgrounds, I'm sure this one would be like... 7th or 6th.

Gotto go watch porn.

[Clock dress w/ darx_clock]

((( VERY COOL )))

This was very cool, i like dress-ups, but this was cool because it was like a colab of dress-ups, and some of the weapons were very well done, very detail, and the music in the backround was great really made for a better dress-up, nice job...

~X~

ReklessCreati0n responds:

thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed my game :)

[Newcomer Tutorial]

((( COOL )))

It was sorta good, but could use more to it, more options, and the reason while its abit large is because you did use some screens and such, maybe cut it down somewhat or something, its an ok game but could use some improving...

~X~

remotecube responds:

thanks! Its not supposed to be a game, but I guess if thats how u see it... And ill keep the comments in mind should I every upgrade it (I know I said I would, havent gotten there yet).
At least you can understand why the filesize is large, as most people just think tis the audio, which isn't true.

[Beginner Tutorial .1]

((( NOTBAD )))

This was notbad, lots of tuts, and very "SIMPLE" but hopes it will help, they are very easy to understand so im sure they will help, anyways nice tutorial, you should make a more advanced one though...

~X~

Olly responds:

YOUR IN LICKI HAVE MADE A NEW MORE ADVANCED ONE :D