XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[IG Maker tutorial 1b]

Decent but can be improved

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this is actually not a bad tutorial, its ok one, there are alot of areas you could have improved on here, one i noticed it is all clumped and crowded up together too much stuff, maybe theres a way you can spread things out abit, as i explain below, you could also use some better use of color and addimg some new elements like borders even some better visuals would be better and show more effort on this, its actually an ok tut but could have more, also just adding more stuff to do but more on a basic way to explain to users, but really for the most of this tut it cameout well, just a few fixes here and there could make it much better, but anyways hope to see more from you real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
things are too sclumped up and crowding eachother, also a fresher color theme would be nice adding borders, and fresher looking buttons would look better and overall improve on this one,

~~OVERALL~~
An ok tutorial, could be somewhat improved with suggestions made.

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[Programming God]

Interesting and fast paced

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda neat what you have here it does somewhat teach you to type abit faster or some sorta skills like that which i thought was pretty neat for this flash, i did however think you could have added more little effects like other stuff so that it was not just the one skill thing, but for the mostpart it is pretty good i thought, i didnt get much of a high score but it was pretty good regardless, the {MUSIC} was pretty neat aswell, kinda gave that sense of feeling that you are on a mission and goal to complete it, as for ways to improve on this i suppose you could add some other options as i stated before, to make it more of a game of sorts, but anyways good flash here, i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated before i would suggest adding some more game like features so it is not just one sided and all. maybe a mini game to do after somany points and all, wouldnt hurt, anyways good luck on anything you have planned for this and future flash stuff.

~~OVERALL~~
fun and fast but could still have something more to it, anyways good luck on your next one.

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[!- Modern Sniper]

Good game i liked it

~~REVIEW~~
You have presented a good game here, its not just a straight shooter but you have to think on it, but you should add more to it though, anyways fun game, more effort in maybe some sorta mini game could be a start in the right direction, good luck regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more tests and more color used aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Fun shooter game

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[Zombies in the Shadow]

Graphics are impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Now i like this because it has that zombie style game, and its a good idea, allthought it does tend to get abit {REPETITIVE} but that was also understandble, which i liked, so notbad there, Also like that you had some decent {GRAPHICS} in the characters like the zombies, maybe abit more detail could be used on the {BACKROUNDS} though, it would have been nice and showed off more of your skills, just an idea though, and something i wouldnt mind seeing in some future works or something. The {ZOMBIES} seemed hard to kill at times, maybe figure out a way for killing them faster, Now i must say this was a fun game. kinda hard at times but still a fun game you can fix up and make things somewhat easier but other then that i was impressed with what you had here, anyways good game and keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So to start off i did mention some better enhanced backround details but not by much as it was, also maybe abit less repetitiveness would be nice, Also some new ways on killing the zombies would have been neat as it seemed hard sometimes, other then that its pretty neat and could see some changes to make it better so good luck in future zombie games and other flash animations, hope i was able to suggest a few ideas that could help you improve on this and future stuff.

~~OVERALL~~
So overall its a pretty good game, could be spruced up on a few things but not much.

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[Whack A Dicklett!]

Funny game

~~REVIEW~~
This is a good little but simple game, it kept me frustraited as i wasnted to kill those little things but i liked it, maybe by making it less hard at times like with differant levels would be nice, maybe not so hard atfirst but have it get harder later progressing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
less hard at first then progress to be harder later

~~OVERALL~~
Fun yest simple game

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[Super Adventure Game Land]

Interesting and fun game

~~REVIEW~~
Now i didnt expect so much from this game, but you presented it very well, and you showed alot more then expected as i said, This had a somewhat of a story that seemed to workout well, and some good little action, i enjoyed what you had here for us, The "GRAPHICS" were fresh and cute and had a nice feel to it something that really flow along with eachother and such, some of the things i was abit confused with such as the dragon and the princess? not so sure what was needed there, but other then those two things it was pretty fun game and has a cute style to it, The animation was cute aswell like i said it was all a cute flash/game here and i was highly entertained, on how you can improve on this, i would suggest some more action stuff happening, and also make sure everything wroks before its presented before the public, but anyways a good game here i enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more cute characters and more action happening

~~OVERALL~~
So overall a good and cute game that i think everyone will enjoy

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[The Maths quiz]

This game is abit bland

~~REVIEW~~
You have a good game here, but does tend to get abit bland, you could really spice this up though, like i noticed just all black and white, try adding some color like colored backrounds, some nifty colored buttons along with some nifty effects from the buttons, but it really does need some color, maybe even a better layout seems like you kinda just threw this one together in a short time, i bet some "FRAMES/BORDERS" around the edges woyld also spice this up some, and aslo for the quizz itself, it could be much better the questions were ok but sometimes it seems like the questions are off and such, more thought out questions would be a better choice i think, anyways better luck next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color is needed for sure, also better looking buttons along with some effects and last but not least some better questions

~~OVERALL~~
A fun short quiz game, simple and entertaining

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[america off-line]

This was fun i see some improving needed

~~REVIEW~~
The graphics were not the best but the game itself had a somewhat fun style and you did have some ok animation here so notbad, so ofcourse the graphics art style need more detail little shades more sketchty feel to it might even work, add more of that fun style i was talking about to keep the game balanced and fun for the players

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I said to work more on some detail points of the art and such, but still maintaining the skill fun of the game

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game can bet better still needs some art detail

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